The story's cool, the characters are cool and interesting to learn about and the fights can be enjoyable. Two things though
First, why are the areas so needlessly massive? It has no business having such a huge scale, you can fit all the things there it on a 10 or more times smaller screen. As it is it takes ages to go anywhere in the city, you HAVE to remember where everything is since you can't see where you're going from a distance and quests where you search for stuff is the city become a nightmare. Imo it also cheapens otherwise impressive environmental details when you see the same tile arrangement reused again and again in the same area. This wouldn't be a thing if the size of the map was more manageable.
Second, and it may be just my taste, but what is with those scenes. I get femdom aspect in the loss ones but why is there always humiliation, "you're too weak, be a man", "i'm only doing this because I have to" and Zeno can't say or do anything in the consentual ones? You'd think that in the consentual scenes girls could admit they want and enjoy sex since they started this whole thing, or that MC would be capable of doing something more than just laying there and taking it. The whole premise is he's the only one who can still think straight due to him being unaffected by the protocol but going by the scenes it looks like the opposite