Based on epsisode three
Away from home is two games in one, one is this great gem the other is just a cluster fuck. The game for the most part does seems to take two great steps forward and one terrible step back throughout its development. Case in point Chloe and the MC's mother have very well written and believable relationship progression with the MC. one is a slow burn of sexual tension building but never crossing the line the other is a flash burn of sexual indulgence that is a bit quick to develope but this is a porn game so licience to get boned is always going to be a bit quick. The aunt just feels like a contrived and gamey relationship there to dole out handjobs first then titjobs then a blowjob will comes next and then maybe something different until finally she lets you fuck her. That feels like a bloody game and how a teenage views sex not how adults actually behave with regards to sex, As soon as a woman crosses the line sexually she isn't rationing sex acts and building up to the main event. This is why chloe and the MC's mother are so much better. Chloe gives you a Blowjob in the bathroom and then has actual sex with you as SOON as the oppurtunity presents itself. While the mother might tease and build sexual tension with the MC but doesn't cross the line. The aunt however behaves like a character in a game where the developer whants to go from sex act to sex act slowly to fit a quaota for a game. Two steps forward one step back.
The sex scenes have great renders with very good animations compared to most games on the site. But the actual sex scenes are rushed. Again two steps forward one step back. Now the sex scenes that are rushed can be explained by the situation the MC was having in and I am hoping that this is the case but again so far every sex scene is in a situation where it is rushed and that has been a detriment to the game.
The plot and dialogue, Engrish is not a supported language of this game so the dialogue and narration is written in English making the story flow far nicer than so many games. Secondly the dialogue is well written overall until we get to the Dad's phone call and dialogue with Chloe's father and the hermit plotline. That was just terrible. No father is going to send their UNTRAINED son to investigate a Mafia boss. it makes no fucking sense it is just plain fucking stupid. Again two steps forward one step back.
This game could be so much better with a few tweaks. If you wanted the aunt to hold off on sex you should have written her as more flirtatious than the mother but still unwilling to cross the line into action vs the tired trop of handjob to titjob to blowjob progression it just feels like a game not a story. And drop the mafia arc, it has been done to death and doesn't add to the game and honestly you have enough material to tell a story with the cast of characters as is without this mafia crap. You don't need it and it hurts the overall story. It was enough to explain why the father sent his family away without the idiotic plot of the father getting his untrained son to do one of the most dangerous things imaginable it makes no sense. I am hoping that the dev's skill set will improve as the game matures.
Overall this is a good game and worth the download.
Away from home is two games in one, one is this great gem the other is just a cluster fuck. The game for the most part does seems to take two great steps forward and one terrible step back throughout its development. Case in point Chloe and the MC's mother have very well written and believable relationship progression with the MC. one is a slow burn of sexual tension building but never crossing the line the other is a flash burn of sexual indulgence that is a bit quick to develope but this is a porn game so licience to get boned is always going to be a bit quick. The aunt just feels like a contrived and gamey relationship there to dole out handjobs first then titjobs then a blowjob will comes next and then maybe something different until finally she lets you fuck her. That feels like a bloody game and how a teenage views sex not how adults actually behave with regards to sex, As soon as a woman crosses the line sexually she isn't rationing sex acts and building up to the main event. This is why chloe and the MC's mother are so much better. Chloe gives you a Blowjob in the bathroom and then has actual sex with you as SOON as the oppurtunity presents itself. While the mother might tease and build sexual tension with the MC but doesn't cross the line. The aunt however behaves like a character in a game where the developer whants to go from sex act to sex act slowly to fit a quaota for a game. Two steps forward one step back.
The sex scenes have great renders with very good animations compared to most games on the site. But the actual sex scenes are rushed. Again two steps forward one step back. Now the sex scenes that are rushed can be explained by the situation the MC was having in and I am hoping that this is the case but again so far every sex scene is in a situation where it is rushed and that has been a detriment to the game.
The plot and dialogue, Engrish is not a supported language of this game so the dialogue and narration is written in English making the story flow far nicer than so many games. Secondly the dialogue is well written overall until we get to the Dad's phone call and dialogue with Chloe's father and the hermit plotline. That was just terrible. No father is going to send their UNTRAINED son to investigate a Mafia boss. it makes no fucking sense it is just plain fucking stupid. Again two steps forward one step back.
This game could be so much better with a few tweaks. If you wanted the aunt to hold off on sex you should have written her as more flirtatious than the mother but still unwilling to cross the line into action vs the tired trop of handjob to titjob to blowjob progression it just feels like a game not a story. And drop the mafia arc, it has been done to death and doesn't add to the game and honestly you have enough material to tell a story with the cast of characters as is without this mafia crap. You don't need it and it hurts the overall story. It was enough to explain why the father sent his family away without the idiotic plot of the father getting his untrained son to do one of the most dangerous things imaginable it makes no sense. I am hoping that the dev's skill set will improve as the game matures.
Overall this is a good game and worth the download.