So, as the poll asks, what do you guys think of scenes involving M/F sex between characters other than max and the ladies of his family? Should it be ok, since it's just them acting? Or no?
My opinion on BB is pretty common knowledge... But I'm writing Game Legends, and getting some negative feedback on the implication of Kira being with someone in a sequence where she's lying to tease Max, so I figure I should be careful... As to their use, well, I'm not actually calling them Kira, Alice, and Ann, and DS has no proprietary rights over their daz models.Big Brother is not my top game (haven't checked in since v0.3) but regardless of the game, any girl should be able to have sex with anyone they want... nobody owns them. And verity is hot after all. There are some characters I'd personally not like to see do it, but that doesn't mean they shouldn't. It all comes down to what is appropriate for the particular characters at that stage of their virtual lives and in your specific example of the BB girls, it totally fits so have at it! You know... as long as their original creator is fine with having his characters portrayed like that. If so, go nuts my friend!
I assumed that, I've been keeping an eye on the thread... haven't weighed in over there since as I said I've not really played BB as it is now and don't really have a horse in that race just yet. But I feel ya, you get a fair bit of hate over there and it's justifiable to be cautious. My main thought is why do you want to make content for a game you dislike so much? I'm genuinely curious...My opinion on BB is pretty common knowledge... But I'm writing Game Legends, and getting some negative feedback on the implication of Kira being with someone in a sequence where she's lying to tease Max, so I figure I should be careful... As to their use, well, I'm not actually calling them Kira, Alice, and Ann, and DS has no proprietary rights over their daz models.
I think BB had potential. I just think DS didn't execute well. So while I don't like the game, I'm not opposed to writing the characters in short stories where I can let their personalities shine through... its a good exercise. That said, it's not my idea, FunFiction already had the art and I'm writing for him. We are actually doing a larger project and this is just a side thing to get started working together, work out and test Rich's program, and essentially have a good time. If it does well we might do more with it, if it flops it doesn't matter because the original work will be the good part. If I had a direct line to DS I'd probably give him a heads up, but I don't so I'm not worried. I also plan to try and jump around, we started with BB because that's what art we had, but I'd love to do other characters later. We'll see.I assumed that, I've been keeping an eye on the thread... haven't weighed in over there since as I said I've not really played BB as it is now and don't really have a horse in that race just yet. But I feel ya, you get a fair bit of hate over there and it's justifiable to be cautious. My main thought is why do you want to make content for a game you dislike so much? I'm genuinely curious...
I get DS doesn't have rights on the exact models, but they are clearly parody uses at best. Now I'm not throwing stones from my particular glass house here (I've been doing my own parody stuff for over a year now), my main point is if they were my own original creations (I have those too) I'd like to be consulted at least (I'll admit I'd also be pretty flattered). Just because DS is a big shot and not exactly known for being a big guy in the community doesn't mean he doesn't deserve at least that courtesy, you know? It'd make me feel better to know it's got some kind of "Ok go" from the original creator than not, is all. My thoughts are more with that than with any legal issues. But hey, if it's not something feel the need to do, that's up to you. I'm not going to tell you how to run your set up. Best of luck to you guys, and me sure to give plenty of ladies a good time while you're at it...
On the assumption it goes well enough for you to carry on. You may well get original artists supplying, but it may be a place for a general fan art thread.I also plan to try and jump around, we started with BB because that's what art we had, but I'd love to do other characters later. We'll see.
We're like that over here at beWilder too. We've got some big ideas but at the same time, the smaller things are always a fun break where we can try out new things technically and artistically but at the same time play with some narrative strings we've not touched would love to. Sometimes the non-porny "just hanging out" kind of scenes are the best as we really do get to see the characters' and their depth, being their is not much else going on to see, am I right? We've have some of our best laughs imagining our girls trying to play a children's / family board game and seeing how it would likely turn out as they go wild... sadly nobody ever survived the Monopoly massacre of '17.I think BB had potential. I just think DS didn't execute well. So while I don't like the game, I'm not opposed to writing the characters in short stories where I can let their personalities shine through... its a good exercise. That said, it's not my idea, FunFiction already had the art and I'm writing for him. We are actually doing a larger project and this is just a side thing to get started working together, work out and test Rich's program, and essentially have a good time. If it does well we might do more with it, if it flops it doesn't matter because the original work will be the good part. If I had a direct line to DS I'd probably give him a heads up, but I don't so I'm not worried. I also plan to try and jump around, we started with BB because that's what art we had, but I'd love to do other characters later. We'll see.
I can get behind this sentiment. I always hate it when a story I like ends, whether its a short min-series or a long running thing. I'm not a big stickler for fan-fiction, but I always support extended universes. That's why we're making all our games in the beWilderverse. Its true that sometimes a story serves out its purpose and has nothing else to show you, but I always hate losing that experience and the connection... I like to know thatOn the assumption it goes well enough for you to carry on. You may well get original artists supplying, but it may be a place for a general fan art thread.
I love fan fiction as a thing, some of it is absolute crap, but some is surprisingly good. It is the chance to live a little of the lives of characters that have been hinted at (the club night with Kira and Alice :kissingheart. Also where a series has ended it can be the chance to carry on the story. Sometimes with the same characters, sometimes in the same universe.
I think where a story has finished or been abandoned, fan fiction is a way that it's kept alive and current and can bring new fans to the original and then and new projects of the creator.
DmD could use a total rewrite... That would be fun... My headcanon, and the only way that game works for me, is that week one, everything that happens from her arrival until the moment they reach the beachtown, zero sexual content. Though, I think I'd make it 3 full days before going to the beach town, you'll see why later. No massages, no exposed breasts, no on the lips kissing, none of it. A healthy father daughter reunion and a few days of spending purely platonic time together. We can fill the time with Elena seducing the ginger chick and stuff, just to get some action till then, but that's how I'd do that.I'm interested in seeing your take on DmD's D, where she gets a knock to the head that cures her of her previous brain-damage in true cartoon fashion (she's already a cliche so what's one more going to hurt?), and then maybe we can have a proper adult conversation with her. That will be worth the wait.
It seems like you've saved me a long wait. That's a pretty good storyline, it holds together well and it is cool to see you use some of the original plot points to keep it resembling what people would expect from the game, not unlike remolding clay into a sturdier shape. Bravo. As much fun as it was to read here, I'd still like to see it play out for real some day, but I'm sure you've got plenty of better stories to tell now that you've already put this summary together for those with imaginations to follow. Keep at it, buddy!DmD could use a total rewrite... That would be fun... My headcanon, and the only way that game works for me...
awesomeDmD could use a total rewrite... That would be fun... My headcanon, and the only way that game works for me, is that week one, everything that happens from her arrival until the moment they reach the beachtown, zero sexual content. Though, I think I'd make it 3 full days before going to the beach town, you'll see why later. No massages, no exposed breasts, no on the lips kissing, none of it. A healthy father daughter reunion and a few days of spending purely platonic time together. We can fill the time with Elena seducing the ginger chick and stuff, just to get some action till then, but that's how I'd do that.
Then, on the beach, D asks MC to help with sunscreen, and he realizes he's excited by touching her body like this while also she realizes she likes being touched by him. It ends a little awkwardly when she moans a bit, and they both freak out, MC says, he's gonna go for drinks or something. Then when he comes back the scene where the guys are propositioning her is happening, so he gets them to leave, and she's given a reason to still trust him, even though they both have these new thoughts. Then that night, the dream where he sees her pleasuring him can cause that existential crisis and it has some weight.
Then later that day but before the dream and existential crisis I'd have them meet the other incest couple again, possibly by straying into the nude beach like before. Maybe they'd even catch them fucking... something to trigger the thoughts for D mostly, as I'd keep with the writing that skews her young, just I wouldn't make her completely naive anymore. A virgin, but not a complete childish angel of virtue. She'd hear the girl call out "Oh, Daddy, fuck me" or something like that, and the idea, much to her surprise won't disgust her. Then, they'd have startled the couple, ruining their moment, but being the charismatic dude that the father over there is, he'd come over to apologize that they saw that, and explain that they'd wandered onto the nude beach, that way we could keep using them to plant the seeds for D to think about it.
I'd have them trapped in the beach town for the rest of the week, rather than just 3 days. This would keep Elena out of the picture, and I could even find a reason that D didn't have her phone or something, maybe it got broken or something, so she uses MC's phone to contact Elena, because he had her number, and have her explain what happened to her mom. So that whole week, goes by, D and MC spending time alone together, sexual tension building, and finally, the night before they leave, the incest couple gives them their tickets to the dinner thing. Same as before, only now we've had a mature growth to their relationship over the last 5 days, all full of corruption of D's thoughts toward incest. None of that corruption coming from MC. In the end, it would be her who comes onto him. Her kisses, her touching... even if they don't go all the way there in the hotel, they'd get farther than a father and daughter should... The next day the nude beach would happen. Just like in the game, only since I've liberated D a lot, MC wouldn't have the drama over his trunks because he'd be nude.
They return home, and see Elena for the day, but D and MC have a date that night. However, unannounced to them, her mother comes to get her, similar situation to the game's ending. She can't get ahold of D because D's phone is still broken. Elena neglects to mention that she can get ahold of MC to give them more time. Meanwhile MC and D leave their date and D is once again all over MC, this night ends with them having sex. And here I put a huge choice, Cum inside or Pull out. No matter what you choose she's going home with her mom tomorrow before you can do anything about it. But If you do it adds a plot to part 2 where not only is D hiding her relationship with you, but the fact that she's pregnant. Drama and conflict for chapter 2 doesn't come from the relationship itself but from hiding it from their mom, and more importantly, if you came inside, what do do about this child. Does D want to abort? Does MC want her to keep it? All of that would be the kind of shit that's going on all while you're trying to get her back.
My mother in law kisses me on the lips and I assure you there is zero sexual content there...zero sexual content....no on the lips kissing
My whole issue with DmD is the complete childishness of all the girls both in looks and behaviour. The potential for me was huge, but that just blew it all. So your version of events sounds like 100% improvement.A virgin, but not a complete childish angel of virtue.
Ooohh this gave me a thought....well I want to see his family go wild.. I mean lets think about His mom goes to club or something like that. And If Max find it out what will be happen ? Some kinky story would be awesome. I don't have problem with his family sex with ''strange'' guy or guys. But one thing is obvious , Ann is awesome for porn games.
Sure, for a family that is familiar with one another. However MC and D haven't seen one another in 10 years, and while I know the game tells us she's 18, I can't help but say that she is at least 4 years younger. That means that they haven't seen one another since she was a toddler.My mother in law kisses me on the lips and I assure you there is zero sexual content there...
Just saying, I see it often in these games that on lips kissing is the first line to be crossed, granted without it there is no french kisses. Maybe it's just me, but I know many that kiss on the lips and there is nothing more to it than a greeting of people that are good friends.
This story can be good for the game. But Max should join after the sex with stranger. Thats more exciting .. And we should see different story from BB.My mother in law kisses me on the lips and I assure you there is zero sexual content there...
Just saying, I see it often in these games that on lips kissing is the first line to be crossed, granted without it there is no french kisses. Maybe it's just me, but I know many that kiss on the lips and there is nothing more to it than a greeting of people that are good friends.
My whole issue with DmD is the complete childishness of all the girls both in looks and behaviour. The potential for me was huge, but that just blew it all. So your version of events sounds like 100% improvement.
Regarding the phone not working while away - storm took out the masts? Or lightening caused a surge frying it while on charge, which covers it not working when she gets back from the beach?
Ooohh this gave me a thought....
Max finally gets to join Anne on set of her current film. He ends up in a similar possision as her (tied up) only Anne is blindfolded and Max is gagged. Like previous films Anne is taken to her limit, but knowing Max is in the film is screaming for release.
Enter Kira with a strapon, whispering to Anne "Do you want me to warm you up for a cock?"
Anne agrees and Kira fucks talking dirty about how she thought Michael ate her last time she was like this. Again stopping short and getting her pleading, Kira asks "Shall I get Max now?"
Anne "Yes,yes!!"
Kira "Or would you prefer Michael?"
Anne "Yes, either!! I need to cum and I need a real cock to do it"
Max watches helplessly as Michael enters the stage.... :evilsmile:
As I said above I would see something like this as a relationship ender for Anne and Max due to her guilt.