Hey Yioru! I really like the game! The story is very good! The art might have been improved upon and I see many bugs and misspelling in the dialogue, it doesnt take away my immersion in it. I always am a sucker for art development so seeing your art went from this to this is such a beautiful thing to me.
Playing through it made me see some things to improve like:
-Artwise, could you please adjust Ashley's posture? The art looks like she's slouching(I can't blame her, those breasts seem heavy ) and she is a princess
-a bit of make up on her would be nice so her face wouldnt be plain
-darken the color of areola and nipples, color contrast is too light; setting the nipples further apart, they're too close than normal; lastly, the nipples are too oval-ish, maybe you could extending the width?
-darken the contrast of her blush
-lack of dialogue...
-when reacting negatively to advances
-flirty dialogue where Ashley participates(not in a sexual way)
-lack of teasing/suggestive dialogues where Ashley initiates
-also, why does she still smack people when she clearly enjoyed being groped and her desire is at max? (she's fiesty, I like that but maybe only after saying no, the smaccing starts idk)
Bugs:
-Kelvin still stayed in my raft after I finished his quest
-that little thief quest always needed to be started again after Ashley serves her time in prison but it still exist in the quest tab
(I know I said a lot but I forgot the others)
Suggestions:
-since there are other sprites fucking, perfect op to make a peeping masturbation animation or an audience animation(what do you call it when you watch only lol)?
-make the inset animations bigger(yk, the fingering one?) Big enough to not cover the art
-groping the breasts/pinching nipples from the back; groping breasts while sex
-orgasm expression(different every level of desire?), more expression where Ashley is enjoying whatever is happening
-cunnilingus animation
-more moaning variety(accdng to desire level, moaning while her breasts is being fondled)
-more variety on her reaction to people complimenting her breasts(maybe a chance reaction where she teases back?)
-another handjob angle?
-a very low chance of intense sex animation?
-front fingering(w or wo panties)
-toys!
-milk event? Gotta feed those dwarves
-more breast sucking animation, nipple play and orgasm(show her genitals when she cums maybe, since she said so?), a licking animation perhaps, maybe different breastplay positions?
Oh wow, this is a LOT and I still have more but theyre just suggestions ok i really appreciate what you've done but if I were to emphasize on my suggestions, it's the art. Im an artist so I highly encourage my art related suggestions.