VN Ren'Py Aperture [Ch.1] [Vonsatia]

[Arkade]

I'm not why you think hypnosis or mind control is magical when there is a lot of evidence both exist and in the hands of bad people one can lead to another. Unless you're thinking of the saimin app bullshit then yeah sure that is terrible writing for sure.

Blackmail is just overused and boring at this point in ntr.

You literally don't have to write a plot around hypnosis or mind control- it's a deus ex to make anything happen however unlikely or unrealistic. There is no drama in controlling a character- NTR should always be about weighing the benefits and consequences of relationships which is entirely bypassed by taking will away. Even in a forced abuse scenario- a character that is allowed to go still maintains free will. They could go to the police- thus you have to write around a reason why they didn't or that they can't do that. They could fear the person so as todo things differently and that can be written around.. their fear or anger can make the relationship with their significant other more stressed and one side might not understand. so you write around that. mind control ignores all this aspects.

But there's not only 2 ways to do this- blackmail or mind control is not like a spectrum. Mystery pov NTR is hard to write so even attempting this I assume the dev has some talent to it and has an idea of where they want the story to go. For now i'm just glad the AI gen is a bit less generic than the usual phone game faces.

 

[themagiman]

You literally don't have to write a plot around hypnosis or mind control- it's a deus ex to make anything happen however unlikely or unrealistic. There is no drama in controlling a character- NTR should always be about weighing the benefits and consequences of relationships which is entirely bypassed by taking will away. Even in a forced abuse scenario- a character that is allowed to go still maintains free will. They could go to the police- thus you have to write around a reason why they didn't or that they can't do that. They could fear the person so as todo things differently and that can be written around.. their fear or anger can make the relationship with their significant other more stressed and one side might not understand. so you write around that. mind control ignores all this aspects.

But there's not only 2 ways to do this- blackmail or mind control is not like a spectrum. Mystery pov NTR is hard to write so even attempting this I assume the dev has some talent to it and has an idea of where they want the story to go. For now i'm just glad the AI gen is a bit less generic than the usual phone game faces.

It's fine you don't understand the genre. There's games on this board that have slow buildup with hypnosis showing the female character struggling with what to do and realizing something is wrong.

I didn't say there's only two ways, that's your idea you put forward. I'm just bored of blackmail because it is always the exact same buildup and the exact same conflict in the female character used in a lot of ntr out there. If there is another version of it then sure I would like to see it.

We agree on the use of AI in this and the phone games entirely though.

 

[Vonsatia]

Android link?

I've just uploaded the android version everywhere except for Viking File. The mods should be updating it soon! Happy playing.

You literally don't have to write a plot around hypnosis or mind control- it's a deus ex to make anything happen however unlikely or unrealistic. There is no drama in controlling a character- NTR should always be about weighing the benefits and consequences of relationships which is entirely bypassed by taking will away. Even in a forced abuse scenario- a character that is allowed to go still maintains free will. They could go to the police- thus you have to write around a reason why they didn't or that they can't do that. They could fear the person so as todo things differently and that can be written around.. their fear or anger can make the relationship with their significant other more stressed and one side might not understand. so you write around that. mind control ignores all this aspects.

But there's not only 2 ways to do this- blackmail or mind control is not like a spectrum. Mystery pov NTR is hard to write so even attempting this I assume the dev has some talent to it and has an idea of where they want the story to go. For now i'm just glad the AI gen is a bit less generic than the usual phone game faces.

While Mind Control can be fun in it's own way. My story focuses more on the characters and their motivations. What would possibly make Rin, a strong independent character, falter and give up on her values/morals? There has to be a very good reason or multiple reasons for her to fall. Same goes for Keita. He's not a wimpy character. Our villain, Daizo has to work cleverly to get what he needs.

 

[themagiman]

I've just uploaded the android version everywhere except for Viking File. The mods should be updating it soon! Happy playing.


While Mind Control can be fun in it's own way. My story focuses more on the characters and their motivations. What would possibly make Rin, a strong independent character, falter and give up on her values/morals? There has to be a very good reason or multiple reasons for her to fall. Same goes for Keita. He's not a wimpy character. Our villain, Daizo has to work cleverly to get what he needs.

I hope it is something unique. How often do you plan on updating?

 

[Vonsatia]

I hope it is something unique. How often do you plan on updating?

Aiming for it to be monthly ^^

 

[TlIOIlT]

Hi guys,

So glad you guys are enjoying Aperture.

I have just set up my

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page! By all means, have a look at it. I'll be posting public and exclusive updates there.

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I've started work on chapter 2 already. I plan to release it next month. Keep a lookout and thanks for playing!

I hope Patreon doesn't limit the potential of the game. I heard they have very strict rules.

also have a question . do you still have plan to add smegma to blowjob scenes or bukkake and gokkun i think you talked about things like this when you were planned to make your own ntr game and hope you didnt change your mind , because the dirtier the better

 

[Arkade]

I hope Patreon doesn't limit the potential of the game. I heard they have very strict rules.

also have a question . do you still have plan to add smegma to blowjob scenes or bukkake and gokkun i think you talked about things like this when you were planned to make your own ntr game and hope you didnt change your mind , because the dirtier the better

This is already breaking the ToS for that site.. I would go ahead and make a subscribestar if I was the dev incase the worst(and suspected) case scenario happens. P site has been known to even look at social media to sus for traffic for link clicks on other sites

 

[Argentum#22]

Looks realy promising. The Art is very consistent for the characters and the Backgrounds look pretty good. The UI needs a little polish with the font size and maybe an oppacity slider for the text box. MC looks like he can fight back when needed so i am looking forward for diffrent paths. Do you already have a vague plan for an update cycle?

 

[snowman2112]

Looks realy promising. The Art is very consistent for the characters and the Backgrounds look pretty good. The UI needs a little polish with the font size and maybe an oppacity slider for the text box. MC looks like he can fight back when needed so i am looking forward for diffrent paths. Do you already have a vague plan for an update cycle?

Bro just scroll up 3 messages...

 

[Vonsatia]

Looks realy promising. The Art is very consistent for the characters and the Backgrounds look pretty good. The UI needs a little polish with the font size and maybe an oppacity slider for the text box. MC looks like he can fight back when needed so i am looking forward for diffrent paths. Do you already have a vague plan for an update cycle?

Thanks a lot! I’ll definitely be polishing the UI a lot more for the next update. Im planning to do monthly updates.

 

[Diegosmurf]

Amazing pics! Does anyone know what AI does that good of a job??

 

[reeach]

i really dont like ai and tend to stay away from them cause they are a huge turn off because of all the inconsistencies and the random nonsensical words and background but man.. this heroine is really making me reconsider...

 

[Deleted member 1674021]

The game promises to be peak angst if it’s going into the direction I’m thinking it’s going. (MC fighting and failing to protect the FMC and others until it’s too late and not the usual ‘oblivious and turning into pathetic mess while getting cucked’)

But since you actually intend to develop romance between MCs first(pretty sure I’ve never seen that before), it would be hilarious if you get invested into it too much to go through with hard-locked NTR.

Really hoping you won’t get burned out on this since the AI art is real banger and the characters seems interesting for once in the genre. Make NTR *cough* avoidable *cough* superior.

 

[jaques]

I'm actually writing Keita, the MC, as a non-passive rebellious student. He's not really your usual wimpy NTR MC. Additionally, I will be adding Cuck POV only and Omni POV so Netori enjoyers can also enjoy!

Unless there is a route where the MC can actually "win" (and I haven't seen you mention this will be the case) the "non-passive rebellious student" is just window dressing.

 

[kala_q]

Estoy cansado jefe.

 

[ponyeto]

omg thanks man

 

[Zeref@123#]

Hi guys,

So glad you guys are enjoying Aperture.

I have just set up my

You must be registered to see the links

page! By all means, have a look at it. I'll be posting public and exclusive updates there.

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I've started work on chapter 2 already. I plan to release it next month. Keep a lookout and thanks for playing!

Already subscribed. Want to support as much as I am able to. Just keep up the good work.

 

[Vonsatia]

Already subscribed. Want to support as much as I am able to. Just keep up the good work.

Appreciate it so much! I'll definitely make the sub worth it for you.

 

[Anskil]

looks interesting

 

[Deleted member 1683629]

what's the hype about. let's C