History is about a Pandemic..(at least some TV or cell phone alerting the fact..you went through everything very quickly)
Dior F (at first it's not clear who your step m and friend is)
The name of the game..AuntMan..ok but the pandemic didn't kill girls..(you could take advantage of the fact and add step sisters and please another audience..and put teens with big breasts as Moist Sponge ..In for a penny..)
Tatum F (Once the mother came back with her face changed why miraculously she return to her initial appearance?okay the farce was over, but she didn't give the impression of having used a mask or any easy-to-change disguise..)
Some characters are just mentioned, maybe they'll come back in the next ep..?
Billy failed so much at university that he came back bigger
..(The phase he lived in Univ just mentioned, could have been used some scenes..)
They are two separate stories at the same time, two mcs. maybe it seems a little confusing at first for some.. (or future interaction between the two and have some (sharing Aunts/Moms)?
Tatum had other models/face(assets) throughout history? Does it look like there were more than two?
Renders with very bright lighting..could have some variation (here and there,mimicking artificial lighting from lamps or HDRI)but I still think it's better than using too dark scenes..
Personally, I still think that the body size of the models and skins could vary a little..they were a little similar..(faces Ok)
Yes, you can ignore all comments and continue working your way..the project is yours..
But since this is the first episode, changes can be made and some things can be reformulated(if you wish)