Corvettezr113

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Ah thank you for saying, could you please throw the bugs you see in the bugfix section on our discord channel, that way I can see where I went wrong.
Otherwise I will have to look at all the codes one by one.
alright, although you can do a replace all for both of them if your text editor supports it. Like :%s/\/Angela/\/angela/g in vim
 

Zirenaz

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Feb 20, 2020
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There's a tag here and it's avoidable content.
I don't understand how you can say that there is no tag without even looking at the tags. There is not even 1 content behind the paywall in the game. everyone who downloads it plays the content they want where is the money trap I don't see much?

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Simple, I look at the tags that matter.
 

MYH.GAMES

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Simple, I look at the tags that matter.
When I updated version 0.3 and added the new tags these also had to be updated and mate, at the very beginning of the game I ask the player if they want to enable this. is this still an issue? I've worked hard for this game, thought about it for weeks and it's annoying to hear that it's a money trap.
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Hercule_Poirot

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That undefined bug also happened to me a while ago, but my solution was just to load another game and avoid the club xD. There's also a bug that if you watch tv at 10AM, when it gets to 11AM you get the option to sleep to continue.
 

MYH.GAMES

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That undefined bug also happened to me a while ago, but my solution was just to load another game and avoid the club xD. There's also a bug that if you watch tv at 10AM, when it gets to 11AM you get the option to sleep to continue.
Look, I'm surprised at this too... I wonder which idiot made this game:sneaky: I fixed the tv bug, but I still haven't found the nightclub error, I promise I'll fix it.
 
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LightCanadian

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Jun 3, 2019
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I don't want to write a review otherwise I'm probably gonna be force to give it a bad score and then forget about changing it in the future but here's a small review...
(Note that even though it might sound negative, i wouldn't waste my energy if i didn't think there was something here)

I somewhat tried both alpha and beta route...
For the beta route:
- There's basically no sex opportunity with the wife. With the first exposition with the relationship with the wife, i though there would be sex, but she's never satisfied kinda plot, but there's just no sex at all...

For the Alpha route:
- Even if you're alpha, there's still the introductory scene where the boss send a dick pict to the wife and though we would have a netorase/hot wife situation, which gave me expectation when nothing actually happen. A reverse netorare could be an interesting plot point where the boss initially attempt something only the get reversed and get humiliated because he can't satisfy her or something...
- You get more wife sex exposition than beta route, but even here it's dry... you can have sex with her in VERY specific situation, which bring me to my next point
- Sex is the only way for "love" to increase, but there's so few opportunity that it become a grind since you need +10 love to proceed and can only fuck her late at night(I literally modified the html file to give more than one love per sex session it was so frustrating)

Other point:
- The player is hella dependent on the walkthrough in the laptop, if i wasn't curious and not check the laptop, I would probably closed the game and never touched it again since i would probably NEVER though of being at certain places at precisely certain specific time for thing to move forward... like... why does the massage need to be on sundays at specifically 13:00...
- There's no indicator of where to go next or where are things available... I totaly forgot that i could see the 2 girls in the morning in their houses during weekends to fuck them...
- There's no indication of where anyone is at any time... you're wife in bed, you go take a shower, come out... and now she's in another fucking dimension for an hour after which she reappear in the kitchen...
- This bring me to the next point... why do the player wake up at 6:00? The only viable thing to do is take a shower(which bring you to 7:00), than breakfast but breakfast is at 8:00, there's a 1 hour gap that you either go to the gym or skip(gym require more click and there's already enough clicking so skipping is the natural answer). Just wake the player at a time where they can go take a shower and then breakfast.
- There's no indication of how much energy action takes, I missed the massage event that happen once a week because i didn't have enough energy
- There's only stats for you and angela, but not for other girls that have love stats
- Why do we have a meter for good and evil? I don't think i have found any event that gave me choice to go in one way or another of the meter?


for now that's all i can think of
 

MYH.GAMES

Member
Game Developer
Dec 1, 2018
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I don't want to write a review otherwise I'm probably gonna be force to give it a bad score and then forget about changing it in the future but here's a small review...
(Note that even though it might sound negative, i wouldn't waste my energy if i didn't think there was something here)

I somewhat tried both alpha and beta route...
For the beta route:
- There's basically no sex opportunity with the wife. With the first exposition with the relationship with the wife, i though there would be sex, but she's never satisfied kinda plot, but there's just no sex at all...

For the Alpha route:
- Even if you're alpha, there's still the introductory scene where the boss send a dick pict to the wife and though we would have a netorase/hot wife situation, which gave me expectation when nothing actually happen. A reverse netorare could be an interesting plot point where the boss initially attempt something only the get reversed and get humiliated because he can't satisfy her or something...
- You get more wife sex exposition than beta route, but even here it's dry... you can have sex with her in VERY specific situation, which bring me to my next point
- Sex is the only way for "love" to increase, but there's so few opportunity that it become a grind since you need +10 love to proceed and can only fuck her late at night(I literally modified the html file to give more than one love per sex session it was so frustrating)

Other point:
- The player is hella dependent on the walkthrough in the laptop, if i wasn't curious and not check the laptop, I would probably closed the game and never touched it again since i would probably NEVER though of being at certain places at precisely certain specific time for thing to move forward... like... why does the massage need to be on sundays at specifically 13:00...
- There's no indicator of where to go next or where are things available... I totaly forgot that i could see the 2 girls in the morning in their houses during weekends to fuck them...
- There's no indication of where anyone is at any time... you're wife in bed, you go take a shower, come out... and now she's in another fucking dimension for an hour after which she reappear in the kitchen...
- This bring me to the next point... why do the player wake up at 6:00? The only viable thing to do is take a shower(which bring you to 7:00), than breakfast but breakfast is at 8:00, there's a 1 hour gap that you either go to the gym or skip(gym require more click and there's already enough clicking so skipping is the natural answer). Just wake the player at a time where they can go take a shower and then breakfast.
- There's no indication of how much energy action takes, I missed the massage event that happen once a week because i didn't have enough energy
- There's only stats for you and angela, but not for other girls that have love stats
- Why do we have a meter for good and evil? I don't think i have found any event that gave me choice to go in one way or another of the meter?


for now that's all i can think of
Thank you
I've been doing a lot of design stuff in the game, I don't use the program the game is made in properly yet, and I have to read the manuals on twine in translation, which doesn't help much because I don't understand how to use the damn widget, Of course, that's entirely my problem.
I'll add a tracker for the characters.
The satan and angel meter is a must, by the way, the progression of the meter reflects angela's current personality.
I need some advice from the players, like you do, so that I can fix things you don't like.
Thanks. I'll work on it.
 

zender332

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I have to read the manuals on twine in translation, which doesn't help much because I don't understand how to use the damn widget ...
I'm sorry to interrupt your conversation (I can't help it, I love interrupting other people's conversations)) ) Have you tried using AI in your work? Chat GPT or DeepSeek? They know a lot about various (popular) programs and can provide advice on programming.
 

MYH.GAMES

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Dec 1, 2018
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I'm sorry to interrupt your conversation (I can't help it, I love interrupting other people's conversations)) ) Have you tried using AI in your work? Chat GPT or DeepSeek? They know a lot about various (popular) programs and can provide advice on programming.
Firstly, I searched some things on reddit and twine's own discord page, but they didn't help much, there were times when I used artificial intelligence, of course, I made some visuals that I can't find now using AI, but I try not to go too far.
Actually, we want to make a game using daz over Ren'py, so we will shape the scenes as we want.
 
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