This game gets a solid 3 stars from me and only is completion will decide if I go up or down. So let's start,
Renders 3/5: It's hard to impress me here rarely do I go above a 3. They aren't the greatest but far from the worst.
Story 2/5: I docked some points pretty hardcove on this, not because I thought it was terrible, but because it's stereotypical, overdone and unbelievable. The intro Set the tone for my opinion and it's going to take alot to get me to change my mind here. It would be one thing if Alice fucked Mark for his protection, but to turn on her own son completely at that age over an obvious bully and liar? Yup that's going too far. Not to mention Mark is nothing more than the Stereotypical Alpha BBC antagonist Trope with the magical dick that turns women stupid. Yeah that one is WAY over done. Secondly for the story most of the paths are Mark focused or tie into Mark the hero some how, The Dev clearly wants you to like him, well too bad, Mark is the character I like the least, No matter how you justify it he's scum, he picks on the weak, he cheats, he's a murderer, he's a criminal, he's a liar and he's a manipulator.
The None Mark paths are hit and miss, so the story is only deserving of 2 out of 5.
Characters 3/5:
I'll rate each primary character.
Angel 5/5: She had a lot of porno stereotypes in her appearance but her character is a believable one. The only Character that isn't following complete garbage Tropes and that had any sense of morality. Her struggle is one that I can believe and she quickly became the best character in the story.
Mark 1/5: This character is such an over used Trope it's not even funny. His character is completely boring and predictable.
Henry 2/5: Henry is almost as bad as Mark as far as Tropes go and predictability. He's very unlikable but given how he was literally tormented by not only his best friend but also his own mother and girlfriend I think he deserves to have some emotional scars that are far worst than just some of his cuck behaviors. That being said Henry paths do offer him a few redemption arcs in the eyes of Angelica which start to make him a slightly less worst character than Mark. Moving on....
Aria 3/5: I want to score Aria higher but as previously pointed out, Aria has no concept of love yet claims she's so in love with her best friend Angel. Aria is also a cheater and a liar so even on her paths she ends up being worst than Mark and Henry, the only reason why she scores higher than then is because the rest of her personality is believable and she isn't an overused Trope.
The game isn't finished and I reserve the right to change my opinion as well as my Ratings, what I think would help alot is giving Angelica her own Revenge path. It's clear that everyone with the exception of Henry is trying to use her and steal her affections away and bring her back into the trama that her condition has caused her. In other words they don't actually care that much about her only care what they can get from her. If she had a path where she figured it out and used this knowledge against them, learning the truth about Mark and Henry's past and deciding that she would get justice for her husband on his behalf by stealing Marks Harem from him and forcing him to go through all kinds of humiliations in the process, while simultaneously Doming Aria and using her as her personal play toy for her and Henry teaching her the lesson, "becareful what you wish for, you just might get it". This would fulfill NTR, Cheating. Swinging, Dom Sub and a bunch of other fetishes while sticking true to the characters and the story. After all it doesn't matter how "Alpha" Mark is, it's clearly stated that Angelica is better at it, has power over him and someone he is actually in love with, what could be more humiliating than the woman he loves helping the man he looks down on steal the rest of the women away from them, each one waking up from the fantasy he had them in figuring out how he used them for his own interests and they all turn on him one at a time until the last one when Angelica comes for Alice, time to be a good mommy for once.
Food for thought! The game is still enjoyable and has some great experiences to out it's definitely worth a play.