Just finished up to the end of current content for ver.0.3.2. Liking the game so far and left a review!
Some feedback
Improvements:
having art for when we first meet the cowgirl in the market for sale, character art for the npcs (like maybe a grey silhouette), and more expressions like for example an expression for when the girls cum, but I know this costs a lotta money if your paying the artist for commissions so this is most likely VERY down the priority pyramid / more of a stretchgoal.
Typos
Her wide hips and a plump ass -> and plump ass
One of such challenge-> one of such challenges
you seemed to have a real knack for it -> knack for
No sooner than you finish signing, and he greedily snatches your proffered purse of silver than he begins to cackle. -> No sooner than you finish signing, he greedily snatches your proffered purse of silver and he begins to cackle.
acutely aware of the fact she's naked -> of the fact that she's naked
profitable of late-> as of late
left over-> leftovers
as your bring your mouth-> as you bring your mouth
next couples minutes-> next couple of minutes
don't care what we can do-> don't care about what we can do
you decide to call over-> come over
she giggles are wiggles her butt-> she giggle and she wiggles
such the one you told me about-> such as the one
drain for the pudgy->drain from the pudgy
You extend you hand to her-> you extend your hand out to her
When auctioning the dragon girl 25silver ->25 silver
Going to town with Talia the next day after Talia kills the bandits
prepare head out-> prepare to head out
While I don't mind just you-> don't mind if it's just you
for wheighing good.->weighing goods
waddling up you-> waddling up to you
big business the last couple days-> the last couple of days
precedes to bear hug->proceeds to bear hug
Deciding to spend time with belle the cowgirl after buying the dragon girl
begin to harder right before-> begin to harden
using one have-> using one hand
Meeting Talia's friend
Talia buries her face in he paw->her paw
would you honour me by allowed-> honour me by allowing me
Amy about to start the cropgrowing festival
Excellent. We shall begin Anon. -> Anon should be player name input
Some inconsistencies
I get the line
Not master, It's "MC's name" to you.
even if I chose to let myself be called master
Belle: Thank you. Now what would you like me to do master?
MC: Master Belle, just master
Idk why hes saying this line if she already does just call us master
As stated in a comment before eating raw potatoes is poisonous. go back to making him munch a carrot
