Never properly reviewed a VN so here goes:
I personally give this a 4/5 purely because of the location/time jumps, there should be some transitions with Later on or The same day at a different location or undisclosed location or smth like that, I saw that there are a few but quite disjointed.
That being said, I laughed out loud more than a few times, cringed a few times as well, and I felt equally disgusted with the character and myself by some of the choices not only out there but necessary to evolve the story line.
For someone who hasn't played this, imagine a self involved sexist and egotistical street thug that learned absolutely nothing in his 18 years in prison, with no humility whatsoever, that gets released and basically tries to do anything and anybody(and if you applied the patch, I do mean anybody) in order to get back the money his ex wife stole from him.
He does have a couple of redeeming actions here and there, just to play into the anti-hero trope, but unfortunately they are too few and far between.
Overall an interesting story, the renders do get better and there are animations as well, the mini games are pretty easy and the characters are quite diverse and even though sometimes disjointed because of how the story is split they are interesting.
I hate that I love the MC(who's name I left as Frank because of my 2 favourite piece of shit human beings named Frank, from It's always Sunny and Shameless) who is basically a mixture of those 2 with the balls of Heisenberg and a horse dick, all of that coupled with Bad Santa and you have a mutant of a horrible human being, and his relationship with Marty is just too funny and a match made in heaven(?).
When it comes to the girls I just like how manipulative Chelsey can be, but still innocent and inexperienced in it, and I just felt so sorry for "Elsa", oh, and Eva is basically a better looking female version of the MC but with less experience, but equally as hateable.
TLDR: If you like shows and movies that are centered around horrid human beings(IASIP, Shameless, Bad Santa, The League) and want to question your own morals, download this VN and play/read it...it does to that, if you don't, no worries there's plenty of other weird stuff out there for everyone.
Anyway it's 4/5 Stars from me, and once it's finished if it delivers on the story and some of the things mentioned above are fixed this is an easy 5 stars.