VN - Unity - Ashes of War [Ch1.19] [CTStudio]

Ashes of War features a wide variety of characters with distinct personalities and as of writing this review is trying to make an actual game, not just a visual novel (although the game elements are still very early in development).

So I will focus more on the story and the characters then the gameplay elements:

Overall score: I loved it 10/10
- I will admit that there are times when I just skip the story, either because it is bad or meh, but not this time. From the start, the story got me hooked, and I actually finished everything in one sitting, wanting more. It was pretty straightforward, but what stood out were well written characters that got me wanting more.

Story:
- The story is good, and is as the overview of the game sets it out. War between two factions, rebellion against incompetent military bureaucrats and your adventure begins! While the story itself didn't subvert my expectations or present some surprises, it is solid and provides a good background for the main showstopper of the game, which are the characters inhabiting this universe.

Characters:
- The characters is what captured my attention the most. They are well written, have their own quirks and personalities and they don't feel plastic or two dimensional. I never got a feeling that I could just sum them up in a phrase or a couple of words, and this is what for me at least made this game truly shine.

Conclusion:
- I hope that the creator continues down this route and keeps expanding the game. If there were any additional gameplay elements I think they will eventually blend in very well and provide a necessary pause before you continue exploring the true gem of Ashes of War, the inhabitants pursuing their own agenda, and their interactions with the main case.

Keep up the good work!

Ok, this game is amazing, I'm curious about the characters and the further story, so far we've explored very little of the world, but everything is coherent and waiting for development, I like each of the 4 heroines, along with Xi, but I don't know if she will join our harem, well, the harem is not in the first place only relationships, thanks to which the development of events seems natural, our officers also have characters, I like Aiden, which is a plus because often in this type of games, apart from potential interests, there are no interesting characters, although it would be nice if they gave a separate graphic for Grant, what's more, I am curious about the further story and whether our choices influence it from now on it's my second favorite game on the site after superhuman
PS, sorry for English, it's not my first language

Amazing game, not for porn though

As you can see from the rating, I really like this one. That is down mainly to two reasons:

The Writing
Very nicely written, interesting story with cool characters and jokes that mostly land (as someone having a very tall big sister I feel for poor Ethan). I am honestly more interested in continuing the story than anything else here.

Polish
This does not feel like a one programmer project. The art is great (not sure who made it, sorry), the VFX, damn... This has 3D cut scenes AND THEY LOOK GOOD?!?! The UI is nothing special (it's mostly a visual novel after all) in terms of navigation but here's the thing: It works. I have not seen a single bug or error (looking at half of the Renpy games on this site) - turns out using a real game engine has some advantages. The only part of the game that didn't feel "finished" yet is the space warfare system. I already liked it and played all the battles (despite not having to) but it could use a bit more variety - and behold - it's currently being reworked.

So, about the heading - why not a great game for porn? Well, easy: There so far are very few lewd scenes (looking at Camille belly muscles did things to me I didn't know were possible though). The art itself is good as mentioned but there is no voiceover or anything like that for those scenes and not a lot of different visuals -> This may all change in the future, who knows.

I really appreciate seeing something so high quality here - give it a shot if you don't need to fap but to just enjoy a nice read with some giggles sometimes.

What I would like to see
- As mentioned more variety in the space battles
- Ability to replay scenes (not just CG gallery)
- More Eva. We stan Eva.
- Customization for This is essential for immersion!

Reviewed Version: 1.17

Ashes of War Ch1.17

This game fucks.

While browsing F95, I randomly stumbled upon AoW. And I decided to give it a try since I saw it had both Sci-Fi and Romance tags and can I just say? It blew my expectations straight out of the sky(Or I suppose Space would be more apropos).

Pros:

• The art style is a major pro, managing to encapsulate both subtle and overt expressions.
  • Character design is also a major highlight.
• I know porn games tend to set the bar rather low for characters acting believable but the writing manages to do just that, even the MC is competent(hallelujah!).
  • The bridge banter with the XO & Co is also top-notch.
• The world-building is great, you got corpos using PMCs(Just like Coca-Cola), galactic scale war and even planet/system descriptions reminiscent of Mass Effect.
• Arrogant ace pilot and smol smuggler? Sir, they are my wives right there.
• Soundtrack was also enjoyable.

Cons:

• It's a slight con but the combat elements are a tad barebones(I call it slight because Dev has addressed this).
• Ayo MC dick looking hella sus lmao(jkjkjk).
• Dev referred to themselves as "baguette brained" Thus implying they are Fre*ch, automatically a con(Dear French people, I am joking. Please put down the Assault Baguettes).

Suggestions (if at all possible):

• A character creator for the MC? Obviously, it would be too much work to custom-create the different H-scenes for every combination but the option to have a custom portrait for dialogue would be much appreciated.
• Greater utilization of the Codex, perhaps for character/romance information and chosen choices.
• This is a biggie, but I wish we could have moar choices with consequences.

Okay, with all of that out of the way. I really enjoyed what I've seen so far, obviously, this AVN is still very early in the dev cycle but there is a lot of potential, in the words of Palpatine, I shall watch your career with great interest.

Fantastic Art, nice music and a lot of potential.

This is certainly a game to watch out and support if you're in any way a fan of the Sci-Fi genre. Or just like good anime-style art.

My only gripe so far is there's too litle of it and no replay gallery. Hopefully, new updates will fix both.

Heavens, i can hear the music... Truly a magnificent select of soundtracks, and the art, characters, story, dialogues, plot development and build up is decently well done. If i could help with the writing ill jump in it without question but aside from that personal feeling, i have hopes for this story to maintain its pace so that it does not crumble apart. Everything here has its own charm, for a vn, this novel offers a rich (it can be richer) and immersive (it can be more immersive) experience that i think challenges the reader to think deeply about the philosophical questions that it raises. Some of the questions that I found intriguing are:

• What is the meaning of war and peace in a world where violence and destruction are inevitable? How can we find hope and purpose in such a world? How can we prevent war from repeating itself?
• What is the moral responsibility of a soldier who follows orders versus a deserter who follows his conscience? How do we judge the rightness or wrongness of their actions? How do we deal with the guilt and regret that they may feel?
• What is the essence of love and romance in a situation where life and death are uncertain? How do they express their feelings and emotions? How do they cope with the jealousy and rivalry that may arise from their polyamorous relationships?

These are some of the food for thought that this novel provides and that in summary, gives you kinda the whole concept the vn has worked. I think this novel is a great example of creativity in an engaging way. I highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys military sci-fi, romance, and deep soundtracks.

Great art. Seriously, really great art.
Cinematics are really nice too.
Story is intesting to read, interactions between NPCs are well written.
Only one s*x scene by LI, but dev warned us : game in progress.
Not really fan of Space Battles, but they are skipable.
Following this game !

Still WIP but this seems like a diamond in the making, characters dynamic is fun to read. Because of the nature of the story I thought it gonna starts slow and will rain us with info dump but it starts up real fast, which I do prefer. Cant wait for more updates and keep it up

So good so far the story is nice, classic pacing really love the charc design i relly love the atmosphere of the spaceship
i ope there is an awsome develop for the charct
will leave it on hold until a major realese of content so i don't burn it

I've got to hand it to them, even though I'm not a big fan of VN's I stuck around for this one. Story's solid, characters are likable, and the H scenes aren't half bad. Hopefully more gets added within a reasonable time frame, but from what I've seen so far I'd recommend.

Man this is a hidden diamond if I ever saw one.
Great art, good H scenes MUSCLE TOMBOYS.
Cool characters and lore, also dialog and personalities sound realisitc, it's surprisingly rare for characters in games here to sound like real ppl but hey, this game does it and it's not often a adult game makes me stop and actualy read so good job, great game so far.

A stylized star empire story where the graphics and art are great, the characters are engaging, and the H scenes are promising. I'm not sure if CTStudio plans additional characters, but they have shown that they can write. While mechanics are alpha stage, I see a lot of promise on many fronts, including gameplay, story, H scenes, and world building. I note that at the time of this review, CTStudio already has plans to expand the combat system and develop further H scenes. While I hope that the developer can incorporate more of the H scenes into the story, the four scenes included at this point do feel a touch forced, but nothing obtuse. Well done!

Excellent art & writing and includes space cutscenes! The humor was funny and not overbearing, love the banter. The writing really impressed me. Excited for more and I think this could become one of the best mature vn's out there.

The story is pretty good, though as stated by the author not exactly branching. The smut and smutty art is very solid too, as is actually just the art in general. The combat is a bit barebones overall, though it's not exactly the focus of the game anyways and it's still in alpha anyways; it's probably the most "meh" part of it in my opinion and it's still interesting.

The characters are great, gib moar chocolate tomboy childhood friend mechanic nao

I had very high hopes for this game, which is not fair, because when it failed to meet them, I just sort of lost interest with each passing scene.

First the good.

- The core gameplay is a pretty well done space tactics simulator. Nothing amazing, but its cute and fun and not a chore to play (props for giving a skip option).
- The artwork is gorgeous. The girls are pretty, and the set pieces and ships are lovingly crafted. I also appreciate that we don't waste development time making a hundred little variations on the same scene, where someone slightly changes their pose or something, this allows the game to be made much quicker, and frankly, is hardly a detriment. Use your imagination a bit guys.

The neutral
- I hate Unity. I fucking hate it so much. It's a buggy mess at the best of times. It was a less buggy mess here, so props for that, but still, the polish is lacking and its in the actual bones of the game.

The bad
- The writing. Unfortunately the game hits my particularly favorite genre, and I will pull no punches when I shit talk its butchering of said genre. And unfortunately, that same tactic mentioned above, where the Dev uses one still pic for the entire scene and just changes the writing, REQUIRES a strong skill at crafting a narrative, otherwise we just have one picture and words dumped on the page.

Writing is very difficult. Movies/books/comics/video games/whatever, all are composed of scenes. Each scene has a job to do. Whether its to develop a character or advance the plot. In a sci-fi or fantasy world, there is another option, worldbuilding. And in an AVN, there's another still, sex scenes. Every scene needs to do at least ONE of those things, good writers can do one or two in a scene while also being entertaining (info dumps versus a dialogue that might explain a concept in an entertaining or funny way). A great writer could do three or sometimes four. It is this efficiency that we like and enjoy in entertainment. Take for example, the Joker's introduction scene in the film, The Dark Knight. We get character development (meet the Joker), we get plot advancement (he basically explains his goal of opposing Batman directly) and its a little funny and very tense (entertaining). It's great writing that feels like a long scene (cause so much is happening), but its only a couple minutes long.

This game has the opposite problem, each and every scene drags on and on, I started out very invested in the story, and pretty soon I couldn't give a shit. The Royalists are bad. Okay, why? And is your side (that you defect from almost instantly) good? What connection does this have to the player? Now find a way to condense that information down to about half the length it currently is and then make it tense, funny or gripping.

I think this game has potential, which is the best I can say about it, for now. And I hope the Dev keeps working and I wish him/her much success in the future.

I love military sci-fi. This is the game where I finally decided to make a Patreon account to show my support.

There's nothing more that I appreciate in this kind of setting and that is an author that knows what kind of world they are building. I especially like this because I grew up on stuff like Battlestar Galactica, Mass Effect, Legend of the Galactic Heroes, Halo, and I have always looked for more to fulfill those desires.

As for the waifus, we got tomboy + dark skin + short hair + glasses + small and big tits + abs + smugs + disgusted looks.

For future updates, I wish we get to have more decisions, to give a little more freedom and a codex of sort.

This game is a gem. It has everything , great visuals; great story; good music ; good looking and realistic looking girls with different personalities. Fleshed out carachters with easy to see relationships between them. A more then believalable sci-fi world. Also the visuals to present the battle field are simple yet great
Awesome game hitting all the notes, from fun to emotional

Ngl, this is better than what I expected. I never thought that I would be so connected to the character in this VN. After 30 min of this, I've become more interested in the plot rather than the "plot" lol.

Pros:

• Art-style is definitely a plus.
• Everyone including the MC act like a rational human being (I guess)
• Characters are down to earth and Story is pretty cool.
• Muscle glasses mommy and tanned tomboy. What can you ask more?

Cons:

• Dialogue during H scene is too realistic for me lol. It would be nice to add a bit of moaning and panting or kinky stuffs in the future.
• CG gallery don't work properly, I can only access 9 CGs. Also no scene replay.
• Too less of a world building imo. It would be nice to have a codex menu letting us know what's going on in the world.

Suggestions (my selfish request):

• Name changing. Yeah, people like to self insert. It would be nice to have one, but if the dev wanted to make their own MC I suggested giving MC a portrait. No skinny, long black hair, generic anime protag look or twink looking MC please.
• Give the side character portraits too. I think the side character is really good and they deserved some thing to remember them.
• Codex or info menu for world building. You can add character info or relationship menu in there too.
• I think MC should make more decision other than dialogue choices. Like how will you run the station, Be a good leader and good romance partner or just straight up being a space Alexander The Great and treating your woman like concubine. I know I'm exaggerated, but it would give player a bit freedom.
• Scene replay tab in the menu, It's a no brainer.

Overall, I think this is a fantastic VN despite the flaw. Since this is in a very early stage of development, I can overlook a lot of stuffs. I hope this VN will be a massive success. Overall a 8.5/10.

Love it, good story, good characters. No combat but in my opinion this is not really needed ; the choices, the music and the writting fill the blank, and maybe for the future leave the choice to the player to do the batlle or not. I was a big fan of sunrider and it was a shame what they did to the second one. Hope this one surpass it. AH ! One last thing, the supportive character need some love, like a portrait or something, really like the banters of the two enseign ^^

Love the art-style and I love stories about the character, even tho I am quite easily "satisfied" I do believe it a good game.

Both art-style and gameplay. Only missing is some kind of minigames, but yeah.