VN Ren'Py Ashes of the Sun [v0.40] [Pandarinka]

[Vortex@]

Checked the entire script. Did not happen. As I said, imagination.

BAM!! Someone didn't read the scenes. It's also in the script

Spoiler: MOM

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[Juerhullycin]

I think maybe you should make your own game. You seem to have a lot of ideas. Then it can be exactly how you want it to be... oh wait... everyone will then be complaining about some small increment of your idea, because it does not fit into EXACTLY how they envision EVERY game should be. Well... that would suck for you .
Was Elisabeth's role actually describe as "mom, stepmom, landlady or guardian". NO.
That is all in someones imagination. There is NO incest tag for this game and no incest either.
(I have no doubt that some people will be heartbroken over that *boo hoo*).
I might also have to remind everyone that not only is Ethan a doctor, and he has also traveled extensively. He is obviously not a child unless he was the prodigy of all time.
That could lead to the possibility that perhaps Elisabeth is Ethan's wife . What a concept!
We can't have normal sex between married couples in a game. The goes against... well there must
be a law somewhere .

Checked the entire script. Did not happen. As I said, imagination.

 

[Vortex@]

Lol, just realized, you must be one of the only ones not using the Patch

And here is another script line E is Elizabeth, Et is Ethan



Ethan "protecting my family", speaking with his Mom

 

[chaosbox24]

Thanks for the warning .

I checked the game in more detail. "Miss Elisabeth Hart" is how she is referred. She traveled the world with Ethan for years.
During this time he introduced a cure for Amyloidosis. (Sorry for the big word).
Elisabeth and Ethan are not related in any way.
Ethan is also older than main character as stated clearly in the game.
I am never afraid to admit when I am wrong. Elizabeth is not married to Ethan at this time.
Everything else came from the script and is "fact" unless you do not believe what the dev wrote into the game .
The truth is, I do not care at all if you believe me or not.
If you are competent, you can "fact check" for yourself. Alright... maybe that is asking too much .

Damn you really showed up to the thread in your biggest clown car, huh?

 

[Famescua]

Damn, I'm not into ntr and yes it's technically not ntr. The thing that gets me is that the dev put a tab in the gallery with Ethan's name not Elisabeth's. That just makes me think that there will be more Ethan scenes, and the worst part was that you can't even skip watching it and the MC is aroused by it. All i can say is that in a game tagged harem, you don't really want to see scenes with other guys. Ok I have said my peace. I know some will agree with me and some won't but that is why this is a forum, so all can express their thoughts and opinions.

 

[Famescua]

There is one solution to what SEEMS to be everyone's problem here.

Oh, what could that be?
Well it is pretty simple...

Finance the game $...

Oh whaaaat?!!!

Well, I guess you will have no say then...
and will not get the REAL version either (23.7GB compressed )

Sorry, but I don't make the rules.

Yeah unfortunately I don't finance games that have kinks I'm not into. Just so you know I do support a few devs here and not just complain about games and be a pirate. (although I am one)

P.S.
I also support devs with compression, proofreading and beta testing

 

[Juerhullycin]

There is one solution to what SEEMS to be everyone's problem here.

Oh, what could that be?
Well it is pretty simple...

Finance the game $...

Oh whaaaat?!!!

Well, I guess you will have no say then...
and will not get the REAL version either (23.7GB compressed )

Sorry, but I don't make the rules.

Yeah that is how i conduct business in general.

Eating out at a restaurant and finding a rat swimming in your soup?
- Pay them double and check back at least twice a week, to help them pay for better health and food safety standards.

A game developer/publisher cuts out a portion of their game and sells it as day one DLC for an additional 15 bucks?
-Buy the game and the DLC, twice. Just to let the Dev know that he can leave the content in the game and doesn't need to bother with the extra work of cutting it out.

 

[Famescua]

Yeah that is how i conduct business in general.

Eating out at a restaurant and finding a rat swimming in your soup?
- Pay them double and check back at least twice a week, to help them pay for better health and food safety standards.

A game developer/publisher cuts out a portion of their game and sells it as day one DLC for an additional 15 bucks?
-Buy the game and the DLC, twice. Just to let the Dev know that he can leave the content in the game and doesn't need to bother with the extra work of cutting it out.

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You know how it is. People are always trying to white knight for the devs of these games. I have no problem if they want to defend the dev from a game they like. I just wish they would use facts rather than arguments that don't make sense or have any proof to back up what they say.

 

[TKdropemoff]

There is one solution to what SEEMS to be everyone's problem here.

Oh, what could that be?
Well it is pretty simple...

Finance the game $...

Oh whaaaat?!!!

Well, I guess you will have no say then...
and will not get the REAL version either (23.7GB compressed )

Sorry, but I don't make the rules.

dumbest shit I read today.

 

[Juerhullycin]

dumbest shit I read today.

same and i use X(twitter)

 

[Vortex@]

Pay for content someone doesn't like and HOPE it's made avoidable? Or for more of it not to be added in later?

"Man, this is the last update.... I hope we don't have any more cuck content like we keep having. Good thing I subscribed, maybe it'll get fixed eventually"

 

[Pandarinka]

There will be no NTR or cheating in the game.

 

[Juerhullycin]

There will be no NTR or cheating in the game.

MC can do cuck stuff without NTR as we have seen in the last update

 

[Pandarinka]

MC can do cuck stuff without NTR as we have seen in the last update

Cuckold
A man whose partner is sexually unfaithful to him, often used in the context of humiliation, especially when he knows about it.

Voyeurism
The practice of gaining sexual pleasure from watching others when they are naked or engaged in sexual activity, typically without them knowing.

Seems like you're a bit confused about the terms, pal.

 

[TKdropemoff]

Cuckold
A man whose partner is sexually unfaithful to him, often used in the context of humiliation, especially when he knows about it.

Voyeurism
The practice of gaining sexual pleasure from watching others when they are naked or engaged in sexual activity, typically without them knowing.

Seems like you're a bit confused about the terms, pal.

voyeurism, cuck shit, whatever. I just know I don't like it, period. Idc what are the definitions of it, or what context it's used in respectfully.

From the reactions to the voyeur scene would be appreciated if that crap can be avoided. Like some said already, not interested in seeing others have sex in a harem game if that is what this is suppose to be. Nor like seeing the MC jerking off to other's having sex etc. personally if I wanted that, I wouldn't be playing novels in the first place, not a harem one if this one is even a harem to begin with, since it got all these path splits. And like I said from the reaction here, I am not alone in this aspect of not being a fan of the voyeur scene..

If you don't mind answering this. Will it be any more scenes of the MC seeing others have sex? Me personally i am hoping for a NO. But if it is, will it be optional this time? Even tho scenes like that imo is a waste of time and renders and can be used for the MC in HIS love interest.

 

[Pandarinka]

voyeurism, cuck shit, whatever. I just know I don't like it, period. Idc what are the definitions of it, or what context it's used in respectfully.

From the reactions to the voyeur scene would be appreciated if that crap can be avoided. Like some said already, not interested in seeing others have sex in a harem game if that is what this is suppose to be. Nor like seeing the MC jerking off to other's having sex etc. personally if I wanted that, I wouldn't be playing novels in the first place, not a harem one if this one is even a harem to begin with, since it got all these path splits. And like I said from the reaction here, I am not alone in this aspect of not being a fan of the voyeur scene..

If you don't mind answering this. Will it be any more scenes of the MC seeing others have sex? Me personally i am hoping for a NO. But if it is, will it be optional this time? Even tho scenes like that imo is a waste of time and renders and can be used for the MC in HIS love interest.

Honestly, I'd rather leave things as they are — especially considering you're calling my hard work "crap" just because the scene doesn't suit your tastes.

But I'll make it avoidable and it'll have consequences cause it's significant to the plot. I haven't decided yet if there will be more scenes like this. If I feel like I should add it, I will.

I've received criticism in many places — itch.io, Discord, and other forums — but nowhere have I seen such a level of disrespect as here. All of this over a single scene. Seems like people here have forgotten how to communicate respectfully.

I'm stepping away from this forum, not because I can't handle feedback, but because I prefer to focus on places where constructive dialogue is possible. If you'd like to follow the game's development or share respectful feedback, you're welcome on my Discord server.

 

[Boardguy]

But I'll make it avoidable and it'll have consequences cause it's significant to the plot.

Wouldn't it just be easier to have the protag hear them possibly about to get intimate and then fuck off or stay? There isn't a reason for a scene like that to be required viewing.

 

[TKdropemoff]

Honestly, I'd rather leave things as they are — especially considering you're calling my hard work "crap" just because the scene doesn't suit your tastes.

But I'll make it avoidable and it'll have consequences cause it's significant to the plot. I haven't decided yet if there will be more scenes like this. If I feel like I should add it, I will.

I've received criticism in many places — itch.io, Discord, and other forums — but nowhere have I seen such a level of disrespect as here. All of this over a single scene. Seems like people here have forgotten how to communicate respectfully.

I'm stepping away from this forum, not because I can't handle feedback, but because I prefer to focus on places where constructive dialogue is possible. If you'd like to follow the game's development or share respectful feedback, you're welcome on my Discord server.

well for once i didn't call your work crap.. i am mostly just talking about the aspect in general of VOYEUR being crap in my opinion since I dislike that stuff. So please don't say I said that.


Because that is wrong. In general i think your game has potential.. But things like all those path splits etc when it's suppose to be a harem, is kinda jarring. Other than that, people have been constructive here about your game.


And any disrespect you claim was mostly among themselves in individual quarrel about the game which is nothing new on here. I don't at all think disrespect towards a dev is good at all.. it's just a game at the end of the day, not that serious.


But that's beside the point. It seems if you feel something is "for the plot" you will add it, which imo will not go over well like the voyeur scene we somehow had to see cuz it's important as you claim for some reason.


And you have not decided yet if anymore of those scenes will be in the game, nor will anything that you claim is important added in it. I don't get how seeing that adds anything, but ok.


Once again idk what disrespect you talking about.. From what I read no one disrespected you personally on here, most are talking about the game which is fine if you see it that way. I understand it must not feel good seeing people shitting on something you spend time on.. But that's just the reality of being a dev.

Well it's whatever. There are 100000 of games on here.. Can just move on to something else.

Good luck.

 

[Juerhullycin]

Cuckold
A man whose partner is sexually unfaithful to him, often used in the context of humiliation, especially when he knows about it.

Voyeurism
The practice of gaining sexual pleasure from watching others when they are naked or engaged in sexual activity, typically without them knowing.

Seems like you're a bit confused about the terms, pal.

They are separated by a soaking wet tissue, at best. I simply don't see a reason to bother with separating them in the first place.

Next time MC will hide in a closet in the same room, and in the following scene, he will sit in the corner of the room.

MC is a cuck.

Edit: your answer got points for effort, but i'm sure you can do better.

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[Boardguy]

They are separated by a soaking wet tissue, at best. I simply don't see a reason to bother with separating them in the first place.

I would say more like a membrane since they can exchange ideas IMO. The difference is likely the lack of humiliation. The MC randomly deciding to jerk off to it might fit the category or not, especially since he has several potential girls already interested in him or has done stuff with said girls already. I have already said that voyeurism in these kinda games is never really a good idea, since they are sorta pointless for the genre.