VN Ren'Py Anna Exciting Affection [Ch.2 Ep.18] [DeepSleep]

[MishelHappiness^_^]

Andrew collaborated in kidnapping her sister. If your partner kidnapped a member of your family for whatever reason, wouldn't you be upset about it? Alright Anna is cheating on Andrew, and if he knew about it, I'm guessing he'd be very upset about it. But he doesn't know about it. As far as he's concerned she's still his loving and faithful girlfriend. So he's not even done it to get even. He's done it because he's basically a louse and a complete idiot.

Even if he did know about Anna cheating on him. Yeah, that would be bad from Andrew's perspective. And he'd be well within his rights to be very angry with Anna. But kidnapping someone is whole other level above cheating on a partner. And when the person you kidnap, just happens to be the closest family member of your partner. Well that's just evil. So yeah Anna does have a right to demand an explaination, regardless of what she's done herself. Even if it wasn't her sister, it would still have been an incredibly nasty and stupid act

The whole branch where andrew kidnaps rebecca is stupid, it's a shame that DeepSleep didn't give us a choice to make a more logical choice.

 

[MishelHappiness^_^]

I understand you don't like the direction of the game, but if you think Deepsleep is going to magically change the entire direction of this game, and suddenly transform both Anna and Andrew into completely different characters, you are sadly mistaken. The patrons can only influence a very small part of the game. 95% of it, is and always will be Deepsleep's creation. Anna and Andrew are the way they are, because Deep wanted them to be that way. And nothing you or I, or anybody else for that matter, will ever change that.

Andrew is a pathetic loser because Deepsleep intended for him to be one. His sole purpose in the game, is to be the schmuck that Anna cheats on. It's not just to do with the size of his penis, he's also immature, lazy and an idiot. His only saving grace is that he seems to genuinely love Anna. But that won't be enough to keep Anna with him

Up until the end of Chapter 1, Deep fully intended for Anna to eventually dump Andrew. I mean he set him up to be the loser, didn't he. Since then Awake has joined as the main writer, and he persuaded Deep to eventually create a new route, where Anna gives Andrew another chance. This will be what they are calling the Renaissance Route, and on that route only, Anna and Andrew in particular will both change a lot, giving them the chance to end the game together. So if you're an Andrew supporter, you will eventually get what you want, a happy ending for Anna and Andrew.

Exactly what form that happy ending is going to take though, I have no idea. It's impossible to deny that Anna has changed significantly since the game started, and even if she gets cured of her condition, we're not going to get a full reset of her personality. My guess is, both of them will have to make compromises and Andrew in particular will have to make major changes to his mindset, and accept that Anna is no longer the pure woman that he put on a pedestal.

On all the other routes though, they will continue to drift further apart, and eventually Anna will dump Andrew.

I don't want to offend you, but you are a very hypocritical person, there are many rumors about you and your influence on this game(Please don't write hypocritical words about how it's disrespectful to say that someone could have influenced DeepSleep and the history of the game, because you know it's not true.). Now as for andrew, it seems to me that your hatred for this character is due to jealousy and envy, you just can't understand how a beautiful woman like Anna could choose an idiot like andrew (of course DeepSleep made him an idiot, everyone understands that and I dont have problems with it, but looking at other caricature characters, andrew is still a good choice and a good ending for Anna).

 

[Zara Scarlet]

The game does have the avenue of Anna possibly gettin' quick Las Vegas married to Alfred (for some sort of mutual beneficial reason finance/tax/psycho greedy family etc. ) but Alfred is fine with sharing Anna and Anna having sexual adventures on her own too would be a cool way of Anna still being in a relationship for those scenes that need Anna to still have initial resistant to choices she may have to make, giving kink and weight to these choices. And this will allow for a neat exit of Andrew from the game/ go into a coma etc.

I'm pretty certain Alfred and Anna will get some kind of ending together. Whether they get married or end up having an open relationship I don't know. Certainly Alfred would be one partner I can see allowing Anna to carry on with her sexual adventures.

Are you suggesting that Anna and Alfred have an open relationship within the game, rather than as an ending? And then Anna sometimes does her own thing, but doesn't tell Alfred about it? I suppose that might work, if you wanted to keep cheating in the game, without Andrew. But everything Deep has said so far, suggests he's not planning to do anything like that

 

[MishelHappiness^_^]

I understand you don't like the direction of the game, but if you think Deepsleep is going to magically change the entire direction of this game, and suddenly transform both Anna and Andrew into completely different characters, you are sadly mistaken. The patrons can only influence a very small part of the game. 95% of it, is and always will be Deepsleep's creation. Anna and Andrew are the way they are, because Deep wanted them to be that way. And nothing you or I, or anybody else for that matter, will ever change that.

Andrew is a pathetic loser because Deepsleep intended for him to be one. His sole purpose in the game, is to be the schmuck that Anna cheats on. It's not just to do with the size of his penis, he's also immature, lazy and an idiot. His only saving grace is that he seems to genuinely love Anna. But that won't be enough to keep Anna with him

Up until the end of Chapter 1, Deep fully intended for Anna to eventually dump Andrew. I mean he set him up to be the loser, didn't he. Since then Awake has joined as the main writer, and he persuaded Deep to eventually create a new route, where Anna gives Andrew another chance. This will be what they are calling the Renaissance Route, and on that route only, Anna and Andrew in particular will both change a lot, giving them the chance to end the game together. So if you're an Andrew supporter, you will eventually get what you want, a happy ending for Anna and Andrew.

Exactly what form that happy ending is going to take though, I have no idea. It's impossible to deny that Anna has changed significantly since the game started, and even if she gets cured of her condition, we're not going to get a full reset of her personality. My guess is, both of them will have to make compromises and Andrew in particular will have to make major changes to his mindset, and accept that Anna is no longer the pure woman that he put on a pedestal.

On all the other routes though, they will continue to drift further apart, and eventually Anna will dump Andrew.

I'm very glad that the game has grown so much technically, the new animations are incredible, the game has music, maybe in the future there will be voice acting, I hope DeepSleep will be able to realize everything he has planned, but the story is not as exciting as it was before, at least I think so and as you can see I'm not the only on

 

[Zara Scarlet]

The whole branch where andrew kidnaps rebecca is stupid, it's a shame that DeepSleep didn't give us a choice to make a more logical choice.

It's stupid because Andrew is stupid. It's exactly the daft kind of thing he'd get mixed up in. Andrew is not a sensible person. He does a lot things without thinking through the consequences. If he'd thought for one minute. He'd have realised that kidnapping your girlfriend's beloved sister, is maybe not the smartest thing to do. And definitely not guaranteed to make her carry on thinking you're a great guy. One of the main purposes of that plot is to demonstrate that Andrew is an idiot. So that Anna can see that in unequivocal terms. After the kidnapping she can't deny any longer, that all the bad things her friends and family have been saying about Andrew, all the way through their relationship, are true.

 

[MishelHappiness^_^]

It's stupid because Andrew is stupid. It's exactly the daft kind of thing he'd get mixed up in. Andrew is not a sensible person. He does a lot things without thinking through the consequences. If he'd thought for one minute. He'd have realised that kidnapping your girlfriend's beloved sister, is maybe not the smartest thing to do. And definitely not guaranteed to make her carry on thinking you're a great guy. One of the main purposes of that plot is to demonstrate that Andrew is an idiot. So that Anna can see that in unequivocal terms. After the kidnapping she can't deny any longer, that all the bad things her friends and family have been saying about Andrew, all the way through their relationship, are true.

Oh I probably know who can become Anna's next partner after Andrew, we need to introduce a new character into the game, an old lesbian who can be called for example Zara and Anna will be completely satisfied because no one eats pussy better than Zara Scarlet

 

[Deleted member 4752509]

Oh I probably know who can become Anna's next partner after Andrew, we need to introduce a new character into the game, an old lesbian who can be called for example Zara and Anna will be completely satisfied because no one eats pussy better than Zara Scarlet

This man is morbidly obsessed with this game, typing with him is like bouncing balls. No sense. No one can convince such a maniac that this game has flaws.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I'm very glad that the game has grown so much technically, the new animations are incredible, the game has music, maybe in the future there will be voice acting, I hope DeepSleep will be able to realize everything he has planned, but the story is not as exciting as it was before, at least I think so and as you can see I'm not the only on

I understand that some people don't like certain aspects of the game, or even that they don't like it at all now. But they only represent a small minority. The majority of patrons are ok with the game. But some of the changes haven't panned out quite the way the Devs hoped, and there have been significant problems with functionality, caused in part by allowing Awake to do some of the coding ( he was brought in mainly as a writer) and he made a few errors earlier in Chapter 2, that have caused considerable problems since. That's why we had a complete reset in the last update, which meant old saves no longer worked at all.

These changes they're trying to make to the game. Are partly to accomodate other people, who want a different kind of Anna. But also to realise the Anna that was promised during Chapter 1. In order to progress and have the kind of bigger scenes with Anna, that a lot of people would like to see. They've had to make changes, so that it can happen in the future. Because with the game as it was in Chapter 1, this was never going to happen. Deep had reached the limits of what was possible.

So although we're definitely not there yet. There is a desire to make the game, bigger and better. And I believe eventually they will get there. And most patrons will get the kind of game with Anna, that they want. But they're never going to completely satisfy everybody. That's just impossible.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Oh I probably know who can become Anna's next partner after Andrew, we need to introduce a new character into the game, an old lesbian who can be called for example Zara and Anna will be completely satisfied because no one eats pussy better than Zara Scarlet

That's so true

 

[88stanford88]

No Anna hasn't split up with Andrew yet, but she's seriously considering it.

can you please post a e single dialog pic of a scene where Anna said that she's seriously considering it?
I never see the scene you are talking about
are you spoiler a future event?

Thus making him into a protagonist on that one route?

Andrew is not the protagonist and it is you that talking about a renaissance paths that must be related with Andrew... ecause Anna is in perfect shape and she is paying to save him

this is the start of CH2

As you can see Anna has a great hairstyle here (start of CH2)




After this scene in the path 'm following Anna accepted the discount Dr-Schmitd offers her in exchange for doing "research" with her body
So it's clear that Anna needs to earn at least 40,000 Euros and she's doing it to get Andrew healed
it seems obvious to me that,up to Version 0.97, Anna is trying hard to raise the $50,000 needed to save Andrew... this is th prove that she love Andrew and is willing to work also as porn star to save him.

But you could play them in any order ( apart from Hard Exam 1 and 2) without it making any real difference

Apart of what???
Hard Exams is the perfect short novel and it is required to know that she was 18th when won the scholarship by fucking the teacher and everyone for get A+ grade that was necassari to go to the college
HARD EXAMS is the official prequel in the OP

I think the only thing Andrew is to blame for is the size of his dick, considering the devices that were in Anna's cunt, Andrew's dick will clearly not be enough for Anna. Although perhaps Dr. Schmidt could remedy this situation and secretly enlarge andrew's penis, i

I think Anna will ask for sure this and she will be happy
to pay a team of top plastic surgeons and she will fuck them all for a consultation to determine what is the right size of dick that can satisfy her.

The short novels only have a very tenuous connection to the main game.

that is one of the rare phrase of yours that I agree.

democratic poll.

Andrew fate poll.... you are saying it was a democratic poll... full of non sense

that poll have missing option and the number of voters is less than 40% of the total supporters
but what is wrong there are the questions are written on purpose to condition a foregone victory
in that poll the majority voted to keep Andrew alive...the other 2 options were she dump him or he stay out of the game
I can confirm my answer
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10496890

Andrew will get a renaissance route

you are the queen of the nonsensical answers
I repeat:
Andrew can't get any route because he is not the MC

Unfortunately, it's not a fact at all. Anna's mother is never mentioned anywhere. So Stanford can't know that she abandoned Anna.

it is written in the start of the Chapter 1 she was rised by her always drunk father
how you can continue to write that?
ooo yes you are the QUEEN OF NONSENSE
you can read the dialogs at the start of CH1 where it is clearly written that the mother is divorced and that she left abroad
this is the post that shows the start of CH1
https://f95zone.to/threads/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10358457

 

[88stanford88]

It's stupid because Andrew is stupid.

Andrew must be stupid this is the classic comedy style!
without Andrew the story will be just a boring drama of a falling whore that was not able to save her boyfriend!

 

[Zara Scarlet]

This man is morbidly obsessed with this game, typing with him is like bouncing balls. No sense. No one can convince such a maniac that this game has flaws.

Hello. I'm the person who likes this game. I have a good reason to be here and comment about it. You on the other hand, by your own admission despise it. If anyone is morbidly obsessed it has to be you. I mean what kind of maniac devotes all their time on this site, to a game that they actively hate? I know, they call that kind of person a troll.

Oh, I know you're not paying that much attention to what I'm saying, because you just want to troll the thread. But I am in fact a woman.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

can you please post a e single dialog pic of a scene where Anna said that she's seriously considering it?

I'm still waiting for you to produce the scene where it says Anna's mother abandoned her. Or that dialogue quote from her mother, that you came up with. Even Deepsleep doesn't know about that. Both him and me would love to know where you found it?

As far as Andrew is concerned. All you need to know, is that it's going to happen. Which you would know if you were actually a patron, and actually had conversations of any kind with the Devs. For someone who pretends to be an authority on this game, it's amazing how much you get wrong. I mean it's not really that difficult to go on the Discord Channel, where you don't have to be a patron, and actually see what the Devs are actually saying about the game. Rather than make wild assumptions and then try to pass them off as fact.

 

[Deleted member 4752509]

Hello. I'm the person who likes this game. I have a good reason to be here and comment about it. You on the other hand, by your own admission despise it. If anyone is morbidly obsessed it has to be you. I mean what kind of maniac devotes all their time on this site, to a game that they actively hate? I know, they call that kind of person a troll.

Oh, I know you're not paying that much attention to what I'm saying, because you just want to troll the thread. But I am in fact a woman.

I honestly don't know whether to laugh or feel sorry for you...

 

[Zara Scarlet]

you are the queen of the nonsensical answers
I repeat:
Andrew can't get any route because he is not the MC
/anna-exciting-affection-anna-first-time-deepsleep.2689/post-10496890

I suggest you take that up with the Devs, because I'm only saying what they've said. Which if you paid attention or tried to get your facts from a reliable source, you'd already know.

Of all the possible routes, it's the one I'm likely to be least interested in. I only bring it up at all, because I know there are people here who want Anna and Andrew to end up together. Personally, it wouldn't bother me if it never happened. It wasn't going to happen through most of Chapter 1. Until Awake joined as a Dev, Deep fully intended for Anna to eventually dump Andrew. Now you can believe that or not believe it. I don't really care. But I can assure you it was the case

If Deep ever intended for Anna and Andrew to end up together. He never would have made Andrew into such a pathetic loser of a character. You do get that he is a loser right? Even his own father who loves him. thinks he's a loser for god's sake. Deep set him up to fail. He just wouldn't have done that, if he'd intended for Anna and Andrew to stay together.

But from Chapter 2 onwards the situation has changed. Awake has persuaded Deep to give Andrew another chance. And that will be on the Renaissance Route, where Andrew will have to prove his worth to Anna. Now if you don't agree with that, then I suggest you take it up with the Devs, because only they know what form the Renaissance Route is going to take

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I honestly don't know whether to laugh or feel sorry for you...

I'm certainly getting a good laugh from you

 

[Zara Scarlet]

t is written in the start of the Chapter 1 she was rised by her always drunk father
how you can continue to write that?
ooo yes you are the QUEEN OF NONSENSE
you can read the dialogs at the start of CH1 where it is clearly written that the mother is divorced and that she left abroad
this is the post that shows the start of CH1

Where does it actually say she was abandoned? Her husband was an alcoholic and not a nice person to live with. Because Anna ends up living with her grandfather. So there could be any number of reasons why they got divorced, and nothing to suggest that her mother abandoned her.

That's the same post where you made the ridiculous accusation about me being the real author of Anna's First Time, plus the utterly bizarre insinuation that I was paying Deepsleep to make the game the way I want it to be ( which has since mysteriously disappeared). And this is the best one. Apparently Deep is allowing me to pass hints to him to change the game, so that he has a really good scapegoat to blame for any further delays to updates. Where do you come up with this rubbish for god's sake? Why should anyone believe anything you say?

 

[88stanford88]

But from Chapter 2 onwards the situation has changed. Awake has persuaded Deep to give Andrew another chance. And that will be on the Renaissance Route, where Andrew will have to prove his worth to Anna. Now if you don't agree with that, then I suggest you take it up with the Devs, because only they know what form the Renaissance Route is going to take

Where is this route?
Are you talking about the future?
you are a real Queen of nothing

Anna renaissance route???

Andrew is already his boyfriend!!!

You are just humiliating yourself!

There are only 2 main path in this game

1)JEREMY LIVE PATH! the one that i'm following
2) Jeremy dead
in both routes Andrew is Anna boyfriend

Anna is just fucking with anyone to collect the MONEY FOR SAVE Andrew and FOR GOD SAKE!!!!

I recommend you to talk about yourself because at this point i'm sure that you are not able to report the DeepSleep words
I've already seen your pics about 2020 poll posts from the dev where there is the prove that you are wrong.
That poll was a mess

A story without logic becomes a mess!

I suggest you take that up with the Devs, because I'm only saying what they've said. Which if you paid attention or tried to get your facts from a reliable source, you'd already know.

another non sense
I got facts by reading the original dialog published by DeepSleep in his games!!!
you are just writing bullshit!
IF YOUR dreaming SPOILER WILL BE PUBLISHED ... I will congratulate to you

Actually the versions published of the game are exactly how I said on all my posts!

 

[88stanford88]

Where does it actually say she was abandoned?

really???
What you do not understand in the phrase

her mother ran away abroad in a different country
and the next

She had to live with her always drunk father

this means that during her school years Anna lived with her alcoholic father
(because her mother abandoned her before the school days

do you really want me to believe that you are so stupid that you cannot understand the sentences written by DEEPSLEEP in Anna's introduction/ presentation scene of the first chapter

are you sure you can read?
there is something inside your head... it seems to me that your head is empty

 

[88stanford88]

Zara Scarlet how you can be sure about what DeepSleep is thinking when you can't even understand what he wrote in the game already published?
I have also posted the start of CH2 just for you to make understand that Anna is fucking everyone to save her boyfriend!
she feels responsible...
Do you remember the ending of the first chapter right? (I'm not sure at this point IF YOU ARE ABLE TO READ)

Andrew was shot because he was involved in the kidnapping of Rebecca (Anna's sister)
Anna isn't sure why Andrew was at the place where Rebecca was restricted... she still hasn't been able to talk to Andrew since HE IS IN A COMA

There is an important suspended story....
it is not sure why Andrew kinapped Rebecca!

AND PLEASE DO NOT SPOILER THE STORYLINE PROGRESSION!