Tyrranus
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- May 4, 2017
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hey Im not in a position to criticize you much, seeing as I dont speak a second language at all, Im just suggesting really try to get a native english speaker to help with this asap. As it is, this reads like its written by a horny 12yr old with no talent. I realize thats harsh, and Im sure you have a lot more skill and talent than that. Its just that as it is, the english is likely to drive potential players(and thus potential backers) away.There is nothing I can do about it, I know that my English is extremely bad, I often look at the dictionary and use deepl to fix it, but unfortunately it is not smooth enough to satisfy a native English speaker, so I understand you.