While the writing mechanics (e.g., grammar spelling, etc.) are not the best, the characters are well motivated and felt realistic. I personally enjoyed the internal monologues, as they do a good job of describing the guilt/conflict/intention of the characters. Also, the writing is very well balanced - long enough to root the characters and context, but not so long that it gets boring. Also, great corruption scenarios that are well paced, although I felt the first BJ scene happened a little too quick.
While I personally very much liked the art style, I'm not sure it's for everyone. The female protagonist looks great!
There is nothing that stands out in the gameplay; it's a typical RPGmaker walking visual novel. This is a description, not a criticism - personally, I don't like grindy mechanics. It's pretty short in it's current state (V03.5) - it took me 30-minutes to finish. It's a somewhat slow-burn game, it hasn't gotten to anything too lewd yet.
Great little corruption/NTR game - this will definitely be on my watch list and deserves some love on Patreon.