Review updated on 2024-08-04: old sentences crossed out and new ones underneath
The idea of this game is really good, but the execution is amateurish. Up to chapter 5 everything is fine, it happens roughly as planned, but chapter 6 is completely chaotic, you can see the listlessness in the writing. Just a few examples:
Events happen long before they are on the to-do;
New: done, it was my own stupidity
Visits to the boutique, this is supposed to happen ONCE a week to keep up with the rest of the development, but what happens? DAILY this bitch calls to meet up, so you also meet Hannah long before it's on the to-do, which actually traps the game in a continuous loop because nothing is going on;
New: Not quite as dramatic, but meeting Hanna and reading about a visit to the church, or the visit to the beach, that hasn't happened yet remains a criterion, it should be halfway chronological for the event to trigger.
Valerie at night, either you fuck her or you get fucked by her... complete nonsense, just come home, get in the shower, go to bed and sleep, but NO, the developer can't get it right...;
First it says "call for Valerie" or "go to the bathroom", later you either go to Valerie first and fuck her, or straight to bed, the MC jerks off and Valerie comes down to fuck... it's annoying!
Friday, Valerie is not at home, MC goes to bed, jerks off and she comes down... Absolute nonsense;
It's always the same, it's extremely boring in the long run and ruins the game. Especially as you have no chance to reject Valerie, neither at the beginning nor at any point in between.
New: I understand what they were thinking with the character, but there are 5 people who are more interesting than Valerie (my top 5: Vivian, Tina, Hanna, Andrea, Gina)
The time controls could also be improved, you always have to turn the clock to keep things moving, especially during the day, there's hardly any action during the day (except for Sally, but that's it).
this game is so badly written in chapter 6 that it hurts, events that are on the to-do list at some point occur weeks earlier and the story doesn't go any further, gets stuck in a continuous loop with the same pictures and dialog and that's it. great!
Characters that are interesting are limited to one action a day, and even this is always the same (see Top 5).