Here's my feedback:
Negative:
- It should be faster paced and more intuitive:
* the intro is way too long, the talks with each girl should be trimmed to what really matters and the part he's lost in his thoughts should be cut off.
* the location tabs should hint the girls' location
* there should be a hint button for all girls ( e.g. collecting found smoking hints and the sleep hints could be gone )
* there could be a cheat menu to override the grinding if we wanted to
* the cemetery scene is quite pointless ( only good to see Jenny )
- Plenty of code bugs and glitches
- Some broken renders to fix, others need some polishing/improvement:
* some weird Lucy's facial expressions
* some not so good Ann body traits/positions
* Some clothes should look better (Lucy's mainly - leggings, top,...)
* the pool location is off (it should be a lawn and a pool)
* The splash screen render could be better
- The music tracks are ok but could be better
Positive:
- The game has all the ingredients to become awesome:
* Great girls - they look really good and they mess around with Bobby (very hot),
* You've remade some of the hallmark events from the original and they look great - keep doing it
* The new events are quite good and some are really hot (living room with Lucy and Ann, sleeping pussies,...)
* You've brought the little things like the girls fooling around (Liza's bacon, Lucy's teasing,...) and mood swings ( girls sadness, Ann feeling hurt with your lack of attention,... ) - go deeper on that approach, increase the little games/subtleties and try making each girl personality/temper and behavior around Bobby unique.
* Great new locations - they have more depth than the original
* Sound effects are good
* You find yourself back to the BBS world with new adventures - great
* Clean interface
* You've put a lot of work in it and it's showing ( events differentiation - quick, gradual, sexual tension both ways, rich facial expressions, good script,... )
Overall: I like it, there's some room for improvement but most of it is quite good. More please. We can't wait another year...