Long-winded/overexplaining.
i wrote it alone, maybe i just have two different sides. and thats a typo, sorry for that, gonna fixI like the game, but the MC's effeminate look throws me off. Also, it seems like two different people wrote it.
The flirting/romance dialogue is like a noir Humphry Bogart movie.
The rest of the dialogue is like a daily planner/speech guide.
Also, what is the word "letarging" on line 919?
Hey dev, Since you’re focusing on a deep, dark-themed story, I just wanted to clarify—will the MC be the only one sexually involved with the love interests, side girls, or will other NPCs (of any gender) also have their moments with them? Not trying to stir things up, just curious about what to expect. Also, do you have any planned tags for the game? I know it’s still early, but it’d be nice to get an idea of what might be added in the future.haha thank you, and yeah, probably none of the tags u mentioned will be in the game. i want a darker themed, deep storyteller game, so if anyone just wanna fap a quickie, im not your dev
You mean the Crayon Crusaders who specialize in Land Acquisition?
no, i wanna a create a bigger world, not just a simple pov from the mc's perspective. There will be side stories and love triangles. not just the mc breeds anyone who can move. and yes, the side characters and main characters also gonna have their own love life and choices. for the planned tags, the usual sexual tags, lesbian, anal, etc etc. nothing very brutal or immoral. (or if its, there will always be a choice to avoid it) also personally im not a big ntr fan, but its possible. (also the player's choice)
Thanks for explaining. From what you’ve described, it seems like the game is leaning toward multiple protagonists, with love triangles and characters having their own relationships. Even if it’s not full NTR, elements like sharing and swinging might still be present.
Just because 1 or 2 Marines ate crayons does not mean we all liked them, but I liked green personally.
Your win/linux workupload is for Mac version not the Win/Lin, pls fix it.
Yap a typo, ty, gonna fix, hope u enjoyed it besides the mistake
yes im the same, i do it for the story and the enjoyment of reading one, everything else is a good bonus. ty for the help, i try to stick to one type, it's just hard to coordinate when i'm not a native english speaker. But i try to focus on the language more then. be safe!
I suspected as much. Nothing wrong with that, that's why I gave a friendly reminder or advise if you want to call it that. And it's another reason I went out of the way to fix the entire script for you. Glad to be of service.yes im the same, i do it for the story and the enjoyment of reading one, everything else is a good bonus. ty for the help, i try to stick to one type, it's just hard to coordinate when i'm not a native english speaker. But i try to focus on the language more then. be safe!
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