Game could use a working replay gallery. Perhaps add some scenes you can actually unlock by playing the game

For the shills you could add a link to the dlc pack when you say it's exclusive content.
Does not taking the chocolate condoms lead to missing a sex scene or pregnancy? Former would be disappointing while the latter could be enjoyable for those who like that fetish.
Puzzles could be a bit harder than "Read you fucking idiots, READ!!!"

Get to safe, maybe search for clues, nah here is the combo can the dumb monkey put it in. Well it wasn't all that bad
as I got a easily stowable sex slave out of it but I guess it wasn't water proof or fire resistant as she's still breathing...
Girls are cute even if the game tries to make you a wingman at the beginning

I really hope the cruelty trait will let other men know it's a very bad idea to touch things that belong to me

Almost makes me wonder if the $5 HD update would be good for the blood splatter