VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Anita's Discoveries [v1.0] [Pigeon Pleasure]

I don't know what to think of it....i have mixed feelings. I like the quality of render for sure, and the sexual tension between the 2 is hot. And the body on that girl is so hhhoootttt, but i don't know what it is.... but something is missing to be a 5 stars. Maybe because everything went way to fast.... 2 days and he already cum in her mouth.... but i love how it happend.... the way she teased him and got on her knees in front of him.

Good job .... can't wait for the rest

Very hot, nice art, the story is just fine for a little demo. A few grammar issues but not to much. The daughter is perfect, in I hope the next stuff still keeps her around, basically unchanged. I'm excited to see the future of this Dev!

The writing style is jarring because there's actually two protagonists and you switch between their thoughts in sudden fashion. The only good thing is that the character models look nice. There's almost no dialogue as it's just the stepdad and stepdaughter thinking their thoughts for 95% of this short story. The stepdad is kind of of pussy... There's an old pervert clearly stalking his stepdaughter and even takes creep shots of her with his phone and even though he sees all this happening, he thinks the best idea is just to walk away and let him have his fun. I think most dads and non-pussy MC's would use this moment to intervene and make a scene.

This is a short prequel for the (hopefully) yet to come main story. It is a proof of concept by the author, if you will, to gauge reception. I loved it, though it left me wanting to see much more of these two characters, which is the point of this short story.

Anita mentions several times her group of friends and discussions they have had concerning their respective fathers and them perving on the daughters. I am hoping that as Anita's is an honorable fellow, Anita will talk highly of him to the other daughters and that they will join Anita in sexual romps with her father in the very near future.

First off: it's not a bad game 3 stars is 60% that is a pass.

I actually liked the Female MC, the Male MC was also nice, but ulitimately I felt the story went nowhere.

Yes it was a nice tease, but if it were meant as just a tease, it failed since
If it were a meant to be a realistic tease, then it should have stopped before that point. If it were meant as a porn tease, well it stopped far short of a satisfying ending.

A good realistic tease is much more subtle then this short story, but a porn type tease should have amuch more satisfactory ending IMO.

So I was left feeling disappointed after playing the game. It feels as if this game tried to cater for realism, but with also some porn cliche' like loosing her panty when falling into the water. Trying to go for both did not really do it for me. Rather go full on realistic (much more subtle) or go full out on porn clichés where they end up banging like rabbits.

I liked the MC male and females.
Character models were good.
Redering for me were average mostly.
Premise was good, but ended up dissapoining for me.

Anita is very nicely done. Love her looks, innocent and appealing, and her naughty mind. The (step)dad sure is ok as well. He's not a creep, just a regular guy. So, this is about normal people who could be my neighbours which for me adds realism (and thus excitement).

The story is short but well told. Compliments for that. The renders are really good too so I sure hope this pigeon will pleasure us with a follow-up

This was nice, I didn't mind the visuals of the characters at all. It was actually pretty good. The story was hot with all the teasing, flashing and the urges they both had which made them unable to constrain their feelings. I especially liked that silent confrontation at the end. Keep up the good work, will definately check it out again.

TL;DR great teaser

Story: 4/5
+ Heroine is discovering her sexuality. She teases some strangers and her (step)dad. Its prety entertaining to watch.
- Unfortunately this is only some teaser to author's posible future project and thats why its very short.

Art: 4/5
+ Main heroine is really hot.
+ Art is good.
- Unfortunately there isnt any sex ingame. All the teasing and undressing end up only in dual masturbation and cumshot at daughter's face.
- I didnt like overattention on dad's dick. In final masturbation scene it was always in front of camera. During BJ or sex its normal, but watching a guy jerking off his dick? Too much is too much.

Gameplay: 2/5
- It's pretty straightforward Kinetic Novel without any choices.
- It's very short. I think around 20 minutes.
- English grammar has very small mistakes occasionally. It's really minor and doesnt break immersion.

To sum it up:
I really liked this. I think future updates or projects have big pontential. It's good idea to follow this author and check his future work.

Obviously this was a teaser for what is to come so there is going to be a lack of content. I think its a really great teaser game as well. It was really hot and anita is very cute.

I wasn't a huge fan of the way it was narrated. I mean it was different and I kind of liked the whole idea of hearing what they were thinking. But, it felt like the whole thing was basically being read like a book. (Some might go "well duh its a visual novel its suppose to be read like a book.) Well, then this is definitely the first time I have played a visual novel that was read and written exactly like a book.

I don't think this was a negative thing though I thought it was interesting unique and different. I just wasn't a huge fan of it. I wonder if the real game will be like that as well.

I would still play it even if it was. Either way teaser is worth playing. But, I would say its more like 15 minutes of gameplay rather then 45 unless you are intentionally taking a lot of time on each text.

This game is short and more like a teaser, the half hour for reading is optimistic. To say it straight to the point: the graphic is top and the way how the storyline develop is very good. This game can become real great if the story get more substance, choices should be added into the plot and a deeper relationship should grow between the both main characters. For now 5 of 5 stars from my side.

Excellent visual novel. loved every aspect of it . wished it was more of a sexual finality to it all but the end leaves more to be desired in a gd way. like a sequel perhaps. anyone keeping an eye on the dev since this got my attention. hopefully we get more from them.