- Thread starter Davidreiter
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- Mar 18, 2019
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Most of the writing on Chapter 2 has been done by Awake. Deep mainly concentrates on rendering these days. Neither of them speak English as a first language and sometimes they get it wrong. But they're hardly alone in that, in the adult game world, where many Devs are far worse than them. Yes I agree, sometimes Awake does murder the english language, and he has a tendency sometimes to over-elaborate some descriptive passages, which if he'd kept it simpler, would have worked much better. But I think he has improved since the beginning of Chapter 2. I don't think he'll ever be perfect, and it's unrealistic to expect that of someone who speaks English as a second language. It's just something you have to accept, and try to ignore as you're playing the game. It's not that difficult for english speakers to fill in the gaps. That used to bother me a lot when I first started playing these games, but these days hardly at all.
- Jul 12, 2020
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True but I have my limits, if it's so bad then I just can't continue with it, the rest of the VN becomes moot. Also, sorry, but I find it an unacceptable excuse Zara, when you are marketing something to a predominantly English speaking market, then you should ensure it's acceptable for that demographic. A Chinese game, novel, whatever, predominantly made for the Chinese market, then I'll accept dodgy translations if they never intended the west to be their market. If you intend for the Endglish speaking demographic to be your market, then find someone who can speak it to a good level to translate it for you so it makes sense.
As for the other issue, I'm guessing this has never been addressed no? Case of take the Jeremy alive option but then fix the points and variables for Diane yourself in URM?
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Does this still work? I'm assuming its for chapter2 but is it for the VN or sandbox?
- Jan 30, 2019
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Weekly Update
Hello, dear Patrons!
A quick progress update for the next release!
Sorry for the delay but I decided to add a couple more scenes to the update so it will take a bit longer than I planned before. It looks like two more weeks will be enough to finish everything.
I know it's almost two months from the previous update but I want to make everything as good as possible and that there is enough of exciting content.
In the title image, you can see that the Mayor is paying a visit and Anna will introduce him to the secret Jeremy's place down in the basement.
Also, the beach scene turned out quite hot and introduces Anna's dirty side to the boys. This time it's going to be a bit different If your Anna is a naughty one
Thank you again for your amazing support,
Sincerely yours,
Deep
- Mar 25, 2019
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thx for the update! damn anna in such a skimpy bikini at the beach is quite a sight and really nice. just unfortunate for me personally that it will have these teenagers in the scene... but hey very happy at least the newly introduced major gets some content - hopefully some good one. could be a new interesting character. just hope that there will be one scene similar big as the beach scene with the boys but not with the boys. (but hey i am happy for all who like beachboys! no sarcasm!)View attachment 3313014
Weekly Update
Hello, dear Patrons!
A quick progress update for the next release!
Sorry for the delay but I decided to add a couple more scenes to the update so it will take a bit longer than I planned before. It looks like two more weeks will be enough to finish everything.
I know it's almost two months from the previous update but I want to make everything as good as possible and that there is enough of exciting content.
View attachment 3313030
In the title image, you can see that the Mayor is paying a visit and Anna will introduce him to the secret Jeremy's place down in the basement.
Also, the beach scene turned out quite hot and introduces Anna's dirty side to the boys. This time it's going to be a bit different If your Anna is a naughty one
Thank you again for your amazing support,
Sincerely yours,
Deep
great to see deep still keep it going and being still so active.
can't wait what he has planned for this year of content.
- Mar 28, 2019
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Thanks 4 the share!View attachment 3313014
Weekly Update
Hello, dear Patrons!
A quick progress update for the next release!
Sorry for the delay but I decided to add a couple more scenes to the update so it will take a bit longer than I planned before. It looks like two more weeks will be enough to finish everything.
I know it's almost two months from the previous update but I want to make everything as good as possible and that there is enough of exciting content.
View attachment 3313030
In the title image, you can see that the Mayor is paying a visit and Anna will introduce him to the secret Jeremy's place down in the basement.
Also, the beach scene turned out quite hot and introduces Anna's dirty side to the boys. This time it's going to be a bit different If your Anna is a naughty one
Thank you again for your amazing support,
Sincerely yours,
Deep
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Anne first Time does not fit with All previous novels including CH1/2 and comes with wrong time and age because Andrew was her first REAL boyfriend since the high school days before the college!.
It is just a nonsense hort novel in a parallel universe.
- Mar 28, 2019
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Has my vote for alternate story-line and What If adventure