Há varios problemas com este teu nightshift: demasiado curto, demasiado apressado (cenas pouco interessantes sem a devida progressao para o climax), as musicas não combinam, animaçoes têm que ser melhoradas, há um travo de melodrama/sentimentalismo que destoa (no inicio principalmente). Tens muito trabalho pela frente. Lembra-te que muitos fazem skip ao texto. A linguagem corporal e como as cenas se desenrolam conta muito. Boa sorte.
# This game has several issues: it's not a mini game but micro (divided in 2 nano parts), it rushes to steamy scenes too quickly, the background music hardly matches the scenes, animations need to be brushed up, sometimes too melodramatic (beginning). You've much to do. Keep in mind many of us skip text and boring scenes so body language and audience engagement is critical. Good luck
Not sure what's going on here
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 2, in <module>
if not game.is_taboo:
NameError: name 'game' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 274, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\main.py", line 558, in main
renpy.game.context().run(node)
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python3.9/site-packages/future/utils/__init__.py", line 441, in raise_
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1111, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1049, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 2, in <module>
if not game.is_taboo:
NameError: name 'game' is not defined
Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.0.22062402
JENNY'S JENNYS
Wed Dec 4 13:41:49 2024
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 2, in <module>
if not game.is_taboo:
NameError: name 'game' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 274, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\main.py", line 558, in main
renpy.game.context().run(node)
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python3.9/site-packages/future/utils/__init__.py", line 441, in raise_
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 1, in script
init +999 python:
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1111, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "M:\JENNY-JENNYS-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1049, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/game/ipatch.rpy", line 2, in <module>
if not game.is_taboo:
NameError: name 'game' is not defined
Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.0.22062402
JENNY'S JENNYS
Wed Dec 4 13:41:49 2024
- Dec 1, 2024
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I am not sure I'm getting it correct, but I think you are trying to use the patch meant for the main game in the mini game, is that it?
The mini game needs no incest patch, it is already incestual
Just download and play it
Enfim, um poeta...
# Before rushing to smart ass shots, try to understand others' point of view. This is a visual novel, not a text novel... If I wanted depth in reading I'd grab a good book, any book would be more substancial. That's not the point here, just a bonus. This is meant to entertain so it needs to deliver a reasonable amount of gameplay, not text.
I never read all the lines of any game. If I find something interesting I slow it down and I read it all. If not, I skip it. I'm sure I'm not alone on this because when it's good it shows. Ren'Py has that built-in option for a reason...
It's not my intention to bash on SP. On the contrary, I believe in his work. The original BBS2 was awesome, this one not as much. I'm just giving some pointers about stuff that could be improved. This game can easily make it or derail...
(600 renders is very little. An animation of 6s alone takes 180)
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- Dec 1, 2024
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I don't get why you bother to come to a forum to discuss the state of a game if you are not even going to read a few posts?
Just a few pages back and you would have been fine
The latest positive reviews were clearly for the new stuff, the nightshift story with Jenny
The author has said many times that he is aware of the problems with the main game and that he intends to fix them after he is done with this side story, because it is a commission and he has to deliver
I saw your review too
Ridiculous
I know this is not a 1 star game, even with the glaring issues but you just want to sound smart, I guess twitter must be your only hobby and I bet you are not very popular there
The incest is so glaring in this game that even with out the patch we can still feel they are related
Are you joking? It is a incest game, watered down because of patreon
You can not order a pizza with four different types of cheese in it and complain later that you only wanted to taste the mozzarella but you couldn't
As a matter of fact...
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I know you guys missed us on this year's Game Awards, but tbh... it's alright, that ain't exactly the place to showcase what we have in storage for you today.
I've been quite sick for the past week or so. Again, yes.
As I was talking earlier to our benefactor, Niko... I've been getting sick a lot lately. And that has certainly taken its tow on our schedule.
But fear not, work is being done and Part 3 of our mini story w/ Jenny is shaping out well.
Here's what we've been cooking. Part 3 of Bobby's Nightshift is going to contain:
. a new option event for the shower scene in the coffeeshop (18+)
. a new option event for the clubhouse scene (18+)
. slight fixes (improvements) to the past animations
. small cameos - featuring Lucy, Lisa and Mrs Ann
. twice a dozen filling images meant to embellish a few scenes from Parts 1 and 2
. an epic conclusion to our mini story (18+)
I'm still hoping to release this on Christmas.
But then again, I ain't cutting it short just for the sake of having it released sooner than later.
It'll be here when it's ready.
I'll be seeing you guys soon.
Wish me well, daddy's gotta work.
SP
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I know you guys missed us on this year's Game Awards, but tbh... it's alright, that ain't exactly the place to showcase what we have in storage for you today.
He estado bastante enfermo durante la última semana más o menos. De nuevo, sí.
Como estaba hablando antes con nuestro benefactor, Niko... Últimamente me he estado enfermando mucho. Y eso, sin duda, se ha llevado su relevo en nuestro calendario.
Pero no temas, se está trabajando y la Parte 3 de nuestra mini historia con Jenny se está perfilando bien.
Esto es lo que hemos estado cocinando. La parte 3 de Bobby's Nightshift va a contener:
. Un nuevo evento de opción para la escena de la ducha en la cafetería (18+)
. Un nuevo evento de opción para la escena de la casa club (18+)
. Ligeras correcciones (mejoras) a las animaciones anteriores
. pequeños cameos: con Lucy, Lisa y la Sra. Ann
. dos veces una docena de imágenes de relleno destinadas a embellecer algunas escenas de las Partes 1 y 2
. Una conclusión épica para nuestra mini historia (18+)
Todavía tengo la esperanza de lanzar esto en Navidad.
Pero, de nuevo, no lo estoy acortando solo por el hecho de que se publique más temprano que tarde.
Estará aquí cuando esté listo.
Los veré pronto.
Deséame lo mejor, papá tiene que trabajar.
SP
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I'm feeling a little bit better now...
I'm hoping to get back to work tomorrow, full speed ahead.
Lots of stuff to do.
I'm hoping to get back to work tomorrow, full speed ahead.
Lots of stuff to do.
Ahora me siento un poco mejor...
Espero volver al trabajo mañana, a toda velocidad.
Un montón de cosas que hacer.
:café:
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As a curious party, I've sent you an inbox message. I'd be very interested to collaborate with you on a current/future project.