Alright I've replayed the game. I have to say its probably my second favorite HTML porn game, second to college daze. I don't have any complaints, aside from the fact that I'm sad blanche had to get breast implants, personally I feel like it would have been better as a high lust event, but that's a pretty worthless complaint. The English is fine, its not engrish, but there are quite a few syntax errors that, while technically make sense, also make it obvious that the writer is not a native speaker, as they are not the way a native speaker would express their words.
All in all its an 8.5/10 game, good story, actual conflicts that don't just devolve into NTR or NTRbait as a lot of porn game devs do when they want to add tension, characters are good, though I think Kelsi is Bipolar as fuck. One day she wants the D, the next she just wants to be friends and is marrying her ex days after they both cheated on each other, broke up and got back together, then she's yelling, another she's rabidly jealous, and then she just wants to be friends which devolves into her cheating again while implying she might have a fetish for cheating on her significant other. (Or was only using him to make MC jealous, trying to get him to divorce his wife for her) The game is slowly winding down to a full harem from what I can tell, with initial smaller harems popping off in various households, with the main harem talking about getting a larger house, and it seems the game is slowly coming to an end. I hope to see the game through to completion, good luck dev.
Oh right I also didn't get the car collector achievement when I bought all the cars.