VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Become a Rock Star [v1.01] [Mr Jet]

What can be said about this, except - Sad, bad and dreadfull.
Forced and unintersting story + dislikable characters = disaster. Seems like somebody tried to writte a story about topic he have no much clues about. On top of that - unavoidable content.
Some models looks nice, renders are quite acceptable, but not enough to interests one to play this game if one is not fan of cheap sex, which is there just because this is adult game and there must be some sexual content. No build up, but hey there are some boobs and some sex. Come on...
Bottom line, extract cg's, some of them are only things worth of your time from this game. Don't bother yourself with rest of it.

Version reviewed: 0.04

Plot:
It´s awesome, I like the band thing. I liked this thing in Melody and there too.

Renders and animations:

Renders and animations are so good for me. Great quality, great paced and no needs more frames like some games(but more games than it should be).


Characters:
All characters are different and i like it. There is variety, physically and mentally different.
I like how the game goes with everyone.
I like that in the future we would see at least a threesome or something like this.
I would like that u could bang your sister or your father assistant Nicole (who is not his assistant anymore) and Lisa´s roomate.
And of course a exclusive relationship with Emma, whith an optional way of spice it up like sharing her or threesome or something like that.

I think Jade remember a bit of Melissa from Acting Lessons but i guess she escaped from that terrible final update and came here looking for a good one.

Gameplay:

It´s good. Maybe a bit focused on Lisa but is good to see that would be some troubles if you fool around.


I think the game is pretty decent but we still have to wait too see it it ends in a good manner or makes a mess like other games did.
I hope u continue with this quality (or even better).
I don´t give five stars almost never But u deserve it (at least for now XD).

Being in an amateur Rock Band myself, I took immediate interest in this game. At the first updates, it was a fairly interesting game with only a few spelling mistakes and some other minor nuisances. But as the updates kept coming, this game became more and more competent. At this stage, [v0.4], it is a really promising game and one of my favorite ongoing games on the site, and so, I feel it deserves a review already.

Pros: Beautiful models and awesome animations; Interesting characters with distinct personalities; Intriguing plot revolving the life of a young aspiring musician and his struggles to gain independence from his tycoon father, who is obsessed in steering his son's life away from his dreams.

Cons: Persistent inconsistency regarding the main character's instrument; sometimes being called a guitar, and others, a bass, while the object is still the same (a guitar).

Note: To achieve the classic rock sound which is presented in the story, it is required for a band to have drums, one bass, and one or more guitars. So, for a group with four elements to function properly, there should be one drummer, one bassist, one or two guitarists. The vocalist could also play an instrument, whichever one you feel would be more appropriate.

A beautiful and intriguing story.

Everything about this VN is masterfully crafted. From an engaging story with a lovable cast, to renders with insane quality and smooth animations. You can feel the love and care of every single one of the pieces that make up this tale.

The female cast is insanely attractive with personalities that hook you instantly and makes you want to see more of them. From the beautiful nympho neighbor, to the sweet band members, passing by the cute boss, and ending in the unavailable sister and her simply amazing co-worker. The sheer quality of this characters makes the decision of which ones you want to focus extremely difficult.

The writing is excellent, with a simple core narrative but with a multitude of threads that allow a lot of speculation until resolved. The dialogues feel natural and easy to read, complimented with perfectly crafted renders that highlight the character state of mind.

This is the kind of VN that will be remembered and used as a standard of quality. Truly a gem.

And if you think I'm overhyping it, play it. You won't regret it. It rocks.

This game is so freaking great. The girls look hot af. The story is quite unusual if you compare it to the rest available. It's easy to keep up with the game and how it progress. The MC also is not a total asshole, another thing that is sweet about this game.

Just hope that we will be able to see more of the same quality that this game has provided us with thus far.

First time writing a review here.
A true gem. The renders are exceptionally beautiful. The only game that is on par with the graphical quality that comes to mind is Milfy City.
The other details about the game are well done as well. Background music is good, there are even moaning sound effects etc. Animations are nice, though as will probably always be with these games, seem a little robotic (still better than most, but compared to the high quality picture renders, they are not that great).
I felt that as of 0.4 there is a fair bit of content. The game will definitely not blueball you, if that is something you would be afraid of.
Finally, the writing is exceptional. The dialogues feel nice and flow well. The characters are fleshed out and it might be the first game, which made me actually feel bad about cheating on one of the girls.
Also a beautiful mother+daughter redhead combo... just this alone would make me give the game 5/5.

Truly, something of a masterpiece so far.

Almost every aspect of this game shows an uncommonly high level of competence in the production. The renders, the background music, the writing, everything that really gets you hooked on a game and makes you keep playing has been polished to a mirror like sheen. Simply put, this game is a joy to play.

That's not to say everything is perfect; some of the renders of the girls early in the game aren't on par with the later ones, but thats a small price to play. Well worth playing and spending some time with.

One of the most criminally underrated games on this site. Everything about this game is handled with perfection in mind. Amazing soundtracks coupled with stunning renders and great writing. The characters display realistic motivations. The story makes you feel truly like an upcoming indie rockstar, just starting your long journey to fame.

I know I'm a little late hopping on the hype train, but better late than never, huh. CHOO MFing CHOO!

Lisa, Anna and Julia are definitely top 10 babes out of all r34 games. Lisa and Anna best waifus, they both of course get their own save and then another for male slut (;

Story is great, renders are some of the best I've ever seen, music is awesome, there's even a cute cat who knows if you have been cheating on Lisa. What more can you want from a game. Top 3 game at least if not the best. 11/10

This is a game i can play again over and over, several routes based on the girls.
Incredible girls, great story.
Awesome renders, good amount of content currently at V 0.35.
Selena & Jane favorite girls.
Cant wait for next update!

Please dont get me wrong about my rating

The game is suprisingly enjoyable for v0.3
-Good looking girls
-Simple but effective storyline
-Keep me waiting until completed version

P.S : I rate this based on the game version (for me is 5/5). Keep it coming

Every aspect of this game is awesome, i really love the character renders and it has some animations as well. The story is straightforward enough. The erotic scenes are varied, the poses look natural (and hot!!!), the camera angles are all great and the animations range from above-average to great.

Story 5/5
Renders 5/5

What to say about this master piece. Every aspect of this game is truly mesmerising and awesome. Character development and story pacing is well done.

Lisa and Jane are truly one of a kind. Lisa provides a homely, innocent girlfriend feeling whereas Jane, the nymphomaniac, provides an adventure.

Amazing animations!!! , great girls and well written.. easy to fall in love with any of the girls , lisa is great na unique , one of the best games here for sure..
For this one i will keep my eyes on future updates, Congrats Mr Jet this one will be a masterpiece.

excellent game with excellent renders games on a nice pace no lag and a curious story which is quite engaging about a rebellious son who rebel against his cooperate father to become a musician overall looking forward to its continuation need more games like these

v0.35
Plenty of beautiful girls and women in this game. the render quality is superb and it has some animations as well. The writing is quite serviceable for a porn game.
The story is straightforward enough: rich, handsome boy wants to become a rock star without help from dad's money, dad being a manipulative bastard who doesn't know when to quit... That is it really.

So many women and girls in this that I worry a bit about further developments being either one sided, aka focused on 1 or 2 girls or the story becoming a mess because of all the possible variables with whom the MC will date/fuck. I kinda hope the dev throws the sister in the mix as well even if that makes the story possibly even more garbled.
Time will tell, but I recommend giving this game a try in the mean time.

I played this game back at launch and again now: the renders and animations are really good, models are gorgeous and the "become a rockstar" plot is a fresh one, in this genre at least, AFAIK. I would like to give it 4 stars 'cause there is some real effort behind this game, but what keeps it from going to the next level IMHO is the writing.. at the beginning was just Engrish, now it looks like it's been translated by someone who knows English but has little knowledge of how human beings communicate. Almost every dialog sounds unnatural to me and that really breaks my immersion.. if you just care for fapping material though this is a really great game.

This is one of the best renpy games on the site and not just because it delivers regular meaty updates instead of "reworks" to milk patreons . The renders are amazing and the story offers options and it's well written. Every "waifu" has beautiful design and you will find yourself trying to juggle them all (duh) to see all the scenes available. This even fits the MC thematically , being a young rockstar the "harem" lifestyle is not too far fetched. All and all an excellent project so far.

Enjoyed it a lot. Potentially it seems it will have a couple of main storylines possible. Not as punishable as some games, so you have less regrets about making mistakes. Pretty renders and models and potentially an interesting story with possible twists

Great game from a great creator. This is the 1st game i've ever played created by MrJet. It may be his only game but he does not let you down.

Great content, great artwork, plot/story, animations, and likable characters. And the characters are so beautifully created.

I love that one of the characters comes off as an obsessed nymphomaniac whom you've just met. I also love that it's related to being a muscian, being a Rockstar and you have a band of friends.


I personally recommend this game to those who look for quality gaming experience with a great story. This game has already become one of my favorite games just that quickly and I have played quiet a bit. It's something fresh and it doesn't drag. It keeps you intrigued with each choice that you make. There are no games out like it, so you all should check out MrJet game and thank him for his hard work that he puts in with each new update that he brings to us. He surely deserves a reward for this wondefull creation that is Become A Rock Star.