That's excellent. If you ask me, the potential lies in the start and the economics - how far will Asa debase herself to get to the point where she can be successful?
I would give the economics a real think-through so they remain relevant for a much longer time. (Now you start out in a crunch, but quickly climb out of it; then it's just massive inflation).
Other ideas:
* While Asa considers herself a hard-working girl, maybe she can go out on a personal date as well. I would love it if she could hook up with a man, ideally a coercive strong male that continuously asks Asa to do harder and harder sex, more partners etc.
* I've already mentioned the landlord upthread. Maybe he can ask Asa to videotape their fucking (in return for a significant time of free rent). If you agree, he will come back and blackmail you with it. The idea here is to have a story where Asa has to keep fucking her landlord well after gaining financial independence (otherwise he just disappears from the story).
* random strangers in dark alleys. Some will give Asa a chance of letting off steam; others will strongarm her into sex. Maybe she'll recognize one as a corporate client down the road, and have to choose to keep silent (let him keep abusing her), or lose a lot of progress with the company
* she could gain a gambling addiction (a new track where she actually loses money; this is good since otherwise she quickly becomes rich with the only issue how many girls she can buy at a time). Once she cannot or will not pay off her debt, the mobsters put her to work fucking instead. She keeps gambling, she digs a deeper hole, she must accept harder sex, gangbangs etc. Maybe it can end with either her Luxcort boss or the man she meets on a personal date saving her. That is, if she goes along with everything they suggest, they can in the end make the brutal gangsters disappear.
Hope this gives you some ideas!
PS. The ASA game is definitely not letting gameplay get in the way of H content. Cheers
