HTML Become Someone [v1.53] [Volen]

[Vln_]

How to unlock Alice path?

You must go to the toilets at university until some text show "You hear strange noises coming from one of the stall" click on it. Then come back later and you'll have a new text saying that you hear noises again. After that she will give you her SexApp idea, you'll be able to use it to get her address. Go in the street and you'll then see a new location "Alice's home" then enjoy!

 

[bitchyguy98]

At university, I wanna sit with Jade and it says 'Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<link>> ' under Fuck them at the end of the lesson and 'Error: child tag <</linkreplace>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<linkreplace>> ' under Go back. Why? Or what can I do?

 

[Vln_]

At university, I wanna sit with Jade and it says 'Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<link>> ' under Fuck them at the end of the lesson and 'Error: child tag <</linkreplace>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<linkreplace>> ' under Go back. Why? Or what can I do?

I will update the online version to fix the problem and also publish an hotfix here since the update is leaked everywhere anyway. Will mention you again when I'm done fixing it

Edit: Online version containing a patch for that specific error has been updated see:

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or download the file here:

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[cklaubur]

When training in the gym with Jade and she rips her leggings, if you offer to buy her a new pair, she says "Really? You would do that for me? Wow Mr. PC.eyecolor eyes, aren’t you sweet?"

Looks like a variable name is peeking through.

EDIT: Looks like the variable name also appears when you give her the new leggings as well.

 

[bitchyguy98]

You must go to the toilets at university until some text show "You hear strange noises coming from one of the stall" click on it. Then come back later and you'll have a new text saying that you hear noises again. After that she will give you her SexApp idea, you'll be able to use it to get her address. Go in the street and you'll then see a new location "Alice's home" then enjoy!

I did that and there's no "Alice's home"

 

[ParadigmShift]

sasuke112 Stumbled upon a bug in your coding. The basement BDSM content never trips because of the following line of code:
(line 1395 for me in the latest hotfix html)

<<if $mom.loc is "Kitchen" && $quest.basement is 0>>

because the check is case-sensitive, and mom.loc is always set to "kitchen" (lower case) and never "Kitchen"

Edit: which I now see is unfinished/future content

Edit again: And if you ignore your sister at dinner, the resulting picture of your mom is
ENORMOUS

Also it seems the quest.lucyclass content never trips either because the variable is never set to 1 to advance the line

In fact the if statement surrounding the entire section is flawed.
You go:

If dom > sub, then .....
else....
else if has.metlucy = 1 & quest.lucyclass = 1, then
    if dom > sub, then...
    else...
elseif....

The stack order will never let it get past the second check.

 

[Vln_]

sasuke112 Stumbled upon a bug in your coding. The basement BDSM content never trips because of the following line of code:
(line 1395 for me in the latest hotfix html)

<<if $mom.loc is "Kitchen" && $quest.basement is 0>>

because the check is case-sensitive, and mom.loc is always set to "kitchen" (lower case) and never "Kitchen"

Edit: which I now see is unfinished/future content

Edit again: And if you ignore your sister at dinner, the resulting picture of your mom is
ENORMOUS

Also it seems the quest.lucyclass content never trips either because the variable is never set to 1 to advance the line

For Lucy you have to send her the notes after you went to class with her. For the rest you're right going to publish an hotfix in a few minutes.

I did that and there's no "Alice's home"

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When training in the gym with Jade and she rips her leggings, if you offer to buy her a new pair, she says "Really? You would do that for me? Wow Mr. PC.eyecolor eyes, aren’t you sweet?"

Looks like a variable name is peeking through.

EDIT: Looks like the variable name also appears when you give her the new leggings as well.

Thanks for the report that shouldn't happen in the future that was relative to the fact that sometimes I miss those in the docs the writer sent me but now he is highlighting them.

_____

Will publish an hotfix for all the problems mentionned here and the problems that I noticed during my little recent exploration of the game for bitchyguy98



EDIT: ONLINE VERSION UPDATED:

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, download link of the hotfix:

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Will publish a new archive in like an hour I have a really bad connection.

 

[ParadigmShift]

For Lucy you have to send her the notes after you went to class with her. For the rest you're right going to publish an hotfix in a few minutes.



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Thanks for the report that shouldn't happen in the future that was relative to the fact that sometimes I miss those in the docs the writer sent me but now he is highlighting them.

_____

Will publish an hotfix for all the problems mentionned here and the problems that I noticed during my little recent exploration of the game for bitchyguy98



EDIT: ONLINE VERSION UPDATED:

You must be registered to see the links

, download link of the hotfix: Mega

Will publish a new archive in like an hour I have a really bad connection.

Just looked at the hotfix. I understand quest.lucyclass maybe is supposed to be set to 1 when you send her the notes. Im saying the variable is never set to 1 at any point in the code. Its initialized to 0, and checked to see if the value is 1, but it's never set to 1.

Also, this one is on me since I was editting my post when you quoted it, so in case you missed it:

...
In fact the if statement surrounding the entire section is flawed.
You go:

If dom > sub, then .....
else....
else if has.metlucy = 1 & quest.lucyclass = 1, then
    if dom > sub, then...
    else...
elseif....

The stack order will never let it get past the second check.

 

[Vln_]

Just looked at the hotfix. I understand quest.lucyclass maybe is supposed to be set to 1 when you send her the notes. Im saying the variable is never set to 1 at any point in the code. Its initialized to 0, and checked to see if the value is 1, but it's never set to 1.

Also, this one is on me since I was editting my post when you quoted it, so in case you missed it:

I tried so I can tell you that it works



Edit: mybad you weren't talking about the same thing, yes you're right will publish a fix
Edit2: online version updated with a fix that should fix that problem

 

[Crazygamer43]

Op: Updated !

 

[Vln_]

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Thanks a lot

 

[Vln_]

Just looked at the hotfix. I understand quest.lucyclass maybe is supposed to be set to 1 when you send her the notes. Im saying the variable is never set to 1 at any point in the code. Its initialized to 0, and checked to see if the value is 1, but it's never set to 1.

Also, this one is on me since I was editting my post when you quoted it, so in case you missed it:

Could you tell me if it's working for you too now? I think I fixed it.

 

[bsjfan69]

This is pretty bad. It's like the most generic low effort html porn game imaginable. Throw in some porn stars, make the player grind out some normal day to day interactions like having breakfast or going to class, and suddenly sex happens because oh yeah this is a porn game. Of course it comes with the complete lack of polish, balance and content.
At least the English isn't terrible.

 

[ParadigmShift]

Could you tell me if it's working for you too now? I think I fixed it.

The variable is being set properly now. However, the whole if/then statement regarding interaction with lucy in class is still janky and inverted. The way its coded, it will never get to the quest.lucyclass check.

<<if $mc.dom > $mc.sub>>
<<linkreplace "Ask for a little demonstration">>She seems to be surprised by your request <<speech "Lucy">>Now? But the others students are going to arrive soon<</speech>>
She seems a bit hesitant
<<speech "Lucy">>We can't do that here for sure... but... I think that there is a way... follow me<</speech>>
[[Follow her|lucyclassscene]]
<</linkreplace>>
<<else>>
You blush from your lewds thoughts
<<speech "Lucy">>Look at that cute little blush. I feel like I’m talking to a shy little boy. Let’s see what the big boy thinks…<</speech>>
[[She starts touching your crotch|lucyclassscene]]
<</if>>
<</linkreplace>>
<<elseif $has.metlucy is 1 && $quest.lucyclass is 1 && $lucy.corr >= 10 && $lucy.trust >= 10>>
You enter the class, Lucy notices you and she moves her bag to let you sit. You exchange pleasantries.
<<speech "Lucy">>I feel guilty asking you that much while you don't get much in return...<</speech>>
<<if $mc.dom > $mc.sub>>
[[Tell her that there is a way to balance the scales|lucyclassscene2]]
<<else>>
Lewd thoughts flood your mind, you think of the time she sucked your cock... you get a boner.
<<speech "Lucy">>At least your big boy has the guts to tell me how he wants to be rewarded! Follow me<</speech>>
[[Follow her|lucyclassscene2]]
<</if>>
<<elseif $has.metlucy is 1>>
You sit next to her, nothing special happened

I'm super oldschool with just a text editor, don't have a fancy coding GUI like yours, but I think that should be readable.
The statement will always fulfill lines 1-12 of what I quoted, and never advance past it, so lucyclassscene2 is unreachable. Just need to reorder the sequence. It's inside the "sitlucy" passage.

And I found a new bug. The check for jadeclasscene, inside the "sitjade" passage, is also impossible to reach since the if statement is misordered and outside the rest if/then statement.

I'm sure my attention to detail has to be getting irritating at this point

 

[bitchyguy98]

Thank you

 

[Vln_]

The variable is being set properly now. However, the whole if/then statement regarding interaction with lucy in class is still janky and inverted. The way its coded, it will never get to the quest.lucyclass check.

<<if $mc.dom > $mc.sub>>
<<linkreplace "Ask for a little demonstration">>She seems to be surprised by your request <<speech "Lucy">>Now? But the others students are going to arrive soon<</speech>>
She seems a bit hesitant
<<speech "Lucy">>We can't do that here for sure... but... I think that there is a way... follow me<</speech>>
[[Follow her|lucyclassscene]]
<</linkreplace>>
<<else>>
You blush from your lewds thoughts
<<speech "Lucy">>Look at that cute little blush. I feel like I’m talking to a shy little boy. Let’s see what the big boy thinks…<</speech>>
[[She starts touching your crotch|lucyclassscene]]
<</if>>
<</linkreplace>>
<<elseif $has.metlucy is 1 && $quest.lucyclass is 1 && $lucy.corr >= 10 && $lucy.trust >= 10>>
You enter the class, Lucy notices you and she moves her bag to let you sit. You exchange pleasantries.
<<speech "Lucy">>I feel guilty asking you that much while you don't get much in return...<</speech>>
<<if $mc.dom > $mc.sub>>
[[Tell her that there is a way to balance the scales|lucyclassscene2]]
<<else>>
Lewd thoughts flood your mind, you think of the time she sucked your cock... you get a boner.
<<speech "Lucy">>At least your big boy has the guts to tell me how he wants to be rewarded! Follow me<</speech>>
[[Follow her|lucyclassscene2]]
<</if>>
<<elseif $has.metlucy is 1>>
You sit next to her, nothing special happened

I'm super oldschool with just a text editor, don't have a fancy coding GUI like yours, but I think that should be readable.
The statement will always fulfill lines 1-12 of what I quoted, and never advance past it, so lucyclassscene2 is unreachable. Just need to reorder the sequence. It's inside the "sitlucy" passage.

And I found a new bug. The check for jadeclasscene, inside the "sitjade" passage, is also impossible to reach since the if statement is misordered and outside the rest if/then statement.

I'm sure my attention to detail has to be getting irritating at this point

Nothing irritating. Tbh we should have reworked the class quest for this update but due to a lack of time from my time I postponed it to the next one. I will rework this one during the week end and everything will work fine. The release will also contain new content and 3 scenes.

This is pretty bad. It's like the most generic low effort html porn game imaginable. Throw in some porn stars, make the player grind out some normal day to day interactions like having breakfast or going to class, and suddenly sex happens because oh yeah this is a porn game. Of course it comes with the complete lack of polish, balance and content.
At least the English isn't terrible.

So, I understand your point completely. But you have to understand that with a team of 2 people with already add the maximum content we can in each update. The game will slowly be less and less grindy and we will improve and rework the old quests one by one to adapt to the new versions. We have to work that way to answer both type of people that play the game: those who just want to see porn and those who want us to make a story and add non-porn content like the ability to work etc... we are doing our best at the moment and will expand the team so we can deliver more content. I expect that in a few updates the game will be to your liking. Thanks for your review.

 

[randoMcDuder]

Ok, first impressions of V0.4 as someone who hasn't seen it before. An HTML game with real porn and no sissification is a massive plus in my book. In terms of content, right now there are 5 main girls which have a few sex scenes (4 kinda cause Kate still is lacking significant content outside of getting a BJ if you are good at swimming), and 4 side girls with at least 2 sex scenes. Corruption is a plus, the mention of pregnancy content is a huge plus, and there seem to be more fetishes on the way (Pregnancy and BDSM are mentioned in game, but there isn't content for it yet).

As for the gameplay loop, it isn't super complicated, but it is on the tedious side. Class, socialize with girls, train stats, homework if you got it, raise girl corruption, rinse and repeat. The map layout isn't super intuitive, so the shortcuts on the left side help. As for the grind, it isn't super tedious, it is just very repetitive and that is where the tedium comes from. There are no mini-games, thankfully, but you often need to grind a girl's corruption/trust or your int/strength for several in game days. The in game systems are not fully explained, for example, homework has varying difficulty, and you would think your intelligence stat would have something to do with it, but not only is the difficulty random, but your int seems to have no effect on it. Strength seemingly serves no purpose other than for one scene with Kate (if you can swim or not) and Jade (if you are strong she flashes you in the gym before her pants rip). So it seems your character stats are solely for triggering scenes... and so is a girl's trust... and her corruption. But at the same time you have a dominant/submissive stat, a sex experience stat, and a porn addiction stat. The sex experience stat seems to be related to impressing Alice with your sexual prowess, but the other two do seemingly nothing for game progression. Porn addiction only seemed to unlock more genres of porn to view at your desk.

As for how the gameplay flow feels, it isn't intuitive how much a girl's stats need to be increased. For example, your sister goes from being upset with you trying anything, to a complete incestuous slut after about 5 corruption points, yet she gets angry if you try to go into the bathroom before 15 corruption. Meanwhile, the classmates all took about 10-20ish corruption for blowjobs to start being an option. There is a progress tab on the left and it tells you the girls' stats and what to do, but it only tells you vaguely what to do, instructions for buying pants for Jade are fine, but when the instructions are to raise corruption/trust, a definitive threshold of what to raise it to would be nice. Corruption gain should be smoother as well. I was surprised at how quickly I could get the incest scenes, but for the classmates it was a grind. Direction as to what to do is very limited, and a "To Do" tab or improving the progress tab so that it tells you homework and tasks for the girls would be helpful.

As it is right now, the best I can give it is a 5/10 solely for how much video there is. Definitely a lot of room for improvement and the promise of pregnancy has me keeping an eye out.

 

[Vln_]

Ok, first impressions of V0.4 as someone who hasn't seen it before. An HTML game with real porn and no sissification is a massive plus in my book. In terms of content, right now there are 5 main girls which have a few sex scenes (4 kinda cause Kate still is lacking significant content outside of getting a BJ if you are good at swimming), and 4 side girls with at least 2 sex scenes. Corruption is a plus, the mention of pregnancy content is a huge plus, and there seem to be more fetishes on the way (Pregnancy and BDSM are mentioned in game, but there isn't content for it yet).

As for the gameplay loop, it isn't super complicated, but it is on the tedious side. Class, socialize with girls, train stats, homework if you got it, raise girl corruption, rinse and repeat. The map layout isn't super intuitive, so the shortcuts on the left side help. As for the grind, it isn't super tedious, it is just very repetitive and that is where the tedium comes from. There are no mini-games, thankfully, but you often need to grind a girl's corruption/trust or your int/strength for several in game days. The in game systems are not fully explained, for example, homework has varying difficulty, and you would think your intelligence stat would have something to do with it, but not only is the difficulty random, but your int seems to have no effect on it. Strength seemingly serves no purpose other than for one scene with Kate (if you can swim or not) and Jade (if you are strong she flashes you in the gym before her pants rip). So it seems your character stats are solely for triggering scenes... and so is a girl's trust... and her corruption. But at the same time you have a dominant/submissive stat, a sex experience stat, and a porn addiction stat. The sex experience stat seems to be related to impressing Alice with your sexual prowess, but the other two do seemingly nothing for game progression. Porn addiction only seemed to unlock more genres of porn to view at your desk.

As for how the gameplay flow feels, it isn't intuitive how much a girl's stats need to be increased. For example, your sister goes from being upset with you trying anything, to a complete incestuous slut after about 5 corruption points, yet she gets angry if you try to go into the bathroom before 15 corruption. Meanwhile, the classmates all took about 10-20ish corruption for blowjobs to start being an option. There is a progress tab on the left and it tells you the girls' stats and what to do, but it only tells you vaguely what to do, instructions for buying pants for Jade are fine, but when the instructions are to raise corruption/trust, a definitive threshold of what to raise it to would be nice. Corruption gain should be smoother as well. I was surprised at how quickly I could get the incest scenes, but for the classmates it was a grind. Direction as to what to do is very limited, and a "To Do" tab or improving the progress tab so that it tells you homework and tasks for the girls would be helpful.

As it is right now, the best I can give it is a 5/10 solely for how much video there is. Definitely a lot of room for improvement and the promise of pregnancy has me keeping an eye out.

We took great notes out of your long and complete review (which helps a lot to understand what people want to see and what they expect us to change/improve. I can't promise everything that all you mentionned will be improved for the next update but most of it is already in the way of getting changed. We can't tell you exactly what and when but you can check the trello for more informations.

The scenes access conditions and which quests are supposed to be done first etc... isn't implemented completely yet. Why? Because there isn't enough content for the moment so everything as the same conditions (corr and trust) to be accessed. Most of the side content like homework and pool, ... is only there to no give you the feeling of an empty game these are also going to be reworked in the future.

That's also why we are looking for a programmer/coder to help me because it takes a lot of time and as a university student I have a ton of homework on my own for the moment so I can't produce as much content as I would like.

Thanks for the review and we will do our best to give your guys what you are asking for!

 

[haynowjawo]

Jade can get stuck in a loop of thanking you for buying her leggings like it's the first time with no other scenes possible in the gym, any way to fix this?

 

[Vln_]

Jade can get stuck in a loop of thanking you for buying her leggings like it's the first time with no other scenes possible in the gym, any way to fix this?

It's going to be updated this week end, sorry for inconvenience (the scenes are not in the game yet).