VN Ren'Py Artemis [v0.5.1] [digi.B]

[MrFriendly]

It's even worse when they depict hitting the cervix as a good thing, like it's pleasurable. As any woman who had ever experienced it can tell you, that shit fucking hurts, and not in a good way. There is nothing remotely sexy about jack-hammering into the cervical wall.

Oh yes, I've even seen someone talk about penetrating the cervix which is laughable and would also be horrible for the woman. It's frustrating and very much a turn off when proofreading a story or script in which it is all about the man's satisfaction yet the women act like it is the most amazing experience to have a giant penis slam into their cervical wall repeatedly. People need to research more.

Digi.b seems to be okay in this game. I don't recall anything glaring about the scenes, though they didn't really seem inspired. Will have to see if they get better.

 

[pochops]

Please don't kill yourself over the fact that game developers/writers don't seem to have a basic understanding of female anatomy. I actually proofread for someone where I corrected it to say something about the woman's cervical wall instead and the dev was unhappy with my correction. My favorite is when a non-pregnant woman is referred to as having a womb as in "flooding her womb".

Anyway, I hope that digi.b is better or at least has editors/proofreaders he listens to and trusts.

I appreciate being anatomically correct. But regardless, the mention of any internal organ during dirty talk doesn't do it for me. Not only that, viewing these games is beginning to make me feel a bit inadequate. I've been married almost 20 years and not once have I made my wife scream "You're flooding my womb!"

 

[MrFriendly]

I appreciate being anatomically correct. But regardless, the mention of any internal organ during dirty talk doesn't do it for me. Not only that, viewing these games is beginning to make me feel a bit inadequate. I've been married almost 20 years and not once have I made my wife scream "You're flooding my womb!"

Yeah, the sex talk in games is obviously inspired by bad porn. But then if the sex scenes were full of the squeaking bed, the squish of wet sex organs moving together, the rustle of fabric, and quietly murmured comments I don't think people would enjoy them as much as they seem to enjoy the overly loud productions in these games (and porn).

 

[jufot]

Some girls can take a horse dick sized dildo, but I don't know how it feels. It seems like they enjoy it... it's pretty extreme of course and only a few women are into that

It all depends on the depth of the vaginal canal, I suppose. I've never once met a woman who was even neutral about hitting the cervical wall, let alone enjoy it.

 

[v1900]

One day, a developer will make the ultimate realistic sex scene: Towels on the bed so you don't soak the sheets, one or two unintentional elbow/knee hits trying to get into position, lots of unflattering noises and finally, everyone takes a piss before going to bed

Take note kids: Not peeing after sex is a very easy way get painful UTIs

Don't forget some sensual post coital pillow talk.

-Love, did you turn off the lights downstairs?-
-Nope.-
-I'll prepare you an omelette for breakfast if you turn them off.-
-Throw some bacon and you have a deal.-
-No more fat for you, that last fart almost killed the mood.-

Nothing more sensual than bacon and eggs.

 

[jufot]

Don't forget some sensual post coital pillow talk.

Nice list! My favourite:

- Did you take out the bins?
- ....
- Did you?
- Fuck.

 

[Holonet]

This game acts very strange for me. I can play it somewhere around 10 minutes, and then it starts lagging hardcore. Still theoretically "works," but everything suddenly takes like 30 seconds to happen (click to the next scene, save, etc...). It's not the scene itself, because it happens without fail, and if save, close and open/load up again, it's normal...until another 10 minutes or so go by.

I'd bitch, but must not be widespread. It's weird because I have plenty of other Ren'Py games that are just fine. Am I the only one blessed so?

 

[Eric_Draven]

One day, a developer will make the ultimate realistic sex scene: Towels on the bed so you don't soak the sheets, one or two unintentional elbow/knee hits trying to get into position, lots of unflattering noises and finally, everyone takes a piss before going to bed

Take note kids: Not peeing after sex is a very easy way get painful UTIs

Sounds good to me, add the fear of STD's while we're at it.

 

[Dragon59]

One day, a developer will make the ultimate realistic sex scene: Towels on the bed so you don't soak the sheets, one or two unintentional elbow/knee hits trying to get into position, lots of unflattering noises and finally, everyone takes a piss before going to bed

Take note kids: Not peeing after sex is a very easy way get painful UTIs

I had a friend years ago who joked about having a real sounds of sex phone service.
"You're on my hair!"
"Mmmm...Mmmm..Oh shit! Leg cramp!"
Stuff like that.

Some girls can take a horse dick sized dildo, but I don't know how it feels. It seems like they enjoy it... it's pretty extreme of course and only a few women are into that

A female friend from years ago told me about her encounter with a "horse dicked" man. Turns out he was a virgin because no woman was willing to try. She did try, largely out of sympathy for his plight. A bit of a "mercy fuck." If I remember correctly, it wasn't very good for her.

Oh yes, I've even seen someone talk about penetrating the cervix which is laughable and would also be horrible for the woman. It's frustrating and very much a turn off when proofreading a story or script in which it is all about the man's satisfaction yet the women act like it is the most amazing experience to have a giant penis slam into their cervical wall repeatedly. People need to research more.

I cringe when I read that in amateur porn. Apparently being so big as to force open the cervix (and having her love it) is a big fantasy for some guys. That tissue needs the right hormones to open up like that.

It all depends on the depth of the vaginal canal, I suppose. I've never once met a woman who was even neutral about hitting the cervical wall, let alone enjoy it.

I think for many women who have a preference in larger sizes, girth is more important than length.

I expect much of the modern obsession with dick length is that the porn industry favors them because they give more options for filming. For many, porn is their primary sex education. Definitely can lead to unrealistic expectations.

Many historical cultures in history considered huge penises to be rather vulgar. Look at the classic Greek statues, and the Neo-classical Renaissance sculptures. Moderns often make fun of David's "package."

 

[jufot]

I had a friend years ago who joked about having a real sounds of sex phone service.
"You're on my hair!"
"Mmmm...Mmmm..Oh shit! Leg cramp!"
Stuff like that.

Heh, avoiding cramps during sex is a great motivator to hit the gym, so there is at least that

I think for many women who have a preference in larger sizes, girth is more important than length.

That makes sense. Considering that the g-spot is only 2-3 inches from the entrance and the average erect dick is around 5.2 inches, you don't really need length beyond that. Girth is much more "impactful", which in turn is massively eclipsed by skill.

I expect much of the modern obsession with dick length is that the porn industry favours them because they give more options for filming. For many, porn is their primary sex education. Definitely can lead to unrealistic expectations.

Oh, for sure. It's very obvious in surveys for youngsters. When young men are asked about their length, most give answers in the 6-8 inch range. Either they are all statistical anomalies (yeah, right) or they lie due to porn-based sex ed. Likewise, women in the same range also say their "preferred" length is 6-8 inches, whereas in all statistical likelihood most of them haven't even seen such a dick, let alone had one. Unrealistic expectations indeed

Many historical cultures in history considered huge penises to be rather vulgar. Look at the classic Greek statues, and the Neo-classical Renaissance sculptures. Moderns often make fun of David's "package."

Indeed, massive dicks were associated with barbarian cultures back then, and smaller ones with nobility. David is especially small though, his flaccid length is around half that of the "modern" average

 

[Dragon59]

That makes sense. Considering that the g-spot is only 2-3 inches from the entrance and the average erect dick is around 5.2 inches, you don't really need length beyond that. Girth is much more "impactful", which in turn is massively eclipsed by skill.

Indeed

Oh, for sure. It's very obvious in surveys for youngsters. When young men are asked about their length, most give answers in the 6-8 inch range. Either they are all statistical anomalies (yeah, right) or they lie due to porn-based sex ed. Likewise, women in the same range also say their "preferred" length is 6-8 inches, whereas in all statistical likelihood most of them haven't even seen such a dick, let alone had one. Unrealistic expectations indeed

I just have to eyeroll when I see comments to amateur porn on the sites. If they guy is 6-7 inches these guys complain about his "tiny dick."

Indeed, massive dicks were associated with barbarian cultures back then, and smaller ones with nobility. David is especially small though, his flaccid length is around half that of the "modern" average

Some of that perception continued into the modern era. When I read what you said above, I was reminded of the late 20th century "Mandingo" obsession and that cringeworthy scene in Behind the Green Door. The modern "BBC" category is marginally less cringeworthy--it still fetishizes black men as more "primal."

 

[Dragon59]

Quick question, please.
Are either of the two mods on the OP useful? One or the other instead of both?

 

[jufot]

Some of that perception continued into the modern era. When I read what you said above, I was reminded of the late 20th century "Mandingo" obsession and that cringeworthy scene in Behind the Green Door. The modern "BBC" category is marginally less cringeworthy--it still fetishizes black men as more "primal."

Very good point about the modern connection with BBC! And ugh, I know exactly which scene you mean from Behind the Green Door

 

[jufot]

Quick question, please.
Are either of the two mods on the OP useful? One or the other instead of both?

They both work, but in my opinion neither is necessary. Most choices are pretty self-explanatory and there are no hidden consequences, at least so far.

 

[Dragon59]

They both work, but in my opinion neither is necessary. Most choices are pretty self-explanatory and there are no hidden consequences, at least so far.

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.

 

[jufot]

I know this is a different game, but after all the discussion here I had to post this. Folks, I present to you Love Season: Farmer's Dreams

 

[fishbrain]

Everything about this is great, renders, story, comedy, drama all very well done. Not usually a big Sci-Fi fan but so far that's not a major aspect of the story, just details. Hope it stays this way, can't wait to see what happens next.

 

[imoutolover]

Ho ho ho. It must be Christmas in July!

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Happy Monday, everyone!
It's been a long as I've been reviewing the different areas being worked on and drilling away at the parts that remain. I've queued up the animations that remain and expect them to be done sometime this week.
I continued working on the code and features. As we will start exploring different relationships, some have requested named saves. I'll be creating an image that grabs your attention whenever bringing up the save, but it will be located at the upper right.

The phone is looking great and I'm satisfied with the icons. This week I'll be wrapping up the remaining phone apps.

My goal for this week is to complete the remaining code, stitch together the animations and post work and review the script once more before sending it off to the proof reader. And the big goal this week is to get all this bundled up and ready for the beta testers to begin testing sometime next week.
I apologize for any messages or DMs I have not responded to. I've been very occupied as things get closer.
Thank you all for being so patient and allowing me to keep a steady pace with this update.
Have yourselves a wonderful week everyone!
digi.B

 

[D-Droid]

Great game, well written, great story. Very hot girls. Keep up with good work.

 

[MrFriendly]

Ho ho ho. It must be Christmas in July!

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Happy Monday, everyone!
It's been a long as I've been reviewing the different areas being worked on and drilling away at the parts that remain. I've queued up the animations that remain and expect them to be done sometime this week.
I continued working on the code and features. As we will start exploring different relationships, some have requested named saves. I'll be creating an image that grabs your attention whenever bringing up the save, but it will be located at the upper right.

The phone is looking great and I'm satisfied with the icons. This week I'll be wrapping up the remaining phone apps.

My goal for this week is to complete the remaining code, stitch together the animations and post work and review the script once more before sending it off to the proof reader. And the big goal this week is to get all this bundled up and ready for the beta testers to begin testing sometime next week.
I apologize for any messages or DMs I have not responded to. I've been very occupied as things get closer.
Thank you all for being so patient and allowing me to keep a steady pace with this update.
Have yourselves a wonderful week everyone!
digi.B

Can't wait to take a blowtorch to Cassandra... I hope.