Ren'Py Completed Ataegina [v1.0] [Kthulian]

[kage1822]

love the game, but theres 3 girls I'm hoping the MC can have a sex scene with

1)Bredita
2)Isabelle i know that she's your sister, but its not known
3) most importantly Ryo.. not sure if I got her name right, but the Asian girl with the Yakuza like tattoos... also speaking of her, was it revealed and I just over looked it about what's up with her beautiful but kinda freaky eye?

 

[Batman187]

love the game, but theres 3 girls I'm hoping the MC can have a sex scene with

1)Bredita
2)Isabelle i know that she's your sister, but its not known
3) most importantly Ryo.. not sure if I got her name right, but the Asian girl with the Yakuza like tattoos... also speaking of her, was it revealed and I just over looked it about what's up with her beautiful but kinda freaky eye?

Not sure how to unlock them as I seem to have missed 3 of the scenes myself(only got the bath scene in my 1st playthrough, means I need to have another playthrough or 3 ) but had a quick check using The Team In-Game Mod Located Here or in OP and there seems to be 4 scenes with Isabelle

Spoiler: Isabelle Scenes

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No scenes with Bredita(Except those not featuring MC) or Ryo yet (also looking forward to scenes with those characters)

And for those who may be wondering there is currently 1 scene with Katla(Mc and Isabelle's Mom)

Spoiler: Katla Scene

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[PixelsLab]

I wouldn't go as far as saying it's unnatural. It does need a proofreader however. If you want unnatural go play 'The Intoxicating Flavor'. The author's English is pretty good but not "Native English speaker" good. There are misspelled, missing, and misused words throughout the game, however it isn't bad enough to cause anything but minor irritation, in my opinion at least.

I've suggested this to several authors over the years and no one seems to want to do it. Very few want to take the time to hand over the dialog to a proofreader and then wait for it to come back. It would slow the development process down but it would make the game better and more polished.

Hey! No baseless accusations! In the latest updates, I give the text to the proofreading. And I don't edit the old ones yet, because they will be completely redone.

 

[Kthulian]

are you going to update the game on itch.io as well(you haven't done it yet)

Done, thanks

Thanks for the 5 stars BloodyN9in and JMINATL you're awesome

 

[cxx]

very nice update as usual besides being short. not sure about which sexpath's ending is better

 

[Paapi]

I think pride is a regular gym visitor!! Look at his muscles

 

[.N9]

Done, thanks

Thanks for the 5 stars BloodyN9in and JMINATL you're awesome

You DESERVED IT!

Keep killing it like you always do!

 

[Deleted member 507366]

In the evil path it would be cool to turn into a vampire lord or replace one of the existing devils in the game (Lust would be my choice, hehe).

 

[Canto Forte]

All of which are not of any good 4 the MC, any shape shifting could not be more damaging 4 furthering his story.

 

[Paapi]

Kthulian. Adamaster is actually dead ?? Any plan to bring him back ??

 

[ezala]

I wouldn't go as far as saying it's unnatural.

What I meant was, on top of the obvious grammar mistakes (missing punctuation, misspelling and so forth), the dialogue somehow lacks both the flourish and the mundanity of regular speech between people. The exchanges between the characters just fall flat. Simply put, no one talks like that. I attributed this to the dev's language barrier since it does seem like he's trying. Albeit I've only played for the first couple of hours so I have no idea how it turns out later on.

Ps. The OP description needs a major overhaul, but it's a perfect example of what I mean.

Pss. My purpose isn't to bash the game or the dev, whom has kindly provided this game for us. The post was but a criticism, for I noticed I started grinding my teeth during one of the many "Me Tarzan, you Jane" type of convos and almost stopped right there. I desperately want to like it and continue as I've gathered it gets all good and juicy eventually.

 

[Deleted member 507366]

What I meant was, on top of the obvious grammar mistakes (missing punctuation, misspelling and so forth), the dialogue somehow lacks both the flourish and the mundanity of regular speech between people. The exchanges between the characters just fall flat. Simply put, no one talks like that. I attributed this to the dev's language barrier since it does seem like he's trying. Albeit I've only played for the first couple of hours so I have no idea how it turns out later on.

Ps. The OP description needs a major overhaul, but it's a perfect example of what I mean.

Pss. My purpose isn't to bash the game or the dev, whom has kindly provided this game for us. The post was but a criticism, for I noticed I started grinding my teeth during one of the many "Me Tarzan, you Jane" type of convos and almost stopped right there. I desperately want to like it and continue as I've gathered it gets all good and juicy eventually.

I understand what you are saying but feel that you are making it out to be much worse than it actually is. That is my opinion and you are entitled to yours. All the English problems with the game only amount to be a small annoyance for me. It sounds like it is a big one for you but I don't agree with your assessment.

 

[Ariostebaldo]

So 7 strongest of devils: Pride, Lust, envy, wrath, greed, gluttomy & .........

laziness???

 

[Paapi]

laziness???

U mean Sloth ??

 

[Ariostebaldo]

U mean Sloth ??

Probably. I don't know how to spell it in english

 

[gomesa]

so what's new mom son sis bro banging ?

 

[cxx]

so what's new mom son sis bro banging ?

no bloodrelations on this game.

 

[Paapi]

so what's new mom son sis bro banging ?

Not yet. There was a scene (Isabella & mc) in past.
In latest update we can see who the hell is the thing that gave soul stone to mc & he is a good story teller (according to him).

 

[in_unsan3]

cant wait thank you forthe share

 

[PhoenixAuburn]

0.4.7 isn't working on my Mac either running on Catalina