VN - Ren'Py - Because I Love Her [Part 2 NTR Update] [The Typist]

This game is awful the reason why I hate NTR is it so often poorly done. For example the roommate who is in love with the MC supposedly forever gets irritated because a waitress hits on you then sucks a random dude in the washroom despite being a virgin.

How is that remotely believable? Not even in pornland does that make any logical sense. Then the GF gets excited because of rando black man (of course) and instead of blushing and being shy acts like a slut and flashes him. Then later enters a shower and masturbates,. Just awful like the game doesn't have to be shakespeare but don't insult my intelligence with this garbage by pretending these women are shy wallflowers in love with the MC.

Literally the MC is supposed to be surrounded by delicate flowers but instead they are just sluts. You literally get the impression if you say one wrong thing these sluts will sleep with the nearest guy next to them with zero buildup. That isn't NTR that's just them being whores. Like is the character supposed to even be upset? Plus there is zero non NTR content written it basically just skips to next scene.

1/5

This game really fell into a poor path. Also failing to provide much choice in later updates. On rails and not a very entertaining train ride.. Shame because it was such a great start. Possible save, it's still early days, but damn the last update was a huge let down and took a long time.

The demo was fun to play. Very beautiful characters and dialogues. I can see where this game is going with more choices being implemanted. The rendering is good aswell. Maybe a bit short for now, but the story could end up being very good

My Update rating of Because I Love Her [Love Update] is;

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Good Script
+ had a nice Plot
+ Makes you want to play for hours
+ Different Paths (for those not into NTR)
+ Fast Pace in the Game (No Bullshit)

Cons:
-None

Conclusion:
This love update was great,I,m glade i didnt have to see the scene again where The guys ends getting shot, would have love to see all four getting it on in the bedroom, and not that short scene in the living room.
Overall a great Game with every bit worth the download.
Still 5 stars in my book.

it seems like a really good project, if it delivers on what the demo seems to go for, it will be a really good swinging/ntr/vanilla game.

the dialogue starts funny and wallbreaks a lot so if you don't tale it too seriously (as you should a renpy h-game) the better.

Review Version: V1.0 DEMO

art 7/10: Not a bad start and I actually like it. It's a standard static background with moving character & it works, but since the dev choose this kind of style it need a lot more facial expressions than other formats, the truth or dare game was a lot better that the gym scene that seemed a little static. We already seen the characters in several games, but they are hot so, who F. cares?:closedtongue: Another thing that i think it miss is a little animation, even the 2/3 images sequence, that the static background kind of VN desperately asks for it.


story 7/10: it is suppose to be a 6/10 kind of story you rich, move to new city, new friends yada yada yada, we already read it 100000000000000 times but a +1 cause the swinging ntr sharing environment (plus i had a boner so i know it's working). But I have some complaining to make both story and writing wise. First, the thinking stuff, i never know who is thinking till i read what it sais.

Second I think is a lot better to know the personality of a character through scenes not from a narrator and such
Third and last but not least, and this one is purely personal, it's kind of weird to start "swing" at 23, it feels kind of unnatural, if it was something between 28 to 33 will be more plausable. if i think about them so young i see this in my mindokerFace:


Sound 0/10: Just farts, but that's probably me or the doggo


Overall 7/10: Nice start, it's a little short for a demo but, it's not the usual "one dick to rule them all" kinda of game :eazyHype: and it can go into depth, from your personal harem to your personal nightmare & anything in between. Good luck and good work to the dev. I definitely want to see more of it & hope to see it soon.