VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.16] [DeepSleep]

[Latex224]

Thanks for this, it felt like a massive plot hole thinking she had already banged her school teacher before this virgin-story lol

No problem.

I was also thinking that around the plot. So that is why I had to replay the other novels to see what had happen in those, so that is what I figured out was the most logical on what happen.

Now I feel that there is a "big" question though.. Because in the short novel Rebecca says to Anna that she and her boyfriend (now ex) and the "Name the dude" character will leave for Sun City, and also that "Name the Guy" dude had some personal/family things he needed to take care of.. And now Anna lives in the same city too so will this open the possibility for Anna to have an reunion down the line?

 

[Zane11]

And now Anna lives in the same city too so will this open the possibility for Anna to have an reunion down the line?

You mean a reunion in the main game? Personally I hope not, because we are already quite stretched with multiple paths, don't see the need to add another character that is not exactly the peak of interest.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Anna pregnant plz

It's pointless her getting pregnant, because it will never show in the game. It's all in real time, all the events have so far taken place over a five and a half week period. Which would mean it would have to last for another 3 months at least, before Anna would even show slightly. That's if she got pregnant immediately. Which is unlikely, because it can take weeks if not months, before the effects of the contraceptive pill wear off enough, for a woman to realistically get pregnant.

But even if you ignored that and let her get pregnant in the next update, it still wouldn't make any difference. Because the game will have ended, long before Anna showed any signs of being pregnant. Deep has already stated though, that at least in one of the endings Anna will get pregnant. But it won't happen during the actual gameplay.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

No problem.

I was also thinking that around the plot. So that is why I had to replay the other novels to see what had happen in those, so that is what I figured out was the most logical on what happen.

Now I feel that there is a "big" question though.. Because in the short novel Rebecca says to Anna that she and her boyfriend (now ex) and the "Name the dude" character will leave for Sun City, and also that "Name the Guy" dude had some personal/family things he needed to take care of.. And now Anna lives in the same city too so will this open the possibility for Anna to have an reunion down the line?

Anna's First Time is set over 4 years prior to her arrival in Sun City. So is it likely he's still there? He seemed to be a bit of a wanderer. So it's very likely after he completed his 'business' in Sun City, he moved on. Did he even return the following summer, like he promised Anna at the end of the short novel?

She doesn't start dating Andrew for another 3 years, so it's possible they have other encounters in the future, whilst Anna is still living in her home town. Bearing in mind she's obviously sexually experienced by the time Hard Exam comes around, it seems a real possibility she had further encounters with this guy. She also dated Emily's brother at some point. So he's another likely former sexual partner.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

You mean a reunion in the main game? Personally I hope not, because we are already quite stretched with multiple paths, don't see the need to add another character that is not exactly the peak of interest.

It seems more likely to me, he'll return in another short novel, set during the following summer. That's what was suggested at the end. Plus if you put him in the main game, you'd have to give him a specific name, and he'd no longer be the protagonist either.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I agree with those who said this short novel is boring because it was. way too vanilla , wholesome, bland, safe and boring like "Being a Dik''... I'm dissapointed.

That's exactly what Anna was supposed to be. She's basically a hot looking super nerd. Why do you think she ended up with Andrew? It wasn't because she was a bad girl, it was because she wanted to be the opposite of that.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Actually this game has only one main path that is Jeremy live because is the one with more content and not only sex content (the alternative is about the same but without sex scenes with Jeremy) and maybe also the sauna contract with asan busness men is censored!
There is a way to create more paths inside the bar but this will cause that they have to create 2 different scenes for any event

...unless it will just be an on/off switch for NO sex in the bar or YES sex in the bar....
but in that case this are not two real paths
it just becomes a path with less scenes and content...

In the case the 2 paths are just a switch ON/OFF the time for new update will be almost the same.

I'm not sure what you mean there. Because there are two paths in the Bar now. In the last update with Bar Content, there were two completely different scenes involving Anna, Emily, Ron and Leslie. Both scenes started the same, but after a while diverged completely. One ( the Bar Whore route) leading to a foursome scene, and the other ( the Bar Management route) leading to an extended lesbian scene, and ending with a shootout, where Patrick, Ron and Leslie all die.

The Dead Jeremy route has has several sex scenes ( mainly involving Anna and Diane) which don't appear on the other route. So you're wrong about that as well.

There are also two completely different paths in the hospital. One involving Schmitt carrying out sexual research on Anna, which may eventually lead to a cure for her condition, and one which will ultimately include Cary having sexual adventures with Anna (I have a feeling that Cary has a similar condition to Anna).

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Because she’s young and naive she sees no problem in how she dresses

Or because she's on a farm in the middle of nowhere, it's a really hot day, and she's not expecting to see anyone besides her grandfather, who obviously isn't going to try and take advantage of her.

When she goes to the camp later on, she changes into an outfit that is a lot more conservative. Which is probably how she dresses most of the time. When she expects to be around other people.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

so this short novel is when she was 18th and virgin?
she finished the school

And in Hard Exam 1 and 2? she was 17th and totally deflowered?

Ok... maybe she asked the surgeon to have her pussy stitched up
or she was rejected and had to repeat the school year after the summer with her grandpa

PS: her hairstyle in the CH2 SUCKS!

No you got it wrong. In Hard Exam she's in college and several years older.

 

[88stanford88]

This short novel is set before any of the others. I know this, because during a conversation about Hard Exam on the Discord Channel, I suggested it might be cool to have another short novel which covered Anna losing her virginity. It would feature a younger Anna, before the events depicted in Hard Exam. Deep liked this idea, and decided to hold a poll, with a few other ideas for a short novel thrown in.

The fact the Deep is taking ideas from other means that he is out of ideas!
Discord is not the center of the world and make a discussion like the one you had on discord just to make acceptable what doesn't make sense

In Hard Exam she's in her junior year at college, and she's trying to get a scholarship for her senior year. In other words it's set over 2 years after the events of Anna's First Time ( she's possibly 21). In Hard Exam 2, Andrew is in his senior year at college, and we know he's one year older than Anna, so she must be at the end of her junior year. Hard Exam took place a few weeks prior to Hard Exam 2.

Normally the exams where the students struggle to get a high grade like A+ to get the scholarship (this is in hard exam)
Hard exam is located in a High School
HIGH SCHOOL ends at the age of 18 and they are Hard exams specially focused on get a place in a prestigious college like

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etc etc... those exams decide if you can go to university also it is not possible for a student to have a scholarship at the age of 21 in fact the degree arrives around the age of max 23/24

IN HARD EXAMS SHE TALKS ABOUT SCOLARSHIP so she is not in a COLLEGE!
SCHOLARSHIP REQUIREMENTS ARE: maximum 18 Years old!

High school uniforms are not worn to college if a girl wore such a uniform going to college she would be laughed at and humiliated

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you are wrong also about Andrew! Here in the PART 1 when Anna is starting to fuck Mr. Thompson ans she compare the size of his cock with Andrew
So Andrew is in the same high school or she is dating a college student!

THIS IS HAR EXAMS PART 1 and part2 is just some day after the part1
In the part 2 she was blackmailed by the Janitor or the scholl director due to avoid losing the scholarship
Anna "Hard exams" is set in the exams that are required to go to college so she has 17/18th that are the only one when a student can hope to have a SCHOLARSHIP!

If "Anna First Time" was located before the "HARD EXAM"....
.... she lost her virginity when she was 15/16 years old only in this case the story becomes much more believable.
(usually 16 years the perfect age to lost the virginity for a girl that lives

I suggested it might be cool to have another short novel which covered Anna losing her virginity. It would feature a younger Anna, before the events depicted in Hard Exam. Deep liked this idea, and decided to hold a poll, with a few other ideas for a short novel thrown in.

so you are the one responsible of this non mess
If Deep liked the idea is ok but this story is a NON-CANON o
I understand the patreon rules that Anne cannot hae 15th or 16th but this is the normal age for loosing virginity...

hope Deep soon realizes the mistake he is making by listening to your suggestions which may be the cause of the delay of the updates

will delay the next update of the main game by 2-3 months. My guess is they've also been working on the main game simultaneously.

So I was hoping for just 2 months delay
you said 3????

This is big disaster in the logic of Anna storyline!
I will take a look in the Deep patreon ranking just in case!
I also do not understand why "Anna First Time" was posted in this thread... it was an error... because all Deep short stories have separate thread from this one
why this stupid non sense short story is in the "Anna Exiting Affection" thread!!!
DOES THIS MEAN ANNA EXCITING AFFECTION IS CHANGING HER AUDIENCE?

and yes" this game is STUPID... I will think about supporting Deep again for soo long!

Good luck with your non-sense suggestions that are making a mess in a story that was a masterpiece!

 

[88stanford88]

ANNA in "Hard Exams" is a teen-age about 17/18th

End she was not virgin at that time she was Andew girlfriend since years because Andrew is already in the college when she fucks with her theacher to get her scholarship

Scholarships are not available for students with more that 18th!

 

[Cinthia-girl]

Why this short novel is in the same thread with AEA CH1 and CH2?
I think there is something wrong! or it isn't?

 

[Sadowdark]

This short story can be interpreted as follows: Anna, after completing her exams at university, came to visit her grandfather? or after school she came to visit her grandfather on vacation

 

[Sadowdark]

ANNA in "Hard Exams" is a teen-age about 17/18th

End she was not virgin at that time she was Andew girlfriend since years because Andrew is already in the college when she fucks with her theacher to get her scholarship

Scholarships are not available for students with more that 18th!

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spoiler tag you could use !!!

 

[feng156]

Saves

 

[88stanford88]

This short story can be interpreted as follows: Anna, after completing her exams at university, came to visit her grandfather? or after school she came to visit her grandfather on vacation

this is not what the author writen in the start of CH1
She was motherless (like tons of PornStar) infact she is now also a pornstar


it was not her grandfather


it was her Dad!
she is a young lady 22/23 years old! maybe 21 the college can be made in just 3 years

This short story can be interpreted as follows: Anna, after completing her exams at university, came to visit her grandfather? or after school she came to visit her grandfather on vacation

you are the one who do spoiler here
grandfather was never mentioned in the CH1

( the Bar Management route) leading to an extended lesbian scene,

Anna is not lesbian ... so this path is stupid and does't fit with Anna storyline in th CH1
I play this game as chapter 2 of "Anna Exciting affections" Anna has lesbo scene only occasionally with her sister Rebecca (incest lesbo) and maybe Emily just during some thresome with DICKs

This short novel is set before any of the others.

So she has less than 18th and Summer is after the school days not before

Why this short novel is in the same thread with AEA CH1 and CH2?
I think there is something wrong! or it isn't?

spoiler tag you could use !!!

I do not use spoiler tag for pics that was released over than 3 years ago
and...
Why this short novel is in the same thread ?
I have an idea about it... there is for sure a reason related with at least one of the Endings
and this is maybe a spoiler with logic deduction

but no one said me this... it is just my logic interpretation of this not so smart shor story written by Zara Scarlet
i will call David the Biker the biker that fucked Anna when she was younger than 18th...
The fact that the player has to write his name on that guy makes me think that this short novel has a male MC... and this is another of the tons of non sense in this story...

I know many girls who play this game it would be interesting to know why they decided to create a boy and not a girl with the need to write the name ... (perhaps Zara thinks this game is only for boys? or she/he is jealous of Andrew?)
I think she/he hates Andrew a lot in any case! (poor boy cucked and killed by a suggestion

Anyway I bet that Zara suggest to Deep to do this side story just for add in a near future an ending
of Anna's redemption where Prince Charming David riding his sparkling Harley Davidson will save Anna from becoming a total whore (even if she is already one) and David and Anna will live happily forever ... but she will have to renounce her past and she won't be able to fuck anyone else anymore. .. Anna will only be able to fuck with David the Biker.

unfortunately as happens in the best stories ----
Andrew makes a full recovery and reports to the police that "David the Biker" raped Anna when she was only 15 years old (it was Anna who told Andrew about the summer with David the Biker"years earlier when they were still in high school) and will be sentenced to 16 years of jail like Harvey Weinstein ...
finally Andrew will live cuckold and happy with his beloved Anna who fucks with everyone but he pretends nothing for her love affection...
Andrew know perfectly that Anna has "exciting affections" for the big dicks!

the title is not exiting affection in the singular
the word is in the title for a reason and it is affections which is plural... that0s meaning she loves a plurality of cocks!

 

[Sadowdark]

Anna after one drink so drunk she doesn't know she's drinking from an empty glass. That drink must have been awfully strong.Have you noticed that Anna gets an empty glass and then pretends to drink from an empty glass. And that she spilled the empty contents on her blouse. Only I have no trace on a dry blouse that it is wet.

 

[wabenna]

Infected by Trojan:Script/Wacatac.H!ml

 

[Sadowdark]

this is not what the author writen in the start of CH1

it was not her grandfather

it was her Dad!


you are the one who do spoiler here
grandfather was never mentioned in the CH1

I do not use spoiler tag for pics that was released over than 3 years ago

I didn't say Ch1. Only about Hard Exam and anna the first time. I didn't know you used spoilers like that.You just know that new people will come and they will want to play it and they will be pissed when they see your posts and tell you who gave them a spoiler.

 

[88stanford88]

I didn't say Ch1. Only about Hard Exam and anna the first time. I didn't know you used spoilers like that.You just know that new people will come and they will want to play it and they will be pissed when they see your posts and tell you who gave them a spoiler.

That's good the new people will know the history about how DeepSleep released the Anna stories and prequels!
it is not a spoiler is just a recap of the real story as the author wrote Like <tacos> Anna Original Story! because i think Deep is making the same mistake and story is getting out of his hands as Mircom