There's been an update on Patreon 14 days or so ago - but it's for subscribers only - any of those people want to share an update?
- Thread starter Wizard++
- Start date
- Sep 6, 2019
- 758
- 6,184
Really promising start so far, though I do have one critique: I think you should spend a little more on each scene to use more descriptive language. I think it would help a lot to immerse readers and provide a better image of the world. Just little things like describing the home more, or mentioning the general appearance of the town would go a long way to making more believable and immersive. Aside from that though, I had a nice time reading what's there and I can't wait for more!
- Jul 9, 2017
- 19
- 99
Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. It's definitely something I've considered, and I've really tried to provide enough description, while keeping the narrative moving, as many prefer a faster pace. But I shall keep in mind going forward that I'm not the only one who thinks a bit more description could be beneficial.
And on the note of getting more, I've been fairly busy, but I'm close to finishing the next update, which will also introduce a first look at some of the in-game art. It should be available for patrons in the next few days, and then the general public a while later.
- Jun 11, 2021
- 4,521
- 7,522
I like it so far. The writing is good and the art is good. Although it seems a wee bit too dark.
One thing I am concerned about is how all the scenes seem to be missable. This honestly makes the game too branching. Which both slows down dev and also makes it a bit irksome to follow each girl.
One thing I am concerned about is how all the scenes seem to be missable. This honestly makes the game too branching. Which both slows down dev and also makes it a bit irksome to follow each girl.
- Mar 9, 2018
- 78
- 184
Would agree: Nice start. 
One little nitpick: At one point the MC decides to eat a raw potato for breakfast (kinda like an apple).
Don't attempt this in RL, even at best your bowls will most likely glue you to the toilet for the rest of the day. At worst you are straight up poisening ourself.
One little nitpick: At one point the MC decides to eat a raw potato for breakfast (kinda like an apple).
Don't attempt this in RL, even at best your bowls will most likely glue you to the toilet for the rest of the day. At worst you are straight up poisening ourself.
- Sep 23, 2020
- 21
- 60
I wholeheartedly agree with the poster above, raw potato is a good way to empty your entire system over a toilet, while crying. Simple fix would be making it a simple "baked potato."
as far as the game goes, i'll admit fully at first i saw "oh another furry game, pass." but out of boredom i decided to take a look...and i'm glad to do so.
The story so far (while still in it's infancy) is good, has depth and has me wanting for more to see how it develops.
From your interractions, it's obvious you care about your game and want it to succeed, you're also not vain enough to blow every other opinion off, wich is a godsent.
All in all, thanks for the game, all the best to you and your SO and i hope to see many more updates. thumbs up!
as far as the game goes, i'll admit fully at first i saw "oh another furry game, pass." but out of boredom i decided to take a look...and i'm glad to do so.
The story so far (while still in it's infancy) is good, has depth and has me wanting for more to see how it develops.
From your interractions, it's obvious you care about your game and want it to succeed, you're also not vain enough to blow every other opinion off, wich is a godsent.
All in all, thanks for the game, all the best to you and your SO and i hope to see many more updates. thumbs up!
- May 14, 2018
- 28
- 20
- Jul 9, 2017
- 19
- 99
First of all, thank you all for the positive comments and feedback, it really helps me continue with development to know that it is appreciated.
And for it being "too branching", there are indeed some scenes that are mutually-exclusive, but some of the scenes that feel like you can't see both in the same play-through, there will be opportunities to trigger them later on in the story, as they're not tied directly to events in the main story. So I hope that helps alleviate at least a bit of that concern.
I've done a fair bit of research for this game, trying to make sure certain things are as close to reality as possible. And that the one thing I overlook is a freaking potato?
I just can't believe it.
So, as far it being a bit dark, I definitely intended it to be a bit more 'dark fantasy', as it seems most games in the genre have a MC who's lives (or at least the part that pertain to the game) are more or less a series of fortunate events like they have a horseshoe up their ass. So I wanted to take it in a bit of a different direction. I was honestly feeling it was maybe getting a bit too 'sunny' with the latest update I've done that's up on my patreon, and had was pondering throwing a bit more shade on it. I will, however, take this into account, and carefully consider just how dark it will be, so as not to go too far the other way.
And for it being "too branching", there are indeed some scenes that are mutually-exclusive, but some of the scenes that feel like you can't see both in the same play-through, there will be opportunities to trigger them later on in the story, as they're not tied directly to events in the main story. So I hope that helps alleviate at least a bit of that concern.
Alright, definitely slightly nitpicky, though I will concede, I actually did not know that. And as I have had raw potato in the past, without any of these aforementioned side effects, led me to do some fact checking. So first of all, you are absolutely correct, they can indeed be poisonous. However, it seems like that particular toxin, glycoalkaloids, in large amounts is indeed hardful to humans. It sounds like this is largely only generated by the plants in parts that are exposed to sunlight, so as long as the potatoes are not green, or beginning to sprout, the levels should be quite low, and probably safe. But, still probably not the best idea.Would agree: Nice start.
One little nitpick: At one point the MC decides to eat a raw potato for breakfast (kinda like an apple).
Don't attempt this in RL, even at best your bowls will most likely glue you to the toilet for the rest of the day. At worst you are straight up poisening ourself.
I've done a fair bit of research for this game, trying to make sure certain things are as close to reality as possible. And that the one thing I overlook is a freaking potato?
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
I appreciate that, and thanks for taking the chance.
So far I love the game and the idea of it and would like to see more, suggestions I have is would love more images of the characters for different interaction such as as is you can get a blow job from the wolf girl I would hope this imaging would be added as well as imaging for maybe the dragon girl at the slave market.
- Jul 9, 2017
- 19
- 99
Thank you, and that is indeed on my list of things I want to do. But I'm commissioning the artwork, so I plan to do that when I can better afford to do so.
- Aug 14, 2021
- 345
- 531
So I just came across this after the conversion. I like how you formatted things. The art is very nice, can't wait to see what the draconian girl looks like, hopefully the muscle described is visible .
The choices are interesting. The world and story being told is fun. Though I would say it would be neat to have the option to play up more the Master aspect and have Isabella dressed more revealing or gotten comfortable with being nude along with the other girls.
All in all definitely something to watch and suggest to others. Well done 'furry/anthromorphic' games that aren't futa/gay focused are a rare gem.
. The choices are interesting. The world and story being told is fun. Though I would say it would be neat to have the option to play up more the Master aspect and have Isabella dressed more revealing or gotten comfortable with being nude along with the other girls.
All in all definitely something to watch and suggest to others. Well done 'furry/anthromorphic' games that aren't futa/gay focused are a rare gem.
- Jul 24, 2018
- 494
- 1,753
Often porn games in general will 'cheapen' the threats to put the player at ease, to make absolutely sure that nothing bad is going to happen, I found that in this build none of what I said is true. Even if it's not in your face all the time there is still some danger and the world marches on beyond the eyes of the MC. I quite like that, while not being a gore focused narrative it still makes the world believable in it's cruelty. In one particular situation I got a little worried about not having enough points in Physical. The amount of written content is also good for a 0.2 build, there are games with way less words and way more version numbers.
Keep up the good work Wizard++, I look forward to reading more of your story.
Keep up the good work Wizard++, I look forward to reading more of your story.
- Jun 11, 2021
- 4,521
- 7,522
Here is both PC and Mac versions:
You must be registered to see the links
====game dev said:
Huh... am I developing dyslexia? is this a thing that can happen?
I never had it before
but now I suddenly read it as Canadian Acres. before doing a double taking and reading it correctly.
Last edited:
- Jun 11, 2021
- 4,521
- 7,522
The game is being very coy here. Anyone knows what fetishes are being toggled here? the game leaves it as a mystery on what I am opting into
edit: I went ahead and just tried it myself...
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
Last edited:
