VN Ren'Py Artemis [v0.5.1] [digi.B]

[MrFriendly]

MrFriendly

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Anyway, I am not ordering a plot, and I will accept whatever the author has to offer)
I totally believe him

We shall have to wait and see (not my strong suit) as to what the dev comes up with next. Personally love wildly speculating about a game but don't want the developer to think I am "ordering a plot" as you said. Very impressed by this first entry and hope that what comes next is a well plotted and written story which makes some sense - even if it is merely internally consistent. I get incredibly tired of playing games where the developer/writer makes decisions based on how long it has been since the last lewd scene and not on what is logical for the story.

You have also missed the fact that she may have cheated on the mc, her reaction if you tell her you love her and the way she talks to Nick seems to suggest it.

Yeah, I caught that as I had my MC say he loved her. I don't really care after all of what she has done. It's like "of course she did"... I just have to hope the developer is smart enough to know that since we've been set up to hate her, and we do hate her, it would be incredibly dumb to force the player/MC to interact with her.

Player choice going forward needs to become more robust - offering the option to turn down lewd scenes (masturbation scenes included) and to refuse to interact with people going forward. Since June tried and failed to get the MC a job then the player should be able to choose to avoid her and the entire House of Ink. What I want to know is why would the MC go talk to any of them at this point? Sure they are hot but he's sitting next to a hot woman who wants to work with him. The latter can't be said for any of the house of ink ladies that work for Reina... Even if they did want to work with him it doesn't matter, Cassandra would make their lives a living hell.

So I think that's my biggest question... Why would the MC contact any of them again (besides for a fuck)?

 

[-Hex-]

You're honestly telling me this art and models are on par with other top games? I mean look at the chick in the second screen shot. The girls are high quality? I mean come on. You guys are nuts. I can name 50 games with better models. You guys are crazy. I couldn't do any better but really guys lol?

Animation's were really good I'll give you that but of ugly girls.

Each there own.

Are you seriously repeating what you just said literally two posts above yours?
Yes, i find most of the girls here attractive and judging by the reviews and comments i'm not the only one
I get this isn't to your liking (as they say, beauty's in the eye of the beholder), so maybe it's time to move on since i don't see the dev changin the entire char design of the game

 

[baku.k]

We shall have to wait and see (not my strong suit) as to what the dev comes up with next. Personally love wildly speculating about a game but don't want the developer to think I am "ordering a plot" as you said. Very impressed by this first entry and hope that what comes next is a well plotted and written story which makes some sense - even if it is merely internally consistent. I get incredibly tired of playing games where the developer/writer makes decisions based on how long it has been since the last lewd scene and not on what is logical for the story.



Yeah, I caught that as I had my MC say he loved her. I don't really care after all of what she has done. It's like "of course she did"... I just have to hope the developer is smart enough to know that since we've been set up to hate her, and we do hate her, it would be incredibly dumb to force the player/MC to interact with her.

Player choice going forward needs to become more robust - offering the option to turn down lewd scenes (masturbation scenes included) and to refuse to interact with people going forward. Since June tried and failed to get the MC a job then the player should be able to choose to avoid her and the entire House of Ink. What I want to know is why would the MC go talk to any of them at this point? Sure they are hot but he's sitting next to a hot woman who wants to work with him. The latter can't be said for any of the house of ink ladies that work for Reina... Even if they did want to work with him it doesn't matter, Cassandra would make their lives a living hell.

So I think that's my biggest question... Why would the MC contact any of them again (besides for a fuck)?

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[HandofVecna]

Are you seriously repeating what you just said literally two posts above yours?
Yes, i find most of the girls here attractive and judging by the reviews and comments i'm not the only one
I get this isn't to your liking, so maybe it's time to move on since i don't see the dev changin the entire char design of the game

Why are you even responding to me? It's not like I tanked the Dev game in the ratings. I never asked him to change the models. I wished him good luck in fact. The comment you quoted was deleted b/c it was a response to another member and the quote didn't carry over. I also get its not to my liking. I am also moving on.

You like the game great. Post your five star rating. Cool. I don't get it but cool. I don't get WMV either but I get the art. Whatever.

 

[Headingley]

Loved this first release was very fun to play through, apart from when Cassie was around that bitch can fuck right off. I loved the name

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that had me laughing so hard. And the ghost with DJ KinK so funny. I cant wait for the next drop.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

We shall have to wait and see (not my strong suit) as to what the dev comes up with next. Personally love wildly speculating about a game but don't want the developer to think I am "ordering a plot" as you said. Very impressed by this first entry and hope that what comes next is a well plotted and written story which makes some sense - even if it is merely internally consistent. I get incredibly tired of playing games where the developer/writer makes decisions based on how long it has been since the last lewd scene and not on what is logical for the story.



Yeah, I caught that as I had my MC say he loved her. I don't really care after all of what she has done. It's like "of course she did"... I just have to hope the developer is smart enough to know that since we've been set up to hate her, and we do hate her, it would be incredibly dumb to force the player/MC to interact with her.

Player choice going forward needs to become more robust - offering the option to turn down lewd scenes (masturbation scenes included) and to refuse to interact with people going forward. Since June tried and failed to get the MC a job then the player should be able to choose to avoid her and the entire House of Ink. What I want to know is why would the MC go talk to any of them at this point? Sure they are hot but he's sitting next to a hot woman who wants to work with him. The latter can't be said for any of the house of ink ladies that work for Reina... Even if they did want to work with him it doesn't matter, Cassandra would make their lives a living hell.

So I think that's my biggest question... Why would the MC contact any of them again (besides for a fuck)?

i hope the dev stays on his line of the story -- too much listen to the mindplay of users can go terrible wrong

 

[pochops]

Loved this first release was very fun to play through, apart from when Cassie was around that bitch can fuck right off. I loved the name

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that had me laughing so hard. And the ghost with DJ KinK so funny. I cant wait for the next drop.

I've played games where bitches lie, betray, cheat, and completely fuck over the mc. I'm playing one game where the wife cheats and has a baby by another man, the mc forgives her and accepts the daughter as his own, then the wife cheats on him again. But I can honestly say that never in the history of porn games have I ever wanted revenge more than on that foul bitch Cassandra. I'm hoping my pledge to Patreon just now plays a little part in making vengeance happen.

 

[smurfy]

Very nice first release. Lets hope this isnt one of those that shoot their load all at once and releases semi regularly. Definitely one to keep an eye on... And I also really hope we get to serve up some nice revenge on the mc's ex!

 

[MrFriendly]

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Ugh, I hope not. Cassandra can make their lives even more difficult, hiring the MC could cost them a few clients as well as put a huge dent in their reputation when they've only been around for a handful of years. It would make no sense for them to take him on as an employee based off one interview that makes her look bad. I'd much rather see Reina apologize to him, explain the situation, and try to get him a job somewhere else - perhaps at one of the small startups that they help out. I also hope that we won't see TWR hiring the MC either. That's a fairly standard plot... Much rather have the MC focus on Kindra, the parents project, and avoiding Cassandra.

i hope the dev stays on his line of the story -- too much listen to the mindplay of users can go terrible wrong

Oh, absolutely. My speculation (and I am sure many others) is wishful thinking and hopes and dreams and rainbows and fluffy kittens. I don't expect the dev to give two shits about what I say on this website. Keep trying to tell people that I am taken far too seriously considering I'm a wackadoodle with a sesame street character as my avatar.

 

[radical686]

Everyone must be playing a different game than me. I don't leave ratings and I try not to be negative. So I won't be. But you ALL played a TOTALLY different game than I did based on all the praise and ratings...

Good luck Dev and thanks for sharing your game.

*Edit: I will say I found none of the models visually attractive at all, not even a little, so that likely has a lot to do with my thoughts. If you find the models attractive this is probably why you like the game. IDK. To me there was nothing special about the models and if anything they are very unattractive. To each there own.
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To each his own. I think a lot of people, like me, gave it a strong review for the writing alone. There were times the models looked awkward, the sweat/wet-look just looked odd, and some of the faces were too angular. But, the writing for this game is one the best I've seen on this board.

 

[Spawn420]

could anyone clue me in on where are some of those SD cards are laying around?
im missing Kindra's 2nd one(the right one), June, Claire and Reina..

 

[MrFriendly]

To each his own. I think a lot of people, like me, gave it a strong review for the writing alone. There were times the models looked awkward, the sweat/wet-look just looked odd, and some of the faces were too angular. But, the writing for this game is one the best I've seen on this board.

Considering the number of poorly written, coded, and spelled games we see everyday on this site I give this game a lot of points for being a strong story with well thought out characters with very few errors (grammar or otherwise). Are the renders the best I've ever seen? No. Are the graphics better than the average games on this site? Yes, in fact they are above average. I agree with everything you said about the sweat/wet-look and the angular faces. However, I am willing to put up with a lot if the story is good. Best to ignore people who make hyperbolic statements about the quality of a game, it's most often just trolling for attention.

 

[Dessous]

Everyone must be playing a different game than me. I don't leave ratings and I try not to be negative. So I won't be. But you ALL played a TOTALLY different game than I did based on all the praise and ratings...

Good luck Dev and thanks for sharing your game.

*Edit: I will say I found none of the models visually attractive at all, not even a little, so that likely has a lot to do with my thoughts. If you find the models attractive this is probably why you like the game. IDK. To me there was nothing special about the models and if anything they are very unattractive. To each there own.
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I feel you, man. I saw 28 5-star reviews and got excited, but then I saw the screenshots and understood that I won't enjoy this game. Just wanted to see that I'm not alone on this before moving on.

 

[frenk]

I don't actually remember a game where I hated a female character so much.
The developer did a great job i hope it doesn't complicate things too much.
The concept of Artemis is somewhat reminiscent of Alita Batte Angel.
I apologize for the bad English (google translator).

 

[baku.k]

Ugh, I hope not. Cassandra can make their lives even more difficult, hiring the MC could cost them a few clients as well as put a huge dent in their reputation when they've only been around for a handful of years. It would make no sense for them to take him on as an employee based off one interview that makes her look bad. I'd much rather see Reina apologize to him, explain the situation, and try to get him a job somewhere else - perhaps at one of the small startups that they help out. I also hope that we won't see TWR hiring the MC either. That's a fairly standard plot... Much rather have the MC focus on Kindra, the parents project, and avoiding Cassandra.

Yeah why not... But in then same time, it seems that Cassie is going to have a hard time during the interview. Not sure that the Reina firm will continue to have this contract

 

[MrFriendly]

Yeah why not... But in then same time, it seems that Cassie is going to have a hard time during the interview. Not sure that the Reina firm will continue to have this contract

We'll have to see... I just can't figure out a reason that Reina would give up the contract, people lie in business all the time... ALL THE TIME... so Reina not working with TWR because of it seems ridiculous. Reina and the girls at IV didn't do anything wrong, they didn't hire the MC just as Cassandra ensured so I don't see a reason why she would cancel a contract with IV. Only way that I can see is if Cassandra blames them for her poor performance during the interview (since they may be her PR team) but even then that doesn't explain why the MC would want to work for them... I see no motivation for him to want to work there. If Kindra is making bank, is willing to let him stay, and he is "working" for her on her parent's project... What does he need IV for exactly?

 

[Grohal]

Everyone must be playing a different game than me. I don't leave ratings and I try not to be negative. So I won't be. But you ALL played a TOTALLY different game than I did based on all the praise and ratings...

Good luck Dev and thanks for sharing your game.

*Edit: I will say I found none of the models visually attractive at all, not even a little, so that likely has a lot to do with my thoughts. If you find the models attractive this is probably why you like the game. IDK. To me there was nothing special about the models and if anything they are very unattractive. To each there own.
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They have a unique style for sure. But that does not make them unattractive in my book.
I admit I am more of a story and how they act and react to how I treat them-type. And this top notch here imo.

 

[HandofVecna]

To each his own. I think a lot of people, like me, gave it a strong review for the writing alone. There were times the models looked awkward, the sweat/wet-look just looked odd, and some of the faces were too angular. But, the writing for this game is one the best I've seen on this board.

That's a fair assessment. For me this is a visual medium firstly and it's not to my taste. That's okay.

I'm not going to ravage the game for it and I didn't. I certainly didn't anticipate fan boys jumping down my throat b/c I didn't find the models attractive. I went in with high hopes giving the ratings and high praise despite the screenshots in the OP. I was to say the least disappointed. That's all. I'm not asking the Dev to tailor to my wants and needs as some responders to my post have irrationally concluded. I'm not rating the game negatively or attacking the Dev personally, no. I wish them nothing but luck.

I am however just trying to figure out what it is others see. You've helped with your comment. Thank you.

Like I said I don't get WMV, though I do get the art. Here I couldn't get past the art (no I could not do better). Animations are really well done but for me the rest was just not. Also, the intro was a bit tedious for me. That's me. The rest of you love it and that's great!

 

[Shar4263]

I hope to see the mother again in the game, when first I saw the wallpaper I assumed her as a sister or best friend but man she is too hot, I'm pretty sure dev have big plans for her in future updates.

The game doesn't clearly explain her deal with military in this update or what happen to her, If she is dead than I really want to see her face with Artemis for sure, and If she's still with military than the story can be more interesting.

And for Cassie, I don't think she is going with any financial problem in near updates, she is clearly the main antagonist of this VN, but I believe MC will grow some balls in the next updates to confront her and may be we can get some corruption with her.

 

[scrappy]

Edit: Updated for v0.5.1

Changelog:

• made Naomi fight easier
• added answers to hacking game
• option to get Both Naomi and Kindra scenes

I've made a multi-mod for this game


Features:

• Walkthrough - added green color for best dialogue options
• Added unlock all options for the archives (scenes and images)
• During free roam objects that can be interacted with are highlighted
• Scene changes (Can get both Katy and Zoe scenes, can call both Katy and Zelda)

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