Ren'Py Awakening Phone [v0.1] [Skoritz]

[abirvg]

[...] While I like netorase I always wondered "what kind of woman is ok sleeping with others for her husband?". Always thought that sleeping with others is a bigger deal than allowing your partner to sleep with others. That's why it pisses me off every time I play netorase game where you read about husband's struggle with it and constant asking confirmation about him being ok with that, while wife all in without an issue.

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[whf]

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Yeah, you really don't understand. I'm pissed off at developers that care about husband's struggle, but not about wife's. I never told about getting pissed off being asked to sleep with others, that's you reading something that isn't there. You know not all women are sluts, not all women are familiar with one night stands and casual sex and they may get hurt by just being suggested something like that. Stop applying porn logic to everything.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

This was... alright? The dialogues are a bit off, translation issue I guess but it seems like some lines are missing, as the MC responds to something that was never said. As well, what girlfriend texts their boyfriend that they farted? It's the first line of the game. Almost dropped the game after seeing that right away, as it felt like this was going to be a childish game with a dev who is ten years old.

On the talk of the dialogue, it just feels really over the top. Like the girlfriend's friends are so quick to start worshipping the MC. Even the one that he doesn't even know. There is no build up at all, it is just instantaneous.

Have to give you props though on making a cuckquean phone game though. Usually it's the same copy/paste NTR/NTS phone game, so it's a nice change of pace to see it reversed for once. The style is unique as well, as I haven't seen it in other AI games (or maybe I just haven't played enough of them lol).

Either way, it was alright. Decent start but needs work. I'll stick around to see how it goes next update, as it is at least different from the others. Best of luck with this and thanks.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Creamed, by Disney's Pixar.

 

[abirvg]

Yeah, you really don't understand. I'm pissed off at developers that care about husband's struggle, but not about wife's. I never told about getting pissed off being asked to sleep with others, that's you reading something that isn't there. You know not all women are sluts, not all women are familiar with one night stands and casual sex and they may get hurt by just being suggested something like that. Stop applying porn logic to everything.

If you are hurt from talking to your significant other about each other's fetishes - you already have a problem. Your family life will be a hellhole.

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[dordicle]

i can never pass on a cuckquean game, but i wanna say that the way the faces are generated makes them look a bit too young, like it doesn't match their bodies if that makes sense?

 

[nunu101botfest]

I might be in the minority here, but i would love some impregnation storylines later on where we can get all 4 of them pregnant.
I wont repeatwhat others have said about the issues, as i can see you are aware of them. i enjoyed the start.

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

This game tells the story of a cuckquean, and you play as the boyfriend. Your choices matter, this game will include NTR scenes, but only if you choose to pursue them. If you prefer not to fool around or want to avoid NTR scenes, you will have the option to do so.​

Whats the point in telling a story about a cuckqueen with a boyfriend who dont want to fuck other woman? -.-

 

[sfree21]

Whats the point in telling a story about a cuckqueen with a boyfriend who dont want to fuck other woman? -.-

I think when you have more choices or options there is always a point, like 4 paths:

1-Cuckquean + cuck path
2- cukquean path
3- cuck path
4- vanilla path (like some teasing but only sex between MC and girlfriend)

 

[Skoritz]

Hi, I understand that my English isn’t perfect since I learned it on my own. Initially, I wanted to create this game in my native language, French. However, since the game needs to be in English for this platform, I decided despite not feeling very confident to write it directly in English.

I also don’t have much experience in coding. Even though I understand what I’m doing, I’m still learning.

All of this is to say that I’m sorry if the dialogue sometimes feels off or if something seems missing. I want to mention that this game will be short only 3 or 4 chapters. Why? Because when I decided to make it, my goal was to show other developers that “phone-based games” don’t always have to revolve around netorare.
I’m a gamer first, and I love this type of game, but I often felt that when I played one, I’d essentially played them all.

Whats the point in telling a story about a cuckqueen with a boyfriend who dont want to fuck other woman? -.-

Because I give you the choice to do it or not. I don’t want to force you to play a particular route.

I might be in the minority here, but i would love some impregnation storylines later on where we can get all 4 of them pregnant.
I wont repeatwhat others have said about the issues, as i can see you are aware of them. i enjoyed the start.

I don’t really plan to implement pregnancy, because, as I mentioned earlier, I want to keep the story short. However, once I finish the game, I can share the resources I used and the prompts for the characters, allowing others to explore their creativity.

 

[bulletbild]

Putting aside the spelling and grammar errors (not even the worst I've seen tbh), it's a nice little game so far. Not many cuckquean-focused games, and I can't think of any with a male protagonist. Interested to see where this goes.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

cuckquean that is super rare can't wait.

 

[GardenGnomeGaming]

Interested in seeing how this one plays out! Cuckquean stuff is very rare, but very hot!

 

[Killer94]

Hi, I understand that my English isn’t perfect since I learned it on my own. Initially, I wanted to create this game in my native language, French. However, since the game needs to be in English for this platform, I decided despite not feeling very confident to write it directly in English.

You can use gpt to refine grammar and improve it just be careful not to drop a wall of text on it or it won't work , people joke about this but AI can be a really useful tool to help you refine whatever needs refining

 

[cloudstrife]

Will there be an NTS route where the MC can get Elara to do stuff with other guys, or is it just her wanting to see him fuck other women and the only guy she has sex with is the MC?

 

[giorgyo777]

So I don't understand, will the main character's girlfriend be with someone else or is it just netori???

 

[Coc0nut]

Stop applying porn logic to everything.

They say in the comment thread under a porn game...

 

[cloudstrife]

When will the next update be out?

 

[dnylive]

A Cuckqueen game but she might get action with other girls (only girls!!!).
If action with other men is there as well, i don't care as long as it is optional.
But so far, i'm a big fan already!

 

[cloudstrife]

So I don't understand, will the main character's girlfriend be with someone else or is it just netori???

Looks like depending on your choices she might also do stuff with other guys and girls but only with the MC's permission