Ren'Py Bastian's Family Secret [v0.02.7] [BOXgurih]

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Jeferss12 said:
You can share the novel web link, please
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I haven't heard anything good about it. Honestly, the way the family obsesses over the MC and their disbelief of his success is annoying as all hell. The conflict is dumb as hell and I heard someone say he takes back his ex wife and she cheats on him yet again. I have no desire to read the web novel to see if that's true or not.
 
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michael1984 said:
Yeah it follows the same thing as the web novel

basicly in the end the mc takes back the cheating ex and then she cheats on him again

basicly a ntr web novel
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Shit, what's the reason for her to cheat on him again even after he forgave her? Is it the typical web novel NTR that follows the line in which the girl cheats on the main character because the other guy has a bigger one or what the fuck? XD,

If so, it's really sad because the story starts with an initial foundation at the beginning of the story. To be a great work, it would be great if in the visual novel they did a what if? and didn't stick to the novel.
 
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Shit, what's the reason for her to cheat on him again even after he forgave her? Is it the typical web novel NTR that follows the line in which the girl cheats on the main character because the other guy has a bigger one or what the fuck? XD,

If so, it's really sad because the story starts with an initial foundation at the beginning of the story. To be a great work, it would be great if in the visual novel they did a what if? and didn't stick to the novel.
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In the webnovel that ex gf basicly comes back with the mc but then she cheats on him with the same guy she cheated on him with the first time
 
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dontehall2023 said:
I count 10 of the dumbest people in Patreon history. To actually fund this AVN. Are they on drugs? I've burned money in a fire & felt I got more for my money than these Patrons are getting supporting this effort. At least I got warmth. They're getting 20 renders & plagiarized dialogue.
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Well you're right about that, every time I see an update come out most of what comes out is unnecessary dialogue and story, very few or almost no sex scenes and the few sex scenes that have come out are the ones that lead to a bad ending and the end of the game, take Twisted Memories for example, even though its updates take time to come out, every time an update comes out there are at least three separate sex scene events with different characters that involve the main character and each sex scene has at least four or five variations of the sex positions during the duration of the act, so I can understand what you're referring to in that regard.
 
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This visual novel could be a great game if the developers change the approach that got the novel screwed up, and if they change the delivery methodology they use every time they release a game update.

But they should do it right now, when the story is still in its early stages of development. They haven't reached the part of the story where everything goes down the drain. If they change how they're doing things before that point, the game could improve greatly.
 
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Shit, what's the reason for her to cheat on him again even after he forgave her? Is it the typical web novel NTR that follows the line in which the girl cheats on the main character because the other guy has a bigger one or what the fuck? XD,

If so, it's really sad because the story starts with an initial foundation at the beginning of the story. To be a great work, it would be great if in the visual novel they did a what if? and didn't stick to the novel.
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That would take more creativity, thought, time and effort than the creator of this VN is likely willing to put in. Supposedly, this web novel has like 900+ chapters, which is 900+ too many, but that means he can milk his patrons for a long time to come, so long as he has any.
 
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I'll be honest, I found the MC's revenge against Cayden, the cousin of the first guy with whom the girl cheated on the MC, very funny and entertaining, hahahahahha fuck making him infertile and making him raise his son by letting him marry Haylen, although the MC only planned to make him infertile, the fact that the guy married the girl that the MC had left pregnant just to supposedly not lose his pride as a man was truly hilarious, a little stupid, ok quite stupid but fucking funny XD
 
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Fuck the novel, it's completely crazy, the characters get married, betray each other, separate, marry others, separate from those others they married to go back to those they betrayed first, it's a complete mess XD
 
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When I first saw a picture of her defending a person at first I thought that was the mc. at first I thought it was a vn with multiple endings with some with the mc winning and others were the mc gets ntr with his wife being raped until she gets corrupted and becomes the villain woman. Then I found out that it was not the case and the game was base on a novel were everyone hates the mc from the get go.
 
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if the dev was willing to change the game from the webnovel approach

he could have done small changes already but so far it fo
master_i said:
When I first saw a picture of her defending a person at first I thought that was the mc. at first I thought it was a vn with multiple endings with some with the mc winning and others were the mc gets ntr with his wife being raped until she gets corrupted and becomes the villain woman. Then I found out that it was not the case and the game was base on a novel were everyone hates the mc from the get go.
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Basicly that ex gf and her family dislike the MC caus they think hes broke and worthless

But they dont know hes actually a rich scion of a big family on a test of sorts so he cant tell them hes rich

And further along in the webnovel that family will find out hes rich actually and then its too late and their shocked

But the stupid mc still pours money into that ex gf family for reasons i cant even understand

But i gues the writer of that novel has a hard core ntr fetish
 
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michael1984 said:
if the dev was willing to change the game from the webnovel approach

he could have done small changes already but so far it fo

Basicly that ex gf and her family dislike the MC caus they think hes broke and worthless

But they dont know hes actually a rich scion of a big family on a test of sorts so he cant tell them hes rich

And further along in the webnovel that family will find out hes rich actually and then its too late and their shocked

But the stupid mc still pours money into that ex gf family for reasons i cant even understand

But i gues the writer of that novel has a hard core ntr fetish
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Their have been cases were writer's are force to change the plot by the higher ups
 
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