- Dec 29, 2018
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The blowjob competition does not fit the rest of the game.
There's no good reason for the main character to be dragged into it by June, and two very good reasons not to involve him. The first is mentioned by her, which is that she's afraid that it could harm his chances of getting a job (which he desperately needs). The second reason, is that he has massive trust and intimacy issues that June knows about since they met in a recovery program for domestic abuse victims. It's ridiculous for her to ask this of him. Can you imagine the main character calling up June and asking her to help him get a job by letting his interviewer eat her pussy out for a few minutes?
Making things worse is that fact that its for such a stupid reason. They don't want to allow the dean's daughter to rejoin their sorority after being kicked out. So they stage a blowjob competition, which is a terrible idea because they will have no way of proving that the girl lost. She could just lie about it and tell her mom they wouldn't let her back in, and what would Reina do? Show the dean a video of them coercing her daughter into blowing a dude? I'm sure that will go over well and totally not get them all in way more trouble than just not letting the daughter join again.
On top of all that, we have the fact that the women involved have established careers, so they don't seem like sorority sisters still in college. It would make more sense for them to have all graduated from the same sorority and have stayed good friends who became colleges and rent a place out together to keep in touch or whatever.
The rest of the game is quite good, and I enjoyed most of it. Kindra is a bit too much of a Mary Sue, but it's not a huge problem. I expect that she'll start to seem a little less perfect as she takes on too much and becomes overwhelmed. She's my favourite so far, and while I do like the way that their relationship is developing, it's a bit odd how slow they are taking it considering how the game began. It was especially noticeable since I played it for the first time recently, so I didn't have to wait between updates to see the main character go from eagerly whoring himself out in the first chapter, to being unsure if he should let a girl kiss him in the third.
There's no good reason for the main character to be dragged into it by June, and two very good reasons not to involve him. The first is mentioned by her, which is that she's afraid that it could harm his chances of getting a job (which he desperately needs). The second reason, is that he has massive trust and intimacy issues that June knows about since they met in a recovery program for domestic abuse victims. It's ridiculous for her to ask this of him. Can you imagine the main character calling up June and asking her to help him get a job by letting his interviewer eat her pussy out for a few minutes?
Making things worse is that fact that its for such a stupid reason. They don't want to allow the dean's daughter to rejoin their sorority after being kicked out. So they stage a blowjob competition, which is a terrible idea because they will have no way of proving that the girl lost. She could just lie about it and tell her mom they wouldn't let her back in, and what would Reina do? Show the dean a video of them coercing her daughter into blowing a dude? I'm sure that will go over well and totally not get them all in way more trouble than just not letting the daughter join again.
On top of all that, we have the fact that the women involved have established careers, so they don't seem like sorority sisters still in college. It would make more sense for them to have all graduated from the same sorority and have stayed good friends who became colleges and rent a place out together to keep in touch or whatever.
The rest of the game is quite good, and I enjoyed most of it. Kindra is a bit too much of a Mary Sue, but it's not a huge problem. I expect that she'll start to seem a little less perfect as she takes on too much and becomes overwhelmed. She's my favourite so far, and while I do like the way that their relationship is developing, it's a bit odd how slow they are taking it considering how the game began. It was especially noticeable since I played it for the first time recently, so I didn't have to wait between updates to see the main character go from eagerly whoring himself out in the first chapter, to being unsure if he should let a girl kiss him in the third.
