Ren'Py Completed Ataegina [v1.0] [Kthulian]

[Kthulian]

To:Kthulian
hey can u add PAYPAL in buy me a coffee button?

You are too kind, I used to have a PayPal, but they blocked it for "breaking the content rules" They don't seem to like adult stuff funding
Anyway, your feedback is payment enough. When I have a completed game I might feel better asking payment for it

Thank you

PS: Are you sure you choose "Yes, take me out of this nightmare" and you still got -1 Point and saw the mother nightmare?

 

[Nikira]

You are too kind, I used to have a PayPal, but they blocked it for "breaking the content rules" They don't seem to like adult stuff funding
Anyway, your feedback is payment enough. When I have a completed game I might feel better asking payment for it

Thank you

PS: Are you sure you choose "Yes, take me out of this nightmare" and you still got -1 Point and saw the mother nightmare?

Yes I'm sure, that happen 2 times to me because first time i don't like it and i start again the game.
but i dont see any mother nightmare she take me on ladder and the reward scene but when the teacher take me to archmage she say about i was spy on her in bath.
but this 2 scenes is in the very beginning of the game no take a lot time to check yourself.

 

[Sky-WaLKeR]

Lilliana so cute :3
Hope there is path for her

 

[Piyush3362]

I'm not sure what the grammatical errors are, since I'm not English native, can you help me

In first one - Little girl "Am i good or What?"
In second - though should be "tough"

 

[Kthulian]

In first one - Little girl "Am i good or What?"
In second - though should be "tough"

Thanks as always

Lilliana so cute :3
Hope there is path for her

Who knows...?

Yes I'm sure, that happen 2 times to me because first time i don't like it and i start again the game.
but i dont see any mother nightmare she take me on ladder and the reward scene but when the teacher take me to archmage she say about i was spy on her in bath.
but this 2 scenes is in the very beginning of the game no take a lot time to check yourself.

The part of the bath, yes is supposed to be like that, but the dream part... If you choose "Yes, take me out of this nightmare" you go to the stairway and see the two girls and you gain 1 point. If you choose "No, I don't want to go with you" you keep on the nightmare and you get -1 point... I've tested it and it's seems ok. Anyone else having this issue?

 

[Naturraly_yours]

Well done!
More intriguing than the overall XXX Visual novel ; (Dad gone, MC goes living with mum and sister(s)),
(screwing everything that lives ), lacking good scripts and interaction.
NPC's are well designed. Just be carefull matching front and background depth, perspective. Example : Mages around the table.
Implementing the skills and karma points gives the MC participation in the game. Instead of lame clicking through the novel.
Keep it up Kthulian

 

[Nikira]

Thanks as always



Who knows...?



The part of the bath, yes is supposed to be like that, but the dream part... If you choose "Yes, take me out of this nightmare" you go to the stairway and see the two girls and you gain 1 point. If you choose "No, I don't want to go with you" you keep on the nightmare and you get -1 point... I've tested it and it's seems ok. Anyone else having this issue?

Okaay found the problem but is my fault after all.
u get 1 point toward good when u chose take me out from this nightmare, now when in ur room
before click on bed add 1 more point via console to ur good side if u have down it and u have 2 points toward good when u sleep and she come to ur dream say i disappointed with u because you stay and see ur mother suffer, why you would do that?
sorry I'm a cheater after all and i break the game
now when u get to the archmage bath and select leave when the teacher take you to see her and say is Hatoshi fault
she say so ur innocent and don't do anything wrong? and at the end she say spying on other people bath is no wrong?
anyway that all, sorry if i cause problem to u.
(but I LOVE TO CHEATING IN GAMES)
want to see something nice? here u go

 

[Kthulian]

Okaay found the problem but is my fault after all.
u get 1 point toward good when u chose take me out from this nightmare, now when in ur room
before click on bed add 1 more point via console to ur good side if u have down it and u have 2 points toward good when u sleep and she come to ur dream say i disappointed with u because you stay and see ur mother suffer, why you would do that?
sorry I'm a cheater after all and i break the game
now when u get to the archmage bath and select leave when the teacher take you to see her and say is Hatoshi fault
she say so ur innocent and don't do anything wrong? and at the end she say spying on other people bath is no wrong?
anyway that all, sorry if i cause problem to u.
(but I LOVE TO CHEATING IN GAMES)
want to see something nice? here u go

No harm done

Ahahaha butts will be butts

 

[Kthulian]

Well done!
More intriguing than the overall XXX Visual novel ; (Dad gone, MC goes living with mum and sister(s)),
(screwing everything that lives ), lacking good scripts and interaction.
NPC's are well designed. Just be carefull matching front and background depth, perspective. Example : Mages around the table.
Implementing the skills and karma points gives the MC participation in the game. Instead of lame clicking through the novel.
Keep it up Kthulian

Thank you, I was aiming for a bit more "game content" than the usual porn game.

About the images, yeah I know what you mean. Some stuff wil be revisited

 

[Piyush3362]

Thank you, I was aiming for a bit more "game content" than the usual porn game.

About the images, yeah I know what you mean. Some stuff wil be revisited

i will surely pray to god almighty and you that we get harem(please...)

 

[NanasBananas]

3 things:

First, this is a really nice game. Having good/evil alignment points and choosing what types of magic we're good at and having different ways to handle quests and different potential outcomes to them all make this feel more like a proper fantasy rpg than almost any similar game I can remember playing in this genre. I think it's the level of choices and interactivity that makes it feel like we're really playing a game and not just reading a linear story.

The story itself and the world building are also really fun. I'm always left wanting to see more, wanting to explore the world more, talk to more people, maybe progress some relationships, see where the story is going...

So kudos, I'm very much enjoying the game so far!


Second, since you asked, here's some grammar commentary. Most of the grammar is actually pretty good, but I did catch some small mistakes and typos so I'll share what I found:

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And third, as always I just can't contain my wishful thinking and have to ask, does that Femdom tag only refer to Bredita dominating the captured professor at the beginning, or will we see some female-on-protagonist domination in the future as well? Because I already like the game, but if you're telling me there will also be a chance to get overpowered, seduced or manipulated by a sexy witch or two in the future, I will REALLY be interested.

...Or even just developing a loving relationship with someone who prefers to take charge would be nice... Any form of femdom with the player on the recieving end would be nice, really...

 

[Zenithtb]

Karelia best girl. Mida is a bit of a

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Can I look forward to more of Karelia's kisses? She's a cutie I want to degrade

Edit; how do you know when you've 'done' everything?

I've explored the college, gone out to the big wide world, up a mountain, through a forest, to a dock etc. I cannot go to bed as I've 'just' woken up (haha!).

Am I done for this version? Is there a Hint system hidden somewhere?

Many thanks!

 

[Kthulian]

3 things:

First, this is a really nice game. Having good/evil alignment points and choosing what types of magic we're good at and having different ways to handle quests and different potential outcomes to them all make this feel more like a proper fantasy rpg than almost any similar game I can remember playing in this genre. I think it's the level of choices and interactivity that makes it feel like we're really playing a game and not just reading a linear story.

The story itself and the world building are also really fun. I'm always left wanting to see more, wanting to explore the world more, talk to more people, maybe progress some relationships, see where the story is going...

So kudos, I'm very much enjoying the game so far!


Second, since you asked, here's some grammar commentary. Most of the grammar is actually pretty good, but I did catch some small mistakes and typos so I'll share what I found:

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And third, as always I just can't contain my wishful thinking and have to ask, does that Femdom tag only refer to Bredita dominating the captured professor at the beginning, or will we see some female-on-protagonist domination in the future as well? Because I already like the game, but if you're telling me there will also be a chance to get overpowered, seduced or manipulated by a sexy witch or two in the future, I will REALLY be interested.

...Or even just developing a loving relationship with someone who prefers to take charge would be nice... Any form of femdom with the player on the recieving end would be nice, really...

Thank you so much for you words and help. About the fem/dom, all I can say is that there will be more in the future, but I can't tell what exactly is going to happen

 

[Akuniz]

Cool mate (boa mano, ainda bem que continuas, vou experimentar, mas uma questao, lembras-te do nome do outro guerreiro depois de viriato? da guerra de 190 antes de cristo?)

alba was the roman general that massacred thousands of lusitanians, then was another captai in our side.... (sorry guys, its historical facts, if you dont like it pls ignore,)

btw, i saved a game right at the sart, dont let me continue. i can provide the save

 

[Kthulian]

Karelia best girl. Mida is a bit of a

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...

Can I look forward to more of Karelia's kisses? She's a cutie I want to degrade

Edit; how do you know when you've 'done' everything?

I've explored the college, gone out to the big wide world, up a mountain, through a forest, to a dock etc. I cannot go to bed as I've 'just' woken up (haha!).

Am I done for this version? Is there a Hint system hidden somewhere?

Many thanks!

Nice, it's good to have girls for all the tastes, I think you're the first on Karelia (Hint: Characters with dialogue side face will very likely have more content . The end of the current version is when you reach the missing ship. (You can see it in the last pictures of @NanasBananas post) About all the content, there are hidden things around the world, you might see them or you might not...

 

[Kthulian]

Cool mate (boa mano, ainda bem que continuas, vou experimentar, mas uma questao, lembras-te do nome do outro guerreiro depois de viriato? da guerra de 190 antes de cristo?)

Bacano , será Sertório?

btw, i saved a game right at the sart, dont let me continue. i can provide the save

What's the bug?

 

[Piyush3362]

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Based on the next line, I think it should be 'From what I remember THAT'S just a rumor...' Also, looks like there's no space between '?' and 'From'.

I think it should be "From what I remember THAT'S NOT just a rumor..."

 

[Kthulian]

I think it should be "From what I remember THAT'S NOT just a rumor..."

Exactly

Thanks to all of you guys and girls I can make the game better and with better English

PS: I've corrected all the bugs and typos mentioned here, if I or any of you fail to find anymore, I'll consider v0.2.1 finished and post it... Maybe I can still change a thing or two

 

[AlienEDM]

Hello everybody

As promised here is the new version (Beta) . I tested it and I believe everything is working as it should.
Anyway, your help in bug/typo hunting is always appreciated, if you find anything wrong tell me please.

Mac version --

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PC version --

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Changelog:
Over 100+ Images
New sex scene with variations and repeatable
Continuation of the story
Ingame music


Like I said previously, I'm temporary out of action, hope to get everything working ASAP to keep doing this.

Thank you

Thank you for the new update release! I am the typical guy that love a good story, with good sex content. I only wish two clarifications: "Isabella, The Demon Hunter" is the player's sister, am I right? About Master "Katarro", that name, do you known that name "Catarro" in portuguese language can be translated to english language as "Catarrh" or "Rheum", right?

 

[Piyush3362]

Exactly

Thanks to all of you guys and girls I can make the game better and with better English

PS: I've corrected all the bugs and typos mentioned here, if I or any of you fail to find anymore, I'll consider v0.2.1 finished and post it... Maybe I can still change a thing or two

btw you said you added new music in the game but the only music i heard was in the title screen which was there since the beginning.(correct me if im wrong)