mf'n sob there is too much damned fluff in between each plot point. and i get the trend of mc lately either having a hard knock life or being the butt of some joke but damn it this is too much. the amount of fluff in between each situation is so much you get bored and start skipping pages excessively and it still takes forever to get to the next phase. sorry if i'm griping much here but please it's really damned HEAVY with nonsensical stuff that could be shortened a tad and added after certain scenario's.