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Core13

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Here's the thing... I wouldn't know what to say.

I don't approach a game like I approach a comic.
Those game ar fun because I gave the player a bunch of choices. There's no fixed narrative, no path. Just an objective, a bunch of choices and differents results depending on the stats you rack up... but that's not a story.

I have trouble enough thinking of sequels to my Star Wars comics ;)
About the comic, sorry if I bother you again, I was thinking about it again, may I ask you one thing that I think it might work with both the original idea and what you told me about the impossibility of subduing Ahsoka, have you thought about making Chewbacca and Ahsoka allies?
 
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Morkar

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Here's the thing... I wouldn't know what to say.

I don't approach a game like I approach a comic.
Those game ar fun because I gave the player a bunch of choices. There's no fixed narrative, no path. Just an objective, a bunch of choices and differents results depending on the stats you rack up... but that's not a story.

I have trouble enough thinking of sequels to my Star Wars comics ;)

what you say can be done perfectly the same way in a comic

for example if you want Ashoka to torture Rey with a dildo go to page 10 a if you want it to be Rey who escapes and tortures Ashoka with the dildo go to page 10 B

It may be more work but it is something that can be done perfectly
 

Fuckit

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what you say can be done perfectly the same way in a comic

for example if you want Ashoka to torture Rey with a dildo go to page 10 a if you want it to be Rey who escapes and tortures Ashoka with the dildo go to page 10 B

It may be more work but it is something that can be done perfectly

That's a game... in comic form, but a game none the less.

When I say, I don't approach a game the same way I approach a story, I'm not talking about tech. I'm talking about narrative flow, purpose and where I am in my headspace. The reason I went with Bronx as the protagonist, as an example, was not because for his narrative possibilities, It was purely for game purposes. I though it was more interesting for a point and click game to search for new possibilities in the environment. As a beast that couldn't speak / flirt, you couldn't just go with a few dialogue boxes, it upped the difficulty level for the player. Also, I'm terrible at flirting so, it was easier for me to do this than think of plausible flirting lines :p

You also need to know that I'm neuro-divergent. When my brain is on a track it's really hard for me to change track. and I have a possible track for a Gargoyles comic series that I like, and while Bronx would definitely have his way with one or two ladies, it wouldn't be the main character.

But since I can barely keep the pace with my Star Wars book, I'm not ready start a 2nd series just yet.



About the comic, sorry if I bother you again, I was thinking about it again, may I ask you one thing that I think it might work with both the original idea and what you told me about the impossibility of subduing Ahsoka, have you thought about making Chewbacca and Ahsoka allies?

That's one of my trouble with that series. Since I changed track, I'm now, sorta, walking in the dark, trying to grasp where this new path will take me. It's fun, but also a lot of work for me. I know exactly what the next issue will be ( and it's not that ), but I'm not entirely sure what the end goal will be other than Rey and Chewie getting back together someday. Remember, despite the title, it's not Chewie's serie. It never was. It's Rey's.

I just never though I would split them up when I came up with the title.
 
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Core13

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That's a game... in comic form, but a game none the less.

When I say, I don't approach a game the same way I approach a story, I'm not talking about tech. I'm talking about narrative flow, purpose and where I am in my headspace. The reason I went with Bronx as the protagonist, as an example, was not because for his narrative possibilities, It was purely for game purposes. I though it was more interesting for a point and click game to search for new possibilities in the environment. As a beast that couldn't speak / flirt, you couldn't just go with a few dialogue boxes, it upped the difficulty level for the player. Also, I'm terrible at flirting so, it was easier for me to do this than think of plausible flirting lines :p

You also need to know that I'm neuro-divergent. When my brain is on a track it's really hard for me to change track. and I have a possible track for a Gargoyles comic series that I like, and while Bronx would definitely have his way with one or two ladies, it wouldn't be the main character.

But since I can barely keep the pace with my Star Wars book, I'm not ready start a 2nd series just yet.






That's one of my trouble with that series. Since I changed track, I'm now, sorta, walking in the dark, trying to grasp where this new path will take me. It's fun, but also a lot of work for me. I know exactly what the next issue will be ( and it's not that ), but I'm not entirely sure what the end goal will be other than Rey and Chewie getting back together someday. Remember, despite the title, it's not Chewie's serie. It never was. It's Rey's.

I just never though I would split them up when I came up with the title.
What do you think about these, based on the end where Bronx enslaved Fox, Elisa and Demona without getting them pregnant:
1) After Fox proved her loyalty to him, it's time for Elisa and Demona to do the same, so they trick Angela and let Bronx submits her too.
2) One night, Demona is returning home and she is caught by Hunter (Robyn Canmore) who follows her. Once Demona has arrived at the house, Hunter immediately enters to fight her, not knowing that Bronx, Fox and Elisa are inside the house too. She is easily taken down by the four and fucked by Bronx, alongside Fox, Elisa and Demona, unti she submits to him too.
3) A sort of aftermath with Fox, Elisa and Demona who continue with their daily lives and to serve Bronx, trying to hide the fact of being his slaves, risking being discovered by others.
1) About the Gargoyles comic, may I ask what you think of these? Can one of these work?

2) From what you wrote to me, I understood that Chewbacca was the main character, since he had to build his family, and given the impossibility of subduing Ahsoka I was thinking of something that could include both options, and a rebellion by Rey against him because of this alliance.
 
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1) About the Gargoyles comic, may I ask what you think of these? Can one of these work?

2) From what you wrote to me, I understood that Chewbacca was the main character, since he had to build his family, and given the impossibility of subduing Ahsoka I was thinking of something that could include both options, and a rebellion by Rey against him because of this alliance.

1) There's no Gargoyles Comic... there might be someday, when I do, IF I do, I'll use my own idea. Your ideas are decent. It would be a fun read, and I truly believe that I would enjoy them quite a bit. So why don't you write them? And if you want art, use an AI to illustrate them for you... Heck, train the AI base on my work if you want. I won't complain. But please stop hoping that I will use your idea someday. You'll only be disappointed. I don't work that way. I only work with a handful of collaborators. People I know, I trust and vibe with.


2) I'm sorry you misunderstood. But he never was the main character. I was writhing him as a force of nature, claiming woman left and right, unstopable. But the protagonist was Rey. She was the one living through it. Fighting it at first and was starting to even help. I was hoping to show her struggle a bit while sharing her master with Rose, Ahsoka and Leia... It's not always clear since I don't write my story as a first person POV, but that's how I approach these things. It's Rey's story. I don't think I could write it as Chewie's point of view.


Right now, things have changed. Chewie and Rey aren't together anymore and want to explore around a bit. I established Poe, Finn and Jannah are working together. They probably sleep together too, but I went with the Ewok story for that chapter (again a story about a woman surrendering to a furry alien... I might have a kink) . In the future, I want to show what's happening between Rey and Ahsoka (that's the next issue), I also need to establish if Chewie is getting better (I honestly don't know yet) and how they plan to rescue Rey (the ewoks might comeback for that)... and somehow, I wish to bring Malla and Lumpy into the mix because I think it would be funny. Yet, I have NO clear plans for any of it. At the moment, the end goal is for Rey and her son to go back in Chewie's arms someday... But nothing is fixed in stone. Things might change again.
 
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1) There's no Gargoyles Comic... there might be someday, when I do, IF I do, I'll use my own idea. Your ideas are decent. It would be a fun read, and I truly believe that I would enjoy them quite a bit. So why don't you write them? And if you want art, use an AI to illustrate them for you... Heck, train the AI base on my work if you want. I won't complain. But please stop hoping that I will use your idea someday. You'll only be disappointed. I don't work that way. I only work with a handful of collaborators. People I know, I trust and vibe with.


2) I'm sorry you misunderstood. But he never was the main character. I was writhing him as a force of nature, claiming woman left and right, unstopable. But the protagonist was Rey. She was the one living through it. Fighting it at first and was starting to even help. I was hoping to show her struggle a bit while sharing her master with Rose, Ahsoka and Leia... It's not always clear since I don't write my story as a first person POV, but that's how I approach these things. It's Rey's story. I don't think I could write it as Chewie's point of view.


Right now, things have changed. Chewie and Rey aren't together anymore and want to explore around a bit. I established Poe, Finn and Jannah are working together. They probably sleep together too, but I went with the Ewok story for that chapter (again a story about a woman surrendering to a furry alien... I might have a kink) . In the future, I want to show what's happening between Rey and Ahsoka (that's the next issue), I also need to establish if Chewie is getting better (I honestly don't know yet) and how they plan to rescue Rey (the ewoks might comeback for that)... and somehow, I wish to bring Malla and Lumpy into the mix because I think it would be funny. Yet, I have NO clear plans for any of it. At the moment, the end goal is for Rey and her son to go back in Chewie's arms someday... But nothing is fixed in stone. Things might change again.

1) I’m sorry, I wrote the message wrong, I didn’t want to ask you to do the comic with one of those ideas, I was curious to know what did you think about those ideas.

2) Interesting, well, if bring Malla and Lumpy into the mix, at the end you can have Rey as a slave to Chewbacca and his family. He can go back to Kashyyyk to train and ask his family for help and maybe you can only introduce Malla just as Chewbacca’s mate and not wife and justify as a custom Wookiee to subdue strong women in the marriage between two Wookiee, maybe involving any children to use also Lumpy. And a curiosity, given how you wrote Chewbacca and Wookiee, can 3 Wookiee submit Ahsoka?
 
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1) I’m sorry, I wrote the message wrong, I didn’t want to ask you to do the comic with one of those ideas, I was curious to know what did you think about those ideas.

2) Interesting, well, if bring Malla and Lumpy into the mix, at the end you can have Rey as a slave to Chewbacca and his family. He can go back to Kashyyyk to train and ask his family for help and maybe you can only introduce Malla just as Chewbacca’s mate and not wife and justify as a custom Wookiee to subdue strong women in the marriage between two Wookiee, maybe involving any children to use also Lumpy. And a curiosity, given how you wrote Chewbacca and Wookiee, can 3 Wookiee submit Ahsoka?
hahaha! I don't know, Doubtful but maybe... ( edit: I misread that, I though you asked if 3 wookies could submit to Ashoka... but either way I don't think it will happen)

The first path would have brought them on Kashyyyk right after claiming Ashoka and then Leïa... And you would have learned that, despite having been shown as a force of nature all this time , Chewie might not have been considered a very powerful Wookie there. There would have been a challenge for his claimed harem... and yes claiming concubines would have been a very established tradition in their society. A symbol of status.

All of this could still happen after I reunite them. But right now I'll be happy to do just that. I don't want to plan this series too many issues in advance. I don't want to get bored by it again... I receive so many message about it, I know you guys will never let me close this series for good, so I might as well try to enjoy the discoveries :p
 
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hahaha! I don't know, Doubtful but maybe... ( edit: I misread that, I though you asked if 3 wookies could submit to Ashoka... but either way I don't think it will happen)

The first path would have brought them on Kashyyyk right after claiming Ashoka and then Leïa... And you would have learned that, despite having been shown as a force of nature all this time , Chewie might not have been considered a very powerful Wookie there. There would have been a challenge for his claimed harem... and yes claiming concubines would have been a very established tradition in their society. A symbol of status.

All of this could still happen after I reunite them. But right now I'll be happy to do just that. I don't want to plan this series too many issues in advance. I don't want to get bored by it again... I receive so many message about it, I know you guys will never let me close this series for good, so I might as well try to enjoy the discoveries :p
I meant if 3 of them can break Ahsoka, I was imagining Ahsoka being double penetrated by Chewbacca and Lumpy, with Malla, in front of them, holding her head, forcing her to lick her pussy, that like the dicks, emit the same substance of which you wrote in the first issue.

Interesting, because, if subduing two Jedi and Leïa wouldn’t be enough to raise his status on Kashyyk, what else should he do?
 

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I cannot seem to get the game to start. No errors pop up either. It just refuses to boot up. Anyone have any ideas as to the cause of the issue or have any solutions? Any help is appreciated.

EDIT: The folder I had the game in had a name that was too long. It worked fine once i moved it elsewhere.
 
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Fuckit

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Chewbacca:
"Hey look! I subdued two powerful Jedi and a senator!
Random Wookiee:
HAHAHA
To be fair, he would have been considered weak BEFORE showing up on Kashyyyk with three force users ; P But yes. If I had continue with this storyline, it is an issue I would have failed to take in consideration... Thanks for pointing that out!
 
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Hi people!
I make the three girls (Fox, Elisa and Demona), submissed.
Try you too:

Growl 3x
Yap 8x
Growl 2x
Yap 2x
sniff Fox's pussy, let it go and sniff Elisa's pussy, let it go (make it 3x)
sniff Fox's pussy, rip pant and sniff Elisa's pussy, rip pant.
sniff Fox's pussy, lick her pussy and sniff Elisa's pussy, lick her pussy (make it 3x)
Turn on Tv and change channel to sadomaso movie.
Turn on radio
Push then close
Growl 1x
Jump on their back
play fight with Fox and let it go
play fight with Elisa and let it go
Turn on radion (again)
Jump on their back
play fight with Fox and submission hold
play fight with Elisa and sumission hold
Rip top's demona
Rip botton's demona
sniff demonas's pussy many times, untill appear the lick her pussy option
sniff demonas's pussy, lick her pussy
sniff demonas's ass, lick her ass
play fight with demona and submission hold
if demona don't lose the fight, Growl more and try play fight with her again.

Ok, bye everyone
lmao his only message.
 

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is there a way to use the tv or music when you're alone with elisa ? i found some pictures in the archive what made me curious (i.e. the one she watches porn and the one she lights the fireplace full nude) - i think maybe it was an idea what was dropped or there is/was another version ?
 

Fuckit

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is there a way to use the tv or music when you're alone with elisa ? i found some pictures in the archive what made me curious (i.e. the one she watches porn and the one she lights the fireplace full nude) - i think maybe it was an idea what was dropped or there is/was another version ?
It's been a while so my memory is fussy... but I think it was something I wrote but that Khronoss never coded in, and I never caught it.
 

guiseppe

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yes, kinda - just realized this is from back 2018 and also noted completed - there are so many ideas sleeping in there i would have wished to be continued... so thanks anyway for sharing, this one was fun and motivated quite for replaying; another kick is the limited time. I stumbled into it by accident, it was highlighted on hentaiunited, so i am a little late; i guess this game could have been tagged as dating and maybe simulator as well. And i like the living room soundtrack, pretty cool
 
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