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Semi decent start of the story. There's a lot to unpack and the potential is there, even if the dialogue feels very fractured, bland and sometimes hard to follow. It shows that the dev is not a native English speaker, maybe he can get someone to help him out with writing the story (there seems to be a lot of context lost from translating directly from whatever language it was written, Russian from the likes of it). GL further, I'll be keeping an eye out for it.
Not a complaint per se..just a weird logic I feel like pointing out
I just had sex with someone and all is good in the world, then I'm getting -Lora points for looking at some booty. If there's a reason in getting minus points with her, at least make it for something that matters.
Not a complaint per se..just a weird logic I feel like pointing out
I just had sex with someone and all is good in the world, then I'm getting -Lora points for looking at some booty. If there's a reason in getting minus points with her, at least make it for something that matters.
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thx for feedback, will try my bestSemi decent start of the story. There's a lot to unpack and the potential is there, even if the dialogue feels very fractured, bland and sometimes hard to follow. It shows that the dev is not a native English speaker, maybe he can get someone to help him out with writing the story (there seems to be a lot of context lost from translating directly from whatever language it was written, Russian from the likes of it). GL further, I'll be keeping an eye out for it.
Not a complaint per se..just a weird logic I feel like pointing out
still dosnt change the fact that certain LI's are mutually exclusive thus its a fake harem
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Some people can't get over their own stubbornness and fixed ideas. Nothing fake about a harem that is missing some LIs (not sure who is mutually exclusive yet). It's still a harem under any definition, including the tag definition of f95: "Harem [1 person being courted by at least 3 others, all engaging in consensual sex simultaneously.]". You'll need to learn to have a thick skin when dealing with these individuals.
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I'm just spoilering this all up, since it is mostly spoilers anyway
Also, don't let some people with their very personal highly specific definition of what constitutes harem and what not bother you and make the game you intended. There is no pleasing everyone and certainly not that kind of people.
Good luck going forward =)
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Good luck going forward =)
- Jun 26, 2018
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I assume the prostitute isn't a LI.
Unless it forces you to choose a single LI, then the game most likely meets the forum's definition of harem.
That said, I don't like choosing between LIs. I can either have all the LIs (that I like) in a game, or I'm very likely not going to be interested in the game. Personally, I prefer the game to let me choose individually whether I like each specific LI or not, because having to choose between two LIs that I like just makes me choose a different game.
- Mar 17, 2024
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there are so many promising sci-fi honey select games right now (thanks to the success of one particular game), but this is definitely one of the highest quality among them. love the custom animations in this
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ok soooo, telling me during introduction that you know the email associated with my computer profile name is incredibly sus...
I'm guessing Ivy is the prostitute -- her re-introduction later in the game raises some questions like is she really working at the brothel or there for different reasons. Not sure what you have planned but you could spin it as she's not actually 'working' there. Up to you on what story you want to tell.
Also, regarding Olivia and her stat checks, are they reversed or broken or something? I looked at the paths via URM and she will automatically take out MC's cock in one pathway and in the other MC is given the choice and in my playthrough her stat was pretty high and it chose the ask pathway.
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- Mar 9, 2018
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to most people skipping is when a scene still happens and is cannon in the story but the player can choose to not view the scene
an avoidable scene would be a choice to completly stop the scen from taking place would lead to alternate scene/dialog based on if the player let the scene happen or not
- Sep 9, 2017
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Made a compressed Android port of Astreon v0.1 with Zemax's multimod.
Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.
Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.
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Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.
Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.
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- Apr 29, 2022
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It's okay, I'm really happy to see when people point out my mistakes, it helps me get better. And it gives me a chance to correct the inconsistencies in the story, renders or code.
And thanks again for that, really thanks.
- Apr 29, 2022
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No, Ivy not Li, and yet she has the same status as Anya for some time. And you have a choice, you can follow her path or not, it's up to you.