- Apr 29, 2022
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For now, if you choice all option right, than you not missing anything but for future yes.
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- Feb 21, 2023
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That's a bummer, thanks for being upfront, good luck with your game.
- Apr 30, 2023
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I am sorry for saying this
But it's hard to believe with this change log
But all in all thanks for the hard work
Great start, Dev! Definitely a good one to play! Thanks to you, I learned few things from your game. And since you seems like a good guy, might as well give you some tips for your future update. Whether you want to take it seriously or not is entirely up to you. But here are few things that I think you could've improve in the future.
Well, I guess that's it! I don't really do this kind of stuff to another game. But I hope this would help you out! Good luck dev! It would be interesting if we could do some cross promo in the future. But for now, I'm just a developer of a game that has been abandoned for 5 years. That will change next month so... good luck for you Dev!
- One of my biggest concern when I play your game was that I have no idea what actually happened. On the start you show us a normal modern world, but then suddenly I saw a Sci-fi starship. And then MC went inside like it was nothing. And then after something happened, we suddenly in a futuristic Sci-fi world. I know you would like to add some mystery to the story, but it would be great if there's some kind of explanation here and there to establish the ground base for your story instead of keeping it weirdly vague like this. It would help player to understand where they actually stand in the story.
- Since you're planning for a Sci-fi game, again, you might want to explain some stuff about the lore of your sci-fi world. You could do it via glossary like City of Broken Dreamers did. Or let a character inside the game explain that to the MC. This will help players to understand about terms on your story lore that most people doesn't really understand. Ex: Inquisitor. Who are they? And what exactly their job in your world and story?
- Less doesn't mean it bad. I saw a lot of animations in this game, which is good! But there are scene that doesn't really need to be animated yet you animate it anyway. Animation for action and lewd scene is always good! But again don't over did it. Why? Because on some scene you can't help but to notice some wonkiness/weird/unnatural movement on the animation and that can really ruin the immersive when playing the game. Ex: When MC just woke-up after his death, the early moving animations is good, but you animate him while he move from laying down to sit isn't really needed and feel kinda forced that make it feel and look weird. I use HS2 myself, and I know that animation doesn't really animate MC lower part to sit
or like when Flora check MC face is also kinda weird in a way. Like I said in the start, less doesn't mean that it's bad. - I don't really want to be rude, so I'll give you one last tips. When you code the script into the game, make sure to divide long dialogue into several parts. It would be great if the dialogue doesn't have more than 2 lines. Why? Because you're making a VN game. No one really talk 4-5 line of words without stopping. It's okay to make it more clicky than make your player read a long line of dialogue in your text box.
Well, I guess that's it! I don't really do this kind of stuff to another game. But I hope this would help you out! Good luck dev! It would be interesting if we could do some cross promo in the future. But for now, I'm just a developer of a game that has been abandoned for 5 years. That will change next month so... good luck for you Dev!
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Thanks for this, really glad to get such valuable feedbackGreat start, Dev! Definitely a good one to play! Thanks to you, I learned few things from your game. And since you seems like a good guy, might as well give you some tips for your future update. Whether you want to take it seriously or not is entirely up to you. But here are few things that I think you could've improve in the future.
- One of my biggest concern when I play your game was that I have no idea what actually happened. On the start you show us a normal modern world, but then suddenly I saw a Sci-fi starship. And then MC went inside like it was nothing. And then after something happened, we suddenly in a futuristic Sci-fi world. I know you would like to add some mystery to the story, but it would be great if there's some kind of explanation here and there to establish the ground base for your story instead of keeping it weirdly vague like this. It would help player to understand where they actually stand in the story.
- Since you're planning for a Sci-fi game, again, you might want to explain some stuff about the lore of your sci-fi world. You could do it via glossary like City of Broken Dreamers did. Or let a character inside the game explain that to the MC. This will help players to understand about terms on your story lore that most people doesn't really understand. Ex: Inquisitor. Who are they? And what exactly their job in your world and story?
- Less doesn't mean it bad. I saw a lot of animations in this game, which is good! But there are scene that doesn't really need to be animated yet you animate it anyway. Animation for action and lewd scene is always good! But again don't over did it. Why? Because on some scene you can't help but to notice some wonkiness/weird/unnatural movement on the animation and that can really ruin the immersive when playing the game. Ex: When MC just woke-up after his death, the early moving animations is good, but you animate him while he move from laying down to sit isn't really needed and feel kinda forced that make it feel and look weird. I use HS2 myself, and I know that animation doesn't really animate MC lower part to sit
- I don't really want to be rude, so I'll give you one last tips. When you code the script into the game, make sure to divide long dialogue into several parts. It would be great if the dialogue doesn't have more than 2 lines. Why? Because you're making a VN game. No one really talk 4-5 line of words without stopping. It's okay to make it more clicky than make your player read a long line of dialogue in your text box.
Well, I guess that's it! I don't really do this kind of stuff to another game. But I hope this would help you out! Good luck dev! It would be interesting if we could do some cross promo in the future. But for now, I'm just a developer of a game that has been abandoned for 5 years. That will change next month so... good luck for you Dev!
I hope that shit is avoidable and not just skippable.Are all the group sex scenes going to be like that?? Or is there a certain LI (maybe lesbian one?) we need to reject to avoid those kind of scenes?
- Feb 3, 2018
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Let me ask you a question then. Is this still a harem game?
If yes, i can understand in one condition you can miss scenes:
If you have solo LI paths route. If you choose one LI, you get one scene, only with her. If you go with harem route, you get a threesome (for example), and you have alternative scene with two LI's.
Or in harem path you need to choose with whom you spend your time? If this is the case, that not a best way to make harem path. In harem games, if ppl go for all LI's, they don't want choose with what LI's they spend time. Harem games for most ppl, just catch them all, and get all the scenes, don't choose one or another.
- Apr 29, 2022
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Yup, first part, if you want choice only one girl from this rote, than fine its possible, and you will take special scene for this path, but in this case you lose group content, in another way, if you choice harem part than its automatically skip few route scene. I hope this has given more details on this one.
- Aug 19, 2022
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The Mod has been updated to Chapter 1 v0.1
Turned the Walkthrough mod into a Multi-Mod (I will work on the mod icon later to match the game's theme.).
Merry Christmas and happy holidays!
Turned the Walkthrough mod into a Multi-Mod (I will work on the mod icon later to match the game's theme.).
Merry Christmas and happy holidays!
- May 29, 2018
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Is this avoidable? As in, can i avoid this completely if i am on a harem path? because if i have to ditch the harem path just to avoid this scenario then it is really Not a harem.
Can you clarify this?
- Feb 3, 2018
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Yes, that's explains for possible miss some scenes, because your game have solo LI path and harem path. Thx.
- Apr 29, 2022
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You can skip any content, or choose between the two, whichever you prefer more.
Example, choice skip, dp. just a group sex without that, it changes to another scene.
- May 29, 2018
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From what you described i'm guessing it's avoidable not just skippable, which is good and preferable.
As long as lesbianism is avoidable without cutting the entire path off, i am fine with it.
Thank you for clarifying, appreciate the quick reply. Good luck on this.
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Hmm...a new Harem title, very cool.
Also, here is an FYI....the term skip and avoid are considered similar in meaning...but they both have two different meanings within the AVN community.
Having content tagged as an avoidable scene = Means it never happens, it was avoided (This is a community favored method of preventing content from ever happening to a love interest/ main character.)
And using the term skip-able scene = It means it still happens, but off camera. (This method will cause issues with a number of potential fans, if it's related to some controversial content they don't want to happening ever to their MC or love interest.)
Well I hope this helps when your using these terms describing how some of the controversial content will be handled in your harem story.
Best Regards.