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Hahaha, thank you so much for the feedback! I'm so glad you were able to have some quality time with the visual novel. And yes, Julie will be here very soon...
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Interesting stuff this update. Good update, got some nice setup here. Looks like Bridgette is gonna be more of a "problem" then I expected her to be. That's interesting. Getting some action with Keren and Marrie was hot a bitch and brat taming combo session, nice stuff.
Maybe it's on purpose and we'll see it later but it still feels like the MC is holding himself back. Like he's not going full hog yet. But you're probably saving that for some heavier moments like insertion.
I do have a critique about the MC's dick and balls. You give him a nice menacing shaft but his balls almost feel too modest in comparison. I actually see this a good amount where a dev gives the main focus to the shaft but ends up neglecting the balls. Like in the scene with Marrie where she's staring at it they just looked too modest in comparison to his shaft. I feel like they should be bigger, more rotund, a heavy set. Not only does the dick show libido but the balls do to, like with how you have the MC's libido written I wanna see them look full like "Damn these things are filled to the brim and still producing. Fuck" Know what I mean?
Another possible idea for Julie is she gets carried away with her libido and ends up going after one of the MC's prey (MC interrupts before she can actually do anything.) and the MC gets kind of territorial, possessive, kinda angry or something like that. And the MC gives her a hand instead as "punishment". Just another idea I'm throwing out. I bet that ass of hers is fat as fuck. Have that pear shape. The contrast of big ass with flat chest goes hard.(like me)
Good update. Looking forward to see how things progress.
Maybe it's on purpose and we'll see it later but it still feels like the MC is holding himself back. Like he's not going full hog yet. But you're probably saving that for some heavier moments like insertion.
I do have a critique about the MC's dick and balls. You give him a nice menacing shaft but his balls almost feel too modest in comparison. I actually see this a good amount where a dev gives the main focus to the shaft but ends up neglecting the balls. Like in the scene with Marrie where she's staring at it they just looked too modest in comparison to his shaft. I feel like they should be bigger, more rotund, a heavy set. Not only does the dick show libido but the balls do to, like with how you have the MC's libido written I wanna see them look full like "Damn these things are filled to the brim and still producing. Fuck" Know what I mean?
Another possible idea for Julie is she gets carried away with her libido and ends up going after one of the MC's prey (MC interrupts before she can actually do anything.) and the MC gets kind of territorial, possessive, kinda angry or something like that. And the MC gives her a hand instead as "punishment". Just another idea I'm throwing out. I bet that ass of hers is fat as fuck. Have that pear shape. The contrast of big ass with flat chest goes hard.(like me)
Good update. Looking forward to see how things progress.
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This is how I see the story and I love it.
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i just meant for the stuff like choosing to peek or not (we all know the whole point of these games is voyeurism so even if you get caught at least you saw something), or letting lucy go instead of turning on the vibrator (though she really deserves correction & a spanking & not pleasure)
sounds good though, while a kinetic novel is nice, i do at least want choices for different scenes
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Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm so glad you had a good experience with the Visual Novel. I really enjoy getting comments like this.
I've always wanted the characters to be more controversial. While they can often be hateful, they sometimes show a soft side and can be nice. Like with Lucy defending Bridgett from Kurd, only to later say it was "no big deal." I think this duality makes the characters more believable and helps you feel a more genuine connection to them. I want the player to feel something real about the story, not something artificial. That's why the characters sometimes seem to have contradictory attitudes—it makes them a little more real and adds a certain depth.
Will Bridgett be a problem? Hahaha, we'll see what happens in the next chapters. Julie's story will also be explored; you guys seem to like her a lot, don't you?
The main character isn't going all out just yet; after all, he can't be discovered. But once he feels comfortable enough, he's going to bring that family down—every single part of it, no matter how small.
About the balls anatomy, I'm trying to improve. I know it's a visual sign of how the protagonist is "in the mood," so I always try my best. The problem is sometimes I draw it too big, sometimes too small, and I'm never satisfied. Sometimes I think it's the shape, other times the coloring, reflection, etc. But I'll do my best to improve that in the next update.
And lastly, about Julie. You can rest assured she's going to have a big part in the story. I have some good things in store for her. You'll have fun, I guarantee it, hahaha.
To wrap things up, thank you very much for the comment, and I hope to see you in the next chapter.
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Just played everything till 0.2 ending, loving the game.
There are some grammatical mistakes and typos here and there, but not enough to ruin my experience.
The art was a bit strange at first due to the proportions, but after getting used to it I think I like it quite a bit.
I like Bridgett a lot, and am really curious about what is going on with her.
With her sudden huge libido at times and her immense strength as mentioned by the mc, i have a feeling she is under the effect of the drug too... But I hope she saved herself for the mc all these years, as I am sucker for a pure love romance like that.
Liking Marrie a lot too, she has a funny dynamic with the mc.
Looking forward to more updates eagerly, great job on the work so far!
There are some grammatical mistakes and typos here and there, but not enough to ruin my experience.
The art was a bit strange at first due to the proportions, but after getting used to it I think I like it quite a bit.
I like Bridgett a lot, and am really curious about what is going on with her.
With her sudden huge libido at times and her immense strength as mentioned by the mc, i have a feeling she is under the effect of the drug too... But I hope she saved herself for the mc all these years, as I am sucker for a pure love romance like that.
Liking Marrie a lot too, she has a funny dynamic with the mc.
Looking forward to more updates eagerly, great job on the work so far!
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It is... didn't know that.
I knew the cock was an indication of how horny thats true but balls..
Nope they are either close and tight because their cold, Loose and baggy because their Hot.
And thats pretty much it for visual cuse.
Hot or cold thats all they are telling us.
The one way if I draw cocks to tell if your drawing to big or to small for me atleast.
Do's the size make the one giving the blowjob:
A. look like she would actually be able to fit it in her mouth to start with.
(And not have to have her be a giant for it to look right = Too Big).
B. Would she resemble a snake when sucking it IE. dislocated jaw just to fit it in her mouth.
(again if it is its too big and a mistake 75% of the devs on here make).
As for drawing too small well you have to remember on this site for some your always gonna draw things too small .
Just remeber:
A.If it looks like she's sucking a straw or,
B: Attempting to blow up an inflatable lilo shaped boyfriend.
Then your probably drawing too small.
But honestly on here even a realistic size cock is never gonna be big enough for some.
"Bigger isn't always better" unless you have bad eye sight and than it can be".
Just Sayin.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! The next update will focus more on Bridgett, so we'll get to understand what's going on with her a bit better. Or at least get a few more hints...
Sorry about the mistakes! English isn't my first language, so I end up making a few, but I try my best to keep them to a minimum, hahaha. I hope it's not affecting your experience too much.
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I can't remember now, but when I used that word, it meant something like "worm" or some other negative thing in a language I can't recall anymore, hahaha.
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Regarding penis size, I have to draw it exaggeratedly large because of the context it’s in, in this case, the drug.
This causes some issues, like in certain scenes where the jaw seems to dislocate, like you said. In those cases, I try to cover it up with fluids or other elements present in the scene. I don’t want it to look weird, hahaha, but I’ll try to use the tips! Thanks a lot.