I previously downloaded version 1.5 and translated the game myself. When 2.0 arrived, I was devastated to find that most of the content had been revised. Shortly after, I learned that an official Chinese version exists, but it seems to be based on an older version—and the progress is very slow? I’d like to know if the localization team is still working on it. About how long will it take for a major update? If it’s going to take a long time, I might consider translating the new version myself. Given the current scale of the game, I estimate the text could be translated in just 3-4 days.
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In essence, if you look at the map, you can see that part of the galaxy is behind a notional fog. This fog, is something like the warp storm from Warhammer. And at its core, I'll be describing it in more detail in the future. For now, let's just say it's a sick concoction by the author that doesn't make sense xD (For now).
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I asked my translator not to translate the text yet, for I was planning to redo it back then if people didn't like it. (Actually, my thoughts came true) Only after fixing all the bugs, in 0.2.5 I will ask him to do the translation. And maybe if you want you can help him with that.
I don't care about actual scientific explanations here,
The game says one thing in one sentence and then the exact opposite a couple of sentences later, it's kinda confusing.
Raziel_8
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That's fine, i don't really care about the science, just a bit confusing as the MC just accepted it, without even wondering.
As long as the story stays cohesive and has internal consistency.
Apologies, I think I understand now—perhaps version 2.5 will still revise content from previous versions? In that case, it does make sense to wait until everything stabilizes. Seeing how meticulously you’re refining the story truly makes me happy. I sincerely hope it succeeds!
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So, played the latest update.
Interesting story development, but I feel it was quite wordy. Especially during the tunnel section (when Kalestra becomes part of the group), it was like exposition galore and chit-chat that made me a bit sleepy. I suggest making dialogue more succint for the next updates.
Also, in this update the only scene is Flora's? And is there no gallery? I remember there was one in the past.
Interesting story development, but I feel it was quite wordy. Especially during the tunnel section (when Kalestra becomes part of the group), it was like exposition galore and chit-chat that made me a bit sleepy. I suggest making dialogue more succint for the next updates.
Also, in this update the only scene is Flora's? And is there no gallery? I remember there was one in the past.
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I finally started from the beginning again and caught up to everything.
I do think the extra scenes early on added in terms of storytelling and motivations (esp. the main villain, I think initially, there wasn't even the backstory between him and MC, but the added bit here with the flashbacks certainly helped).
As for the characters, Miriel while still remaining my favorite, I do think Kalestra is a real dark horse and catching up fast behind to her.
Least favorite character is Olivia. She says to MC "Don't treat me like a kid" but the thing is, she acts like a kid throwing tantrums lol. I mean, why is she expecting MC to treat her differently when she herself isn't behaving in a mature way?
NoGloryx some things to note:
1) Some stuff I feel still wasn't quite well explained.
For instance, following scenes:
2) Guess this one's a spelling mistake which the proofreaders missed lol
FRACTION → FACTION
3) Not sure whether you can reveal this yet (and I understand if you can't) but is Kalestra
4) Shouldn't the Gallery have gotten some changes with this update?
I'm saying this due to the following:
- characters like Kalestra, Aisha, Riya, Zoya, Elaena aren't in the Gallery.
Sure, Riya, Zoya, Elaena, I'm guessing can say not incuded cause they're not LIs. But Kalestra is a main LI, right? Or am I mistaken? Story seemed to give strong impression that she's one of the main LIs for MC.
Not sure about Aisha tbh. Doesn't give that "main LI" impression, but I could be wrong.
- Several characters looks in the Gallery feel outdated.
Following are the Gallery pics as of end of current update & my suggestions:
I do think the extra scenes early on added in terms of storytelling and motivations (esp. the main villain, I think initially, there wasn't even the backstory between him and MC, but the added bit here with the flashbacks certainly helped).
As for the characters, Miriel while still remaining my favorite, I do think Kalestra is a real dark horse and catching up fast behind to her.
Least favorite character is Olivia. She says to MC "Don't treat me like a kid" but the thing is, she acts like a kid throwing tantrums lol. I mean, why is she expecting MC to treat her differently when she herself isn't behaving in a mature way?
NoGloryx some things to note:
1) Some stuff I feel still wasn't quite well explained.
For instance, following scenes:
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2) Guess this one's a spelling mistake which the proofreaders missed lol
FRACTION → FACTION
3) Not sure whether you can reveal this yet (and I understand if you can't) but is Kalestra
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4) Shouldn't the Gallery have gotten some changes with this update?
I'm saying this due to the following:
- characters like Kalestra, Aisha, Riya, Zoya, Elaena aren't in the Gallery.
Sure, Riya, Zoya, Elaena, I'm guessing can say not incuded cause they're not LIs. But Kalestra is a main LI, right? Or am I mistaken? Story seemed to give strong impression that she's one of the main LIs for MC.
Not sure about Aisha tbh. Doesn't give that "main LI" impression, but I could be wrong.
- Several characters looks in the Gallery feel outdated.
Following are the Gallery pics as of end of current update & my suggestions:
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Only played act 1 so far, going into act 2. Its a really good VN, the design, renders, animations, characters, plot all good. Its clear the Dev put a lot of work into this game, the story is intriguing.
The only flaw for me is, the over usage of metaphors and one-liners. Its almost ever other line sometimes, I feel like it cuts the flow of conversations and explanations between characters. You could still keep the noir vibe while dialing back the one-liners a bit, they don't all have to sound like hard-boiled detectives.
Its not a deal breaker, still enjoying the game so far. Just some thoughts on the game. Good luck with development Dev.
The only flaw for me is, the over usage of metaphors and one-liners. Its almost ever other line sometimes, I feel like it cuts the flow of conversations and explanations between characters. You could still keep the noir vibe while dialing back the one-liners a bit, they don't all have to sound like hard-boiled detectives.
Its not a deal breaker, still enjoying the game so far. Just some thoughts on the game. Good luck with development Dev.
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0.2.5 REWORK AGAIN?! 
Yeah, yeah rework again 0.2.5
Good day, ladies and gentlemen! Long time no see, right?
I’m back with some great news. At this point, I guess it's becoming a tradition to rework the prologue after every release. And yes, I’ve done it again — once more! But I don’t see your happy faces... Oh, you're asking why?
Well, it's simple: I messed up! Let’s just say I gathered all the feedback from everywhere and everyone — and realized I’ve been doing some things wrong. Turns out, many of you wanted more clarity — what’s going on, why, and how. And instead of giving you answers, I just threw even more questions at you. Genius, right?
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I just started episode 2, should I replay the game again? btw, where is the codex? I haven't encountered it yet, does it appear later? I keep getting memory updated whenever new info is introduced, but no codex so far.
0.2.5 REWORK AGAIN?!
Yeah, yeah rework again 0.2.5
Good day, ladies and gentlemen! Long time no see, right?
I’m back with some great news. At this point, I guess it's becoming a tradition to rework the prologue after every release. And yes, I’ve done it again — once more! But I don’t see your happy faces... Oh, you're asking why?
Well, it's simple: I messed up! Let’s just say I gathered all the feedback from everywhere and everyone — and realized I’ve been doing some things wrong. Turns out, many of you wanted more clarity — what’s going on, why, and how. And instead of giving you answers, I just threw even more questions at you. Genius, right?
In version 0.2.5, I fixed all of that (well, starting after 0.2 — I didn’t touch the earlier parts). As for the rewritten text—what was new up to 0.2—I decided to combine the best moments from both the old and the new versions, and polish them with fresh writing on top. I hope this time things come full circle, and I’ll be hearing fewer “What a disappointment” comments... but hey, I’m not holding my breath. XD
Now for the actual changes: I SHOWED character motivations — at least for a few. I made their main goals clearer. I also restructured the narrative, added a bunch of scenes here and there.
As a result, over the past 3 weeks, I rewrote around 25k words. I improved the quality of the renders in the prologue, making it feel more... coherent. (At least, in my opinion, right now.) But because of these changes, I had to remove the scene with Anya (sorry, please don’t hit me—I’ll bring her back in a future update!)
Now, for some dry stats:
Other updates:
- 25,000 – rewritten words
- 1,600 – new renders
- 9 – new scenes added between existing ones
- 30 – new sound effects
That should be all for now — or wait, aren’t you wondering how it’s even possible to do all this in just 3 weeks? I have no idea myself. My body has told me to stop multiple times already.
- The Codex remains untouched for now. It will be reworked in the next update — version 0.3. I didn’t feel it was good enough yet, so it’ll be redesigned.
- I’ve received requests for two functions: Story Mode (where all choices are disabled), and NSFW Toggle (disables all erotic scenes). I haven’t added them yet, simply because I physically didn’t have time. So for now, we’ll have to make do. Sorry about that.
- In the Settings menu, I’ve added small tweaks like displaying percentage progress, and an option to adjust text speed. You can disable it if you like.
- As for the Gallery, I plan to rework it too. I’ll probably select 6–8 main love interests, and maybe even hold a vote about it later.
So I’ll be taking a short break over the next couple of days, and after that, I’ll be back to working on version 0.3. (Small spoiler: since I removed the scene with Anya, I’ve decided to make up for it by adding three scenes in the next update.)
Bugs are fixed, and everything should be working properly. Hopefully, you won’t run into any major issues.
And the Chinese translation... will come later. Sorry, my Chinese friends!
Okay, that’s all for now.
With appreciation, — NoGlory
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You only had 4 scenes and you removed one of them.....the best one.
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Tried it. Well, it is disappointment.
Fine beautiful pics, fine setting and polished idea. But why so boring and tedious start? Why throw at me so much names from the get go? Why MC so old and fucked up? Oh, wife, ok, but then... SON, GRANDDAUGHTER, da fuq? I dropped it right when you start another sad memories on the porch.
No, dude, just, no. Im not here for constantly crying about whole family some sad veteran. Even pretty renders would not do it.
I was expected action, adventures, challenges, girls in more believable conditions and spicy situations. Not this sad mess.
Fine beautiful pics, fine setting and polished idea. But why so boring and tedious start? Why throw at me so much names from the get go? Why MC so old and fucked up? Oh, wife, ok, but then... SON, GRANDDAUGHTER, da fuq? I dropped it right when you start another sad memories on the porch.
No, dude, just, no. Im not here for constantly crying about whole family some sad veteran. Even pretty renders would not do it.
I was expected action, adventures, challenges, girls in more believable conditions and spicy situations. Not this sad mess.
Everything you explained at the end is exactly what happens in this game, so far