Well WIPlish is much better then MTlish so we should give them much more credit and encuragement for there trys
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I know everyone said it already but I don't think you can stress enough how rare a straight furry game is. We've reached the point where most of the high quality stuff doesn't even have women at all, not even as side characters, lol.
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straight furry hentai game hmmmm rare genre indeed
that's true i wish there was more straight furry games.
Haven't played yet but the overview has a few oddities that could be clarified.
Also, most people know that an automaton is basically just a robot so you could probably leave the word robot out.
And finally, 'whithout parents' is somewhat unclear. Are they orphaned? Have they moved away from home? Are their parents alive but unable/unwilling to see/take care of their children? It's just a little vague.
Now that I have played it a bit, it seems quite likely that you are not a native speaker. Either way, I recommend getting a proofreader as there are many spelling/grammer errors that a proofreader could easily help fix.
To me it would sound better if it was, "He suddenly finds a broken robot (automaton) that looks like a girl."
Also, most people know that an automaton is basically just a robot so you could probably leave the word robot out.
This makes it sound like the main character is female. (Once again, I have not played it yet but the tag says 'male protagonist')
The start of the sentence doesn't quite flow here. Something like: "This is the story of..." or "This game/story follows a guy who...".
And finally, 'whithout parents' is somewhat unclear. Are they orphaned? Have they moved away from home? Are their parents alive but unable/unwilling to see/take care of their children? It's just a little vague.
Now that I have played it a bit, it seems quite likely that you are not a native speaker. Either way, I recommend getting a proofreader as there are many spelling/grammer errors that a proofreader could easily help fix.
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Would be nice if the option to speed up the text wasn't removed. Does anyone even prefer it? I don't see how but some people have even argued in favor of quick time events.
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yeah, unchangeable text speed is a bit annoying
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1x peeping in the shower (shown) and a bit of sleep ass groping.
Ryahn
1x peeping in the shower (shown) and a bit of sleep ass groping.
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Ntr, voyeurism, lesbian, female domination
Version 0.0.2 has sexual content
Yes
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