Unity Before You NTR [Act 2] [Kink Phone]

[Lizzardcheese]

Has some promise but could have used a few things.

We can't really care about anything because there was no getting to know anybody or if they actually have a good relationship. All we know so far is she doesnt like her bf that much. Would rather have her ex, at least sexually. Without any backstory it doesnt make sense on why she wouldnt dump MC and run back to him. A convo between her and lexi about her cuck/humiliation fetish or anything like that would help.

Why also give us one choice in the beginning and nothing else? It's very much a kinetic novel and is missing that tag.

We dont know why he is staying without the backstory or something. Even with the dumb MC's in most of these at least we see that the MC loves his girl, while they dont like him at all and use him as a cuck fetish.

So a little polish and it could be good. Right now it's just kind of odd anybody is staying together. She doesnt want him, at least thats how it's playing out now.

 

[Darth Sidious]

I have literally no clue what I'm reading, looks like another machine-translated game. I don't know what the MC's relationship is with either girl, they just seem to be flirting with him while one talks about her ex and poking at MC asking what he feels. Unless the English gets better, I won't understand what this game is about.

 

[Oscar Granja]

Nice

 

[Chaoticjustice]

It is a mix of both as the story naturally progresses. You can see that with time it leans more and more into NTR. The basic premise is to start with a naughty game the couple plays, an exploration of a fetish. It looks fast paced, but netorare comes along. So stick around.

Interesting so she's given the freedom to bang around ( I'm assuming it's all she has to do is ask sort of situation) and then she eventually gets bored of that and goes fuck that I'm just gonna do what I want when I want without asking and I'm just gonna cheat.... That's absolutely wild imagine being given that much freedom and being like na it's still not enough

Feel like you've gotta be a real cunt to do something like that and there's definitely a special place in hell for people like that

 

[Dodz1984]

Just played it and honestly I don't understand it. It's a kinect novel with absolutely no choices to be made, there is zero build up. It is not a NTR story like the title says, it is pure NTS. There are some hot parts but all in all o think Lexi kinda spoils it all. For now its not my cup of tea, maybe I'll be able to enjoy it in future releases.

 

[LookerNSFW]

Apparently act 3 is out already.

 

[empatheticapathy]

The way these characters talk is completely unintelligible to me. I straight up cannot understand what they're trying to communicate to each other well enough to stay interested in the game.
It doesn't help that I'm not privvy to their shared history, and that the game makes a LOT of assumptions about the player's reactions and state of mind at any given moment.

 

[asehpe]

Well imagine a future where these game will fill the site cause trust me its already happening while we all sit silently. I have no issues with ai cg but this is low effort stuff.

Sincerely, what's the problem with such a future?

 

[asehpe]

The way these characters talk is completely unintelligible to me. I straight up cannot understand what they're trying to communicate to each other well enough to stay interested in the game.
It doesn't help that I'm not privvy to their shared history, and that the game makes a LOT of assumptions about the player's reactions and state of mind at any given moment.

To me they make quite a lot of sense. True, not the best immortal prose, no new Bard here, but then again that's not what I was looking for. You?