VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Love Update Steam] [The Typist]

[fbass]

Fantastic update

 

[the.creator]

If I can get more legitimate anylizations like this, it’ll definitely help me as I go on from here. Being a first time dev and coding as I go, I can see why the story moves much faster than intended. You’re right about that. Now that I’ll have more time to work on it, I hope to eliminate any chances that events seem to happen too suddenly.
The whole “I hate ntr so blah” type of comments don’t really help me much in terms of evaluating the game. Thank you for your feedback, I hope to work on that aspect of the script writing now.

Agreed about too quick stuff they said before. But anyway, the game is pretty cool, keep it up, man.

And there is some advise: check about cam focus in DAZ. Or if you photoshop stuff later, you'd better blur the background and make some focuses on acting characters.
Waiting for another update, good luck!

 

[TheTypist]

I was actually looking into this, as it would really make the scenes much nicer I believe. Thank you

 

[Chel]

I actually really liked that it got straight to the point.
But that's how i usually like my games so eh.
Good stuff Typist.

 

[Marcus S]

Waiting a android port :3

 

[AnotherLurker]

Needs work. Other people have already commented on the dissonance between how everyone but the MC is characterized and how they respond to the player's choices, as well as the tedium of the Big Black MegaDick of HyperChadism being used to expedite one or possibly several elements of the game's primary genre (alternatively that might just be a fetish thing, but it came across as being awkwardly forced; as though in spite of those involved claiming otherwise that it was, in fact, very important that the stranger was black). What really got to me were the typos, grammatical errors, and general lack of content on anything but the NTR routes.
But this seems early in development, and I'm generally indifferent to NTR if I don't care about the characters involved (it's basically just "extra" content at that point), so I hope things proceed smoothly for the developer.
Speaking of content:

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I was actually looking into this, as it would really make the scenes much nicer I believe. Thank you

Oh, shit, there they are. Were you in a hurry to finish something for people to get interested in? People don't generally go for VNs with excessive dialogue (unless you get an "open" world stats/relationships/events thing going), but you kind of went in the opposite direction here. Dig the art, and I have to congratulate whoever's responsible for making an MC who visibly, but subtly puts off that unmanly vibe that makes him easy to see as a cuck, but also as someone who could potentially find his balls with a little help from the player. The body language and facial expression really seemed to catch that. Best of luck moving forward, @TheTypist.

 

[TheTypist]

Thank you for the wise words @AnotherLurker , you evaluate deep into the games core and I respect that. I should make it clear for many that I don’t want the game to be super serious. I wanted some sort of realism in certain situations, but if saying that meant people would go in expecting some Christopher Nolan type writing and scripting, I would have said “please enjoy my porn game, it is not meant to be taken too seriously.” But in the end, it’s my very first game. I’m much much younger than most other devs, and I enjoy that others are actually digging into the games core as it will help me become better later down the road. Yeah, their are some who I feel come to these threads just to kink shame, but I’ll be watching carefully over that as I want to keep a positive conversation going with both sides of the spectrum.
As for the typos, I agree with you, and because it’s only a 0.1.0 release, it’s to be expected but not always welcomed. I could say I’ve seen much worse, but I’m not one to excuse it either. I’ll try to improve it in every release and be more consistent in my writing
Thanks again for your evaluation and even taking the time to play

 

[juneba]

Roughly how much content is there at the moment?

 

[AnotherLurker]

Thank you for the wise words @AnotherLurker , you evaluate deep into the games core and I respect that. I should make it clear for many that I don’t want the game to be super serious. I wanted some sort of realism in certain situations, but if saying that meant people would go in expecting some Christopher Nolan type writing and scripting, I would have said “please enjoy my porn game, it is not meant to be taken too seriously.” But in the end, it’s my very first game. I’m much much younger than most other devs, and I enjoy that others are actually digging into the games core as it will help me become better later down the road. Yeah, their are some who I feel come to these threads just to kink shame, but I’ll be watching carefully over that as I want to keep a positive conversation going with both sides of the spectrum.
As for the typos, I agree with you, and because it’s only a 0.1.0 release, it’s to be expected but not always welcomed. I could say I’ve seen much worse, but I’m not one to excuse it either. I’ll try to improve it in every release and be more consistent in my writing
Thanks again for your evaluation and even taking the time to play

Hey, no worries. This early in development it's easy to take a closer look and think about what you're about to post.
That said...balancing humor, lightheartedness, or 4th wall breaks with a genre like NTR is either going to be difficult, disingenuous, or possibly require you to abuse the MC a little. I'm a firm believer that almost anything can be written well enough that some people will enjoy it, but also that nothing can be written so that everyone will enjoy it. But I digress: you're clearly a consumer as well as a producer of content, and seemingly a conscientious one at that. I have to wonder about your choice to put

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foot forward, but time will tell whether it was a choice you'd repeat.
I don't usually say to this to developers who include NTR content, but I look forward to seeing what your game and your develop(...er? developing?) career will bring in the future.

 

[TheTypist]

Roughly how much content is there at the moment?

I wouldn’t say too much, it’s an ntr focused game so really just ntr content at the moment and a little intro to the love but mostly scripting on that portion as again, fair warning, it’s mostly an ntr game. Yes it can be avoided but it’s in such an early stage (.0.1.0) that if ntr isn’t your thing, I’d wait a bit.

 

[dunloprobert]

well i know it's not everyones cup of tea, and judge me if you want to?
but i for one like interracial sex, especially a black guy on a white girl ! i like the contrast against the usual white guys, and anyway the typist has said that there will be other guys in the game, so hopefully there'll be something for everyone.
admittedly maybe he could take a bit more time advancing the sex scenes, but on the other hand he needs to get the ball rolling, setting up sexual situations and potential sexual relationships helps to do that, remember this is not real life it is just a game, a mostly ntr sex game at that and getting down to the nitty gritty early on hopefully means that he can give players what they want at the start and then pace things out better in the coming updates.

 

[KyoriKusagami]

I wouldn’t say too much, it’s an ntr focused game so really just ntr content at the moment and a little intro to the love but mostly scripting on that portion as again, fair warning, it’s mostly an ntr game. Yes it can be avoided but it’s in such an early stage (.0.1.0) that if ntr isn’t your thing, I’d wait a bit.

@TheTypist, Sorry if i was rude before, but you need to tell to the non-NTR players this game is NTR focused and not optional (problably 90% content is NTR), so i didnt downloaded and i didn't complain in my previous post

 

[TMoney2017]

so the MC gets no play... your gf is a whore..... and everyone but the MC gets his dick wet..... im done with this game

 

[Scorpead]

so the MC gets no play... your gf is a whore..... and everyone but the MC gets his dick wet..... im done with this game

this is always the case in a ntr game
always a black guy. a loser mc that cant get any pussy. hot wife that cheats. so whats new?

 

[Darth Sidious]

Not sure what people are talking about, do we have complaints about NTR in a thread belonging to a game clearly tagged with NTR? :tf: It's like going to church and saying the bible is stupid and demeaning.

 

[Darth Sidious]

I do have a question for Dev though: If you go for Lust Points only, does that mean the girl grows less interested in you in the end (As in opposite of Love Points)? Or does that mean she will sleep with other men in addition to the protagonist (Merely being sexually liberated, but still keep sexual interest in the protagonist with less romantic interest)?

 

[juneba]

I wouldn’t say too much, it’s an ntr focused game so really just ntr content at the moment and a little intro to the love but mostly scripting on that portion as again, fair warning, it’s mostly an ntr game. Yes it can be avoided but it’s in such an early stage (.0.1.0) that if ntr isn’t your thing, I’d wait a bit.

Oh I'm down with the NTR, i meant time wise about how long is the gameplay thats available atm.

 

[TheTypist]

Oh I'm down with the NTR, i meant time wise about how long is the gameplay thats available atm.

Depends on how fast you can read but I honestly have no clue in terms of minutes sadly haha

 

[TheTypist]

I do have a question for Dev though: If you go for Lust Points only, does that mean the girl grows less interested in you in the end (As in opposite of Love Points)? Or does that mean she will sleep with other men in addition to the protagonist (Merely being sexually liberated, but still keep sexual interest in the protagonist with less romantic interest)?

Much more like being sexually liberated. I have plans, and I think it’ll turn out really well for both characters and their relationships

 

[raito7]

Great work, it will be one of the best!