VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.16] [DeepSleep]

[88stanford88]

Christmas

The red shoes don't fit with the outfit imo but the animation is fire

red shoes are not a big problem

I've never seen a model on the catwalk with a fixed hairstyle that doesn't follow the movements and the wind... I must repeat the hairstyle is stiff like a very heavy skein of thread... the hair must float. .. the models always have tight and tied up hairstyles... or in the case of a show for high quality shampoo... they must be free and floating

looks like she hasn't washed her hair for weeks

 

[ZWAPPP]

Full Save Please

 

[LochRaven]

Christmas

red shoes are not a big problem

I've never seen a model on the catwalk with a fixed hairstyle that doesn't follow the movements and the wind... I must repeat the hairstyle is stiff like a very heavy skein of thread... the hair must float. .. the models always have tight and tied up hairstyles... or in the case of a show for high quality shampoo... they must be free and floating

looks like she hasn't washed her hair for weeks

lol ok dude we get it, you don't like her hair.

 

[rajawat_akhil]

Wow

 

[homejorz]

What's the short novel about?

 

[Firebeast]

Loosing her virginity... It's tender and hot.

What's the short novel about?

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Christmas

red shoes are not a big problem

I've never seen a model on the catwalk with a fixed hairstyle that doesn't follow the movements and the wind... I must repeat the hairstyle is stiff like a very heavy skein of thread... the hair must float. .. the models always have tight and tied up hairstyles... or in the case of a show for high quality shampoo... they must be free and floating

looks like she hasn't washed her hair for weeks

She washes her hair…. with everybody’s cum

 

[88stanford88]

She washes her hair…. with everybody’s cum

Oooo that's why when I met her Anna's hair was so sticky and smelled like cum...
Surely no model in the world would walk the runway with that sticky braided bush on her head

 

[88stanford88]

What's the short novel about?

it is a non canon first time sex made under useless patreon suggestion!

Anna has lost her virginity before 18th... when she was living with her father (she was motherless because her mother divorced by living abroad)
if you want to know the prequel of Anna Exitibg affections check this post and the following related in the previous page

https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357426

 

[khantus]

it is a non canon first time sex made under useless patreon suggestion!

Anna has lost her virginity before 18th... when she was living with her father (she was motherless because her mother divorced by living abroad)
if you want to know the prequel of Anna Exitibg affections check this post and the following related in the previous page

https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10357426

The suggestion was made in his discord, in patreon Deep made a poll with several options and the one that got the most votes was: Anna lose her virginity.
Deep commented that the other options will come at some point, the one that got the second place was the continuation of Hard Exam.

 

[FMag]

This is simply my opinion, but I think most of the people who voted for Anna's first time (myself included) was thinking about something completely different. I mean, look how far she went. Before this novel we already knew about the farm and her grandfather, so when I voted for it I was thinking about something more "dirty", like a hidden side of Anna which comes to light after her accident. Her grandpa taking her flower (obviously) or selling it to one of his friends for paying a poker debt, a bully at school, ... Idk why we get this "vanilla" thing.

 

[MishelHappiness^_^]

This is simply my opinion, but I think most of the people who voted for Anna's first time (myself included) was thinking about something completely different. I mean, look how far she went. Before this novel we already knew about the farm and her grandfather, so when I voted for it I was thinking about something more "dirty", like a hidden side of Anna which comes to light after her accident. Her grandpa taking her flower (obviously) or selling it to one of his friends for paying a poker debt, a bully at school, ... Idk why we get this "vanilla" thing.

I was also very disappointed, such a disappointment from this game I did not expect, you could come up with so much and we got so banal and vanilla story that I want to vomit

 

[khantus]

This is simply my opinion, but I think most of the people who voted for Anna's first time (myself included) was thinking about something completely different. I mean, look how far she went. Before this novel we already knew about the farm and her grandfather, so when I voted for it I was thinking about something more "dirty", like a hidden side of Anna which comes to light after her accident. Her grandpa taking her flower (obviously) or selling it to one of his friends for paying a poker debt, a bully at school, ... Idk why we get this "vanilla" thing.

I agree with you, but due to Patreon's policies, incest was not possible.
But as you rightly say, the grandfather could have sold Anna's virginity to a friend of his or to the bad boy at school, whom Anna will despise but will secretly turn her on.
I had also voted for the loss of Anna's virginity, but at the last minute I changed my vote because I began to suspect that Deep would make a quieter novel without much perversion, although it never hurts to vary a little.
Personally I liked this short novel but I would have preferred something more morbid.

 

[88stanford88]

The suggestion was made in his discord, in patreon Deep made a poll with several options and the one that got the most votes was: Anna lose her virginity.

The poll was wrong... for me is very clear in the start of CH1 and the already developed short Novel that Anna was not virgin at the high school (or college for teens)... and in any case the fact that she was raised by her alcoholic father implies that her father abused her! This shows that taking a poll with the wrong parameters is always a disaster especially with a character with a past outlined by years in all the games where she is the MC it is clear to all her fans that she has obtained the degree using sex because she was not virgin in the school times she took care of everything not having reliable parents and managed to graduate against all expectations. She is the perfect HEROINE!
(The only one who doesn't know that Anna is a total slut is Andrew)

It would be interesting to know who suggested (I think I know who is in the previous post someone already admitted that) to Deep to include Anna's virginity in the poll about a story where it was clear that at that age Anna was not a virgin!

Those who vote don't know the rules that prohibit creating games for adults with underage characters... I think those who voted wanted to know at what age Anna was deflowered without saying that the story wouldn't have made any sense due to the rules about age restrictions!

Deep commented that the other options will come at some point, the one that got the second place was the continuation of Hard Exam.

Hard Exam continuation was the real winner of that poll!!!... because the story of Anna "first time" cannot be writted due to the age restrictions!
Maybe is required a patch for apply the real age of that dumb Anna... Maybe a patch is required to apply the real age of the dumb Anna in this non sense short novel... She was never so Dumb in all the previous games

I agree with you, but due to Patreon's policies, incest was not possible.

Not true... All incest games cums with a mod patch and/or the ability of the player to write the degree of relationship of the characters
Step-father step-grandpa step-mom and so on!

the grandfather could have sold Anna's virginity to a friend of his or to the bad boy at school, whom Anna will despise but will secretly turn her on.

Non sense!
She was with Andrew at the school .... she tricked that bad boy for some reason ...maybe to cover her grandpa and her dad that was fucking her since years!... but she sure as hell wasn't a virgin.

I had also voted for the loss of Anna's virginity, but at the last minute I changed my vote because I began to suspect that Deep would make a quieter novel without much perversion, although it never hurts to vary a little.

Also you had doubt after voting ..So your not-wanted vote makes the disaster
but I can understand you... Zara was the real cause because she convinced everyone!
I hope that from now on you and all others including Deep understand that she has one purpose to change Anna's character.. and the Audiance!
This will cause the loss of many supporters who love Anna as she was in the old episodes

This short novel is a mess and Anna is unrecognizable!
She is no more Anna!

 

[88stanford88]

There was a DOUBLE DISASTER whit the release of this useless short non-cannon novel that dosen't fit with the original Anna character.

NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER 3 MONTHS BEFORE the next update of the great MAIN STORY (with Jeremy alive) being released... if everything goes well!
This short Novel must be deleted or is at least required a good additional introduction that explain why Anna is no more herself!

Damn! the CH1 was so perfect... and as soon as I looked at her shitty-hair-style I knew right away that the story was going to the wrong side.

 

[Sadowdark]

There was a DOUBLE DISASTER whit the release of this useless short non-cannon novel that dosen't fit with the original Anna character.

NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER 3 MONTHS BEFORE the next update of the great MAIN STORY (with Jeremy alive) being released... if everything goes well!
This short Novel must be deleted or is at least required a good additional introduction that explain why Anna is no more herself!

Damn! the CH1 was so perfect... and as soon as I looked at her shitty-hair-style I knew right away that the story was going to the wrong side.

When you take the game too seriously

 

[88stanford88]

I always read the dialogs in the game i like, and CH1 was perfect I love erotic stories well written...

not to mention we all look forward to a great gangbang at the Bar with a memorable strip tease in the club where Anna works as an entertainer but....
by the way whats happened at the strip club that was in the back of the bar in CH1?


A story without logic becomes like as useless porn-movie without plot.. which is not good for fapping either

 

[Deleted member 4752509]

When you take the game too seriously

There are definitely downsides when it comes to Ch2. I thought I was the only one criticizing this game but I see others think the same and no normal person takes porn games seriously. In Ch1 Anna looked much better, now she has a face as if she had Down syndrome.

 

[Sadowdark]

There are definitely downsides when it comes to Ch2. I thought I was the only one criticizing this game but I see others think the same and no normal person takes porn games seriously. In Ch1 Anna looked much better, now she has a face as if she had Down syndrome.

Not to mention the hairstyle

 

[khantus]

The poll was wrong... for me is very clear in the start of CH1 and the already developed short Novel that Anna was not virgin at the high school (or college for teens)... and in any case the fact that she was raised by her alcoholic father implies that her father abused her! This shows that taking a poll with the wrong parameters is always a disaster especially with a character with a past outlined by years in all the games where she is the MC it is clear to all her fans that she has obtained the degree using sex because she was not virgin in the school times she took care of everything not having reliable parents and managed to graduate against all expectations. She is the perfect HEROINE!
(The only one who doesn't know that Anna is a total slut is Andrew)

It would be interesting to know who suggested (I think I know who is in the previous post someone already admitted that) to Deep to include Anna's virginity in the poll about a story where it was clear that at that age Anna was not a virgin!

Those who vote don't know the rules that prohibit creating games for adults with underage characters... I think those who voted wanted to know at what age Anna was deflowered without saying that the story wouldn't have made any sense due to the rules about age restrictions!


Hard Exam continuation was the real winner of that poll!!!... because the story of Anna "first time" cannot be writted due to the age restrictions!
Maybe is required a patch for apply the real age of that dumb Anna... Maybe a patch is required to apply the real age of the dumb Anna in this non sense short novel... She was never so Dumb in all the previous games

Not true... All incest games cums with a mod patch and/or the ability of the player to write the degree of relationship of the characters
Step-father step-grandpa step-mom and so on!

Non sense!
She was with Andrew at the school .... she tricked that bad boy for some reason ...maybe to cover her grandpa and her dad that was fucking her since years!... but she sure as hell wasn't a virgin.


Also you had doubt after voting ..So your not-wanted vote makes the disaster
but I can understand you... Zara was the real cause because she convinced everyone!
I hope that from now on you and all others including Deep understand that she has one purpose to change Anna's character.. and the Audiance!
This will cause the loss of many supporters who love Anna as she was in the old episodes

This short novel is a mess and Anna is unrecognizable!
She is no more Anna!

That's right, Anna is a true heroine because of all the adversities she went through in her past and still came out ahead.

Now, regarding the patch, historically Deep has never used a patch, why would he use it now? Although it is something that can't be ruled out in the future, if his patreons push him.

On the other hand, I don't think there is some culprit in all this, rather it's like FMag said most people voted for Anna's first time because they thought of something completely different and that was the reason why that option won.

It is clear that Deep wanted at least Anna's first time to be tender and romantic, all the kinky stuff is in the two chapters of the main story, but also Deep could have given the player the option to choose with whom Anna would lose her virginity, if with the grandfather by staying at home with him and that would lead to rough sex or with the motorcycle guy as it happens in the short novel, although that would have taken more time.

Regarding the story, Deep commented that there would be certain modifications to the story of the short novel, but I honestly don't think that will happen.

I think we shouldn't take the story of the short novels or the main story so seriously, it's just a game that doesn't necessarily have to have a certain logic, but it shouldn't be something so simple either, let's just enjoy watching Anna have sex with everyone.