VN Ren'Py Abandoned Artificial Life [v0.01] [Grinvald]

[BESEV]

Overview:
The main character is Alex Pollack, a successful young businessman, and programmer who founded and headed his own company for the development of artificial intelligence systems. The story begins from the moment when the main antagonist appears on his way, representing a powerful person who wants to use the main character to achieve his goals. This confrontation will lead to serious changes in the life of the main character.

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Thread Updated: 2021-07-22
Release Date: 2021-07-22
Developer: Grinvald

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Censored: No
Version: 0.01
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English, Russian
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[Cunt]

Moved to games and good luck. For the dev badge please open a ticket.

 

[chicken head]

With the "right" choice of the story development option, it will be possible to assemble a full harem,
Oh Yes I am IN

 

[The Hash Slinging Slasher]

Well, it has a redhead so i guess i'll give it a try (all the girls looks good)

 

[BESEV]

Moved to games and good luck. For the dev badge please open a ticket.

Thanks, I'll do it.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[AlBetGam]

there will be no pink ponies who eat rainbows and poop butterflies

Finally- I'm so darn tired of seeing pink ponies in everybloody game these days.

 

[Rinbael]

Well I tried this and it seems alright. The renders are pretty good and the MC isn't a manlet with Elvis hair so it's better than most new games released on this site.

The story is pretty unique but personally I found it kind of dull and uninteresting hopefully it picks up later on and Chris seems to be the usual annoying best friend character so I hope he gets developed more later on.

It's probably just me being fussy but I didn't like any of the love interests shown so far. After finding out about Lucy's history with Beth I'm not interested in her and I don't trust or like Kate so she's out and I don't like or want to date any characters that work for the MC so the other two are out as well.

I'm just curious are there any other potential love interests to be introduced or are the four shown the only ones planned?

 

[rKnight]

The main character is Alex Pollack, a successful young businessman, and programmer who founded and headed his own company for the development of artificial intelligence systems.

Alex Pollack says "artificial intelligence is humanity's greatest threat."

Girl : "You'd like to FUCK MY CODE, wouldn't you?"

 

[BESEV]

Well I tried this and it seems alright. The renders are pretty good and the MC isn't a manlet with Elvis hair so it's better than most new games released on this site.

The story is pretty unique but personally I found it kind of dull and uninteresting hopefully it picks up later on and Chris seems to be the usual annoying best friend character so I hope he gets developed more later on.

It's probably just me being fussy but I didn't like any of the love interests shown so far. After finding out about Lucy's history with Beth I'm not interested in her and I don't trust or like Kate so she's out and I don't like or want to date any characters that work for the MC so the other two are out as well.

I'm just curious are there any other potential love interests to be introduced or are the four shown the only ones planned?

Thank you for your feedback. I suspected that the story might seem dull, but I needed to introduce the player to where it all starts. In the future, I do not plan such long dialogues and explanations.

Next, there will be some spoilers.

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At the moment, all my efforts are focused on these four female characters, so I'm not planning any others yet.

 

[Longs]

Why does Alex suffer at the beginning of the game? it seems to me or the story will still be bad

 

[Rinbael]

Thank you for your feedback. I suspected that the story might seem dull, but I needed to introduce the player to where it all starts. In the future, I do not plan such long dialogues and explanations.

Next, there will be some spoilers.
There will be no development of relations between Beth and Lucy, since Beth is the wife of the main character's best friend (I don't like NTR). Kate will have a special role in the whole story. If the problem is that Jane and Kelly work for the main character, then this will change soon enough due to the main story twist.
At the moment, all my efforts are focused on these four female characters, so I'm not planning any others yet.

I had a feeling you were setting up some stuff for the plot and I hope the story picks up in the future since it is a change from the usual stuff on this site even if it is kind of dull right now.

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[Rory Smith]

Ntr planned or not ?? If yes, i out of here!!

 

[BESEV]

Why does Alex suffer at the beginning of the game? it seems to me or the story will still be bad

Why he suffers, I can't say in detail, because these will be serious spoilers. I can only say that there will be" bad "endings, but there will also be "good" ones.

 

[BESEV]

I had a feeling you were setting up some stuff for the plot and I hope the story picks up in the future since it is a change from the usual stuff on this site even if it is kind of dull right now.

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Yes, that's right. I'm planning a sharp story twist in the near future. It was important for me to tell in detail what the essence of the confrontation between Alex and Henry Parker is, otherwise in the future the motives of the actions of all the actors will be unclear. As for the female characters - their character will be revealed further, and maybe they will open up from the other side and become more interesting to you

 

[BESEV]

Ntr planned or not ?? If yes, i out of here!!

No, I don't like NTR, therefore there will be no NTR.

 

[Azsouth]

would love if we can change the MC's name

 

[HansDampf788]

Oh well I stopped reading the OP when this line came up

as close as possible to reality

realism is the biggest enemy of a porn game.

 

[v1900]

For a moment there I felt like a former president grabbing people by the pussy.

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Hahaha, shit, hahaha, I invited her to watch cartoons and had a good laugh with that dialogue. We are missing the humor tag.

 

[DisabledAccount1110202308]

Here's my feedback, the story and dialogs are boring, jokes are stupid, the models are terrible, etc.

In all seriousness, this look great: renders are crisp and backgrounds are detailed, lighting is also good, characters are unique and attractive, nice to see original looking MC. And that's exactly how you write a synopsis, it provides all the info you would need to know before playing. Please add "Planned Tags/Genres" to signify future content, it's not necessary but it is important info for players and supporters.

My advice to you regarding realism in your VN would be to not bend over backwards to seek it, if it comes naturally in your storytelling then go for it, but don't try to be the unique, realistic creator. People come here to get away from real life and its problems, some fiction or bending of reality can go a long ways in making us forget our problems temporarily, and immersing us in the game. Also regarding 18+ content, we're on a porn site, although all of us would appreciate a great story, we're here for the sex, so just be generous with the adult content. This is just my 2 cents, best of luck to you, and thank you for sharing your work BESEV!