- Nov 19, 2017
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Great release for version 0.001.
Far too little for version 0.01.
Writing the game experience will take much longer than it takes to play this test.
Lighting.
Yes, as a player you want something to look at, so good lighting is important. But why talk about a dark alley when the place where the robbery takes place is fully lit? The robbery should take place 10m later, when the victim and MC are back in the shadows.
Walking animation:
This is very stuttering and the feet slide backwards on the floor. This would need to be revised.
Decisions.
Always a good choice, but avoid making an unfinished path a game over for a later version of the game. Implement a back button so that the player can save their progress if necessary.
Logic gap
Why isn't the girl tied up and gagged. The protagonist is hardly rich enough to have a car to drive the girl to a completely remote place in an hour, nor does this room seem to be completely soundproof.
Maybe she can do karate.
Since the bed looks like it is in use, the nightstand is unlikely to be empty and may even contain something to defend against.
Far too little for version 0.01.
Writing the game experience will take much longer than it takes to play this test.
Lighting.
Yes, as a player you want something to look at, so good lighting is important. But why talk about a dark alley when the place where the robbery takes place is fully lit? The robbery should take place 10m later, when the victim and MC are back in the shadows.
Walking animation:
This is very stuttering and the feet slide backwards on the floor. This would need to be revised.
Decisions.
Always a good choice, but avoid making an unfinished path a game over for a later version of the game. Implement a back button so that the player can save their progress if necessary.
Logic gap
Why isn't the girl tied up and gagged. The protagonist is hardly rich enough to have a car to drive the girl to a completely remote place in an hour, nor does this room seem to be completely soundproof.
Maybe she can do karate.
Since the bed looks like it is in use, the nightstand is unlikely to be empty and may even contain something to defend against.
