VN - Ren'Py - Because I Love Her [Part 2 NTR Update] [The Typist]

3/5 Stars
Reason to as why:
Ok, so don't get me wrong, this game has beauitful female characters, but there's just so much wrong in this game, for example the NTR route of the game, i get that it's supposed to be like the "cheating" path and all but it all just seems way too rushed rushed like how the MC's fiance gets all "horny" when you explain to her the dream that you had (where she gets fucked by the black guy) and then she goes to the gym which then leads her to go have a shower and then all of a sudden as if it was magic or some bullshit the black guy walks in on her, doesn't even say sorry or anything he just walks in and decides to fuck the MC's fiance without her having any issue with it whatsoever.. I mean, cmon.. surely I'm not the only one who laughed at how stupid that scene was..

Conclusion: If you're someone who likes NTR I'd either way suggest you avoid it in this game.. It's just not developed as good as it could have been, sadly.

Overall this game definitely holds a lot of potential and I personally do recommend you give this game a try.

Edit: I changed my mind, I give it a 2/5 simply because of how bad the NTR route of this game is, read the reviews below mine to get a more in depth detail on how bad it really is, in general what I'm trying to say is that the story feels so unrealistic and the NTR is terrible, the only good thing about this game I'd say is that the characters are pretty damn hot, oh and on top of everything that I said I'd also like to say that there should be more options to choose inbetween dialouge, like there's this one scene where (i forgot her name) this girl takes her top off completely revealing her boobies and the MC asks her something along the lines of "uhmm.. are you going to put your shirt back on" and I think she said something like "do I have to" and then I was like in my head *well no shit.. I'm soon to be married to my fiance therefore I don't want to see another girl naked* but nope.. the MC simply replies by saying "I suppose you're fine" Like bitch please.... no she's not fine.. I should be the one who decides whether it's fine for another woman to be naked infront of me or not

Please read: Don't hate if the grammar or spelling is bad, I wrote this as fast as possible, I didn't even read through it but yeah I just wanted to get my thoughs out to ya'll, probably no one's gonna read this but hey, whatever <3
Have a wonderful day you perverts <3

Amazing update, story is getting better and better. Probably now one of the best NTR games on this site. Really hope the Dev is able to hit his goal and start pumping out regular updates. Game has grown immensely from last year where to start we had minimal renders and no animations. Where now we have numerous high quality renders and multiple animations per update. The dev is still growing as a dev and it shows, he is listening to his fans and great at communication. Now if only more people were able to support him we would have monthly updates and the potential of this game being the best or one of the best NTR games on the site.

10/10 This is one of the best games of its kind (NTR).

There is great buildup in the storyline - not too fast and not too slow. The story is also not predictable (in a good way).

Female artwork awesome, especially Claire and Olivia. It's great you can select the name of some characters; wish more games allowed that.

This is what makes it a 10. There are some weaknesses as with all these games in continuity, dialogue, story, etc., but the NTR + Claire is worth it a hundred times over.

Future updates, the love/lust system is not too intuitive. Personally not too interested in the Jenni angle but is fine. An Olivia angle would be nice.

Another misuse of the NTR tag. This is willing cuckold. Hot wifing. Sharing. Etc.

The stats are convoluted. The two main girls have corruption and lust, but I still don't understand what exactly we are aiming for. The same stat means different things for the two girls. For the wife, corruption is pointing to the cuckold direction. So what if you want to corrupt her but keep her to yourself? Well there was one choice in a dialogue that moves all the corruption into love if you want to avoid encouraging her to get fucked by others. So whats going on with the stats after that?
**Edit: After I posted this I remembered there was a dream sequence early on that might have been the on/off function for "NTR" stuff. I am not sure if thats true though because I only did one playthrough.

For the best friend Jenni, corruption looks like it leads to you cheating with her on your wife, with possibly threesome and stuff later. Love I have no idea what it does. This girl already likes you but the choices that increase love are the ones where you ignore her and try not to cheat on your wife which leaves Jenni disappointed.

1) Horrible pathing
2) Not true NTR
3) Uninspired dialogue
4) Mediocre renders
5) Stop using Liam in these roles plz.

Meh...

edit2: OK after reflecting for a couple minutes again, I may have been harsh about the pathing issues. Reading the dev notes on first post, I suppose what happens is your early choices in the dream sequence and the choice wife makes the first time at the gym will turn NTR on or off. Also, I might have also been harsh on the NTR tag misuse because this site doesn't have cuckold or hot wifing tags (come on F95zone, lets distinguish NTR and cuckold. Its very different).

Added one star to the review since the dev is obviously going for the willing cuckold narrative but that tag doesn't exist. He should clarify on dev notes and overview that it is this type of "NTR" though.

I kinda knew what I was expecting early on from this game but I said "What the hell?" anyway. First and foremost the characters are ok, with the exception of Jenni and her red haired friend(Forgot her name). Other than that this characters aren't memorable whatsoever.

Like seriously I knew how predictable this game would be when I first saw the Liam, the typical Black guy who conveniently shows up in almost every game and cucks everyone.

My real gripe is with these Devs who try to reel in other crowds from different genre's by saying one thing and doing another. For instance, there are several games on this site that feature these "Love Routes" and "NTR routes". The problem there is majority of those games are pro NTR, there's always far more , detailed and well thought out content on the NTR paths whereas the "Love" paths come off as generic and bland. It's like the Devs put more way more time and effort in perfecting the cuck routes and it shows up doing the updates.

My true problem with these type of games is that there's the same recycled material over and over again.

"Woman was a sweet, kind, ordinary woman and housewife/girlfriend until ONE DAY... she saw another man's COCK and turned into a mindless, insatiable slut".

"The MC is hung but nooooooo she wants to fuck a guy with a 18 inch missile between his legs, while the MC looks on.

draws (cg): good... but could be better.

story: easy to follow.

characters: i already forget them.

gameplay: meh, is ok.

music: is ok.

scenes (erotic ones): they are really hot.


conclussion: the story is simple (almost dull) the characters are forgettable, the choices are kinda useless
( i feel this could be a movie and that would work better)
but it works, at least for a while.


psdt: i made this rewiev on chapter 4.

10/10...

I really have to do the review of this game, because I think that this is the best game that I have played here at F95zone alongside with Alansya Chrorincles. This is my first review, and what can I Say?

The game is awesome, it has new types of showing how amazing can be NTR, CUCKING, and this type od fetishes The renders are just awesome, the characters, the dialogues, the decisions, everything, is perfect. And the story is not the typical girl getting corrupted as always, it is really a deep one, and the author shows it perfectly (SPOILER: the never have i ever scenes are 11/10 hope you can enjoy it).

Waiting for the new updates

Writing is just terrible. No matter your choices, dialogues stay the same and force you on a single path. I liked the background story and characters but that choice in the writing is pretty retarded and dumb and makes your choices insignificant.

PROS
- Good renders.

CONS
- The most incoherent story I've ever seen on F95zone.
- Music is terrible, lower the volume asap.
- The blowjobs look like the dick is smashing into the top teeth of the women, it's terrible.
- I'm a fan of ntr and cuckold content, but none of this game is a turn on. The developer should go read some ntr & cuck stories on the web to learn how to write this kind of content.
- I see too many developers make the mistake of adding too many characters. Don't add too many characters unless you're a master writer. Start simple with a main protagonist, supporting character and an antagonist, that's it. Once you master that, then add maybe one more supporting character.

Spoiler Alert.

I was actually excited about this game after reading the reviews about it. They were love/hate witch in my book means that the story delivers strong emotions.
If you´re looking for WTF you got it here but it is the "makes no sense" kind.
The games best scenes are strong. Good cgi, good porn and nicely written. They just dont make any sense in sthe story. Youre BF is a prude never been kissed kind of girl: a girl doesn't go from that to BJs in a public restroom. Just because you say to your GF that its ok if she looked at another guy, shes not gonna let him penetrate her in a communal shower (really mixed showers in a gym?). A girls "lets do something wild" idea inst BJs in glory-holes... And then the gun, the hospital scene... Don´t get me wrong i think its good ideas but you need build up, you need corruption... You see corruption as a stat in porn games but it´s a real thing.. You don´t go from zero to cum showers in a night. What about the GF and BF? They are too damn inocent. Is this a hentai fantasy? I´m lost.
Some games seem long with a lot of recycled images but when something happens you know why. Just a thought.
I see potential here. Let´s see if the Typist realizes it.

Besides the renders, i can't find anything good about this game. Just an incoherent mess and actions that make absolutely no sense.

"OMG, I like him so much!" - "I like you too and i'm interested in you romantically, but Abigail is such a lovely name." - " I can't believe you just said that! Now I'm gonna blow this guy i just met, despite the fact that i was just described as a shy virgin".... basically.

In my opinion the real NTR is that someone you love have a feeling for another one but not you. That's not you done something wrong. Just the girl you love have a crush on the other even if you're already the couple. That's why I love the ending of Chapter 3 love route. It crushed my heart but I felt bliss at the same time. That's the best NTR game that I like most. I will be pleased to see in future the fiancee can't be satisfied with the love she already had so she cheat on you. It will be the best suffering and pleasure to see that Claire the fiancee and Jenni the best friend have sex with another men when you chose to be faithful.

PS: Yeah... The behavior of main characters including John and Jenni in NTR route was quite ridiculous... shooting somebody for no reason... sucking a stranger's cock just for jealousy... That's really out of John's and Jenni's character...

Everyone who likes a good story and believeable characters. Stay away from this game. They need a good amount of rework.

The renders are good, so if you just want to fap on some pics, this game is something for you.

Pros:
- Renders

Cons:
- Unbelievable characters.
- Cliché story over 9000 (The bad black man who forces you into stuff.)
- No real story build up. (From shy to sucking cock in a few days.)
- Typos, but this can happen.
- 3 to 4 months for a short update (This point does not affect the review.)

I'm going to give 2 stars because of the renders.
I hope the dev is going to rework the story, then I'm going to change this review.

This is probably the best NTR game out there... which is, unfortunately, not to say that it's a good game in it's own. While the cuckold part of the game is pretty well done, with both parties more or less willing to explore the fetish, the other notable plus being good renders, the game lacks in pretty much any other field.

The corruption side of the game is ridiculous, with the MC's GF transforming from a loving, faithful and rather shy person, to a whore deepthroating the dude she saw in a gym in a spawn of a day. I know you're allowed to take liberties with logic since it's a game, but come on. The game also offers you an illusion of choice - you can choose between going full cuck, normal, fetish free path, and something in between.

But if you wanted to escape the fetish part of the game, you're in for a surprise as the game downright ignores your choices and follows the NTR storyline anyway, which I suppose is not that big of a deal, since no one actually plays these games for the non-fetish content, and it's not like the game has any story capable of carrying it outside of the fetishes it offers.
As I said earlier, the game also offers a middle path with the couple staying in the fantasy part of cuckolding, steering more towards exhibitionism, path I personally was pretty excited about, but as of the current version it has a rather bitter ending, with MC underperforming and leaving his GF unsatisfied, which will probably lead to the complete NTR path anyway, to my dismay.

In summary, the game offers pretty good cuckold content but nothing above that. If NTR is your cup of tea, you'll probably enjoy the game, if not - you won't find anything worthwhile here.

This is my Because i love her review, version 2.1(chapter 1 and 2), based in my experience with visual novels

1 – Graphics(9/10): Good art design, Female characters have good proportions and male characters have good looking, but penis size is unrealistic that's why i take one point.
2 – Gameplay(7,5/10): Simple gameplay, you just decide which route(love or lust) you want to walk, through the options showed between the dialogues, but have some bugs in the love route that makes the narrative confuse
3 – Script(8/10): A nice script with good dialogues and an interesting plot about the MC testing the boundaries of your fiancee and discovering if he really wants to marry her or not(maybe he losing her or not). I take two points because the corruption of Claire is too fast, even i knowing she has own fantasies, the script presented her as a shy person, so i think she opened her mind a little too fast. So i think the pace needs to be work on it
4 – Sex Scenes(8/10): Great sex scenes themselves, mainly the narration showing the female characters thoughts in the scene, but because the fast pace, the impact is low and it just left good faps

Final(8.1/10): Good game with strong potential, but gameplay needs fixing and the story pace needs work too to not look like an artificial or forced scene.

I'm a fan of NTR and this game revolves around it. The characters are believable and the narrative constantly leaves the imagination running with what will happen next. Everything you think will happen does happen and more. If NTR is the goal 10/10!

Rewriting my review just based on how the game has been going in the past year. This had incredible promise to be one of the better NTR/cheating games on the site, with an interesting story and beautiful models. Unfortunately, there has been so much inconsistency with the updates, an obvious lack of vision from the dev, and poor execution that I think it should just be avoided for now.

I think this is a great starting point for the game
-good graphics ,plot and script
-fan of NTR as a main focus of the game
-i hope for the future the NTR/Cuckold keep focusing on both protagonists' POV as it's been so far in the 1st chapter
-models look good but i think jenni looks weird in some poses
really looking forward to more

This is one of the most solid ntr games I've seen thusfar. eh I really like the humor involved, and the choices thusfar are pretty neat. really appeals to my tastes overall.

looking forward to seeing what more comes of this, I have high hopes.

It is one of the rare NTR/cuckold games - that's why I gave 5 stars. Graphics is not ideal but pretty good. Author promised to update it fast and regularly. Story is not perfect either but I hope for the best.