VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[shazba]

She also lets cum inside of her , so yeah it could have been to late, if she end up having Aids for example.
so yeah, it's either cringe for the soul reason to be cringe , or bad writing. May be both ,a Bad cringe writing,
You use the term of " out of character " but this is no longer relevant to dpc writing, He proved time after time, that what is matter for him is the actual scene to work, and discard any previous character behaviour or personality, for a joke, or a scene to write.

I said it wasn't out of character for her. Every time things get hot and heavy between her and the mc she kinda struggles to stay focused. So for her to not say anything about the condom and even him spraying her internals isn't all that surprising. Of course she later worries, and sensibly gets tested. It's not bad writing just because she didn't do something scientifically logical by your standards.

Also, what examples are there of characterisations being thrown out the windows for a scene to work? I'm sure there are some, but I'm curious since you make it sounds endemic to the story.

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

For a fucking price though, that greedy bitch!

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Imagine if this happening, it would have happened only because of Jill's insistence on getting tested
Jill:
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Poor Jill. She's already on her way to cuckqueen because of Bianca.

Oh, one more thing I want to advise you. You are most likely writing from your phone, you can adjust the size in the image upload settings. Because they get very huge.

Sarah and Becky have a good relationship that goes back in time as hinted in the game. I do not like Sarah much. I do not find her especially sexy nor do I like her personality much. And her ass is as dull as they come. But yes, I also prefer her to Becky.

She is a bad girl, cynical, straightforward, hedonistic. I understand that not everyone likes it.
As for the asses, it's clear that Camila, Quinn, Zoey and Sage have the best.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

For which girl in BaDIK would this not apply?

 

[Lovetities]

Damn, people are really going all out on a virgin girl lmfao. There is nothing strange if a rich girl from higher social class ask you for sti test. (Especially if that girl has zero knowledge about sex and think first time is supposed to be like fairytale) Also, Jill was always silly and vanilla (for example when she tries to cheer up fuckface during tennis match). I am not exactly fan of Jill cause she is way too vanilla and her plot is least interesting for me. Jill not knowing that Bianca has crush on fuckface is not surprising since she sucks at reading people. For eg- She should have known Josy was fuckface ex when they meet at Library or Bella is fucking fuckface on the side(considering Fuckface staying with Bella). Jill is always extremely naive. (She is not street smart like Quinn) even, if I am not Jill fan but that banana outfit was hilarious af and is better than that weird looking bee outfits tbh.

 

[shazba]

As for the asses, it's clear that Camila, Quinn, Zoey and Sage have the best

I don't know about this. Zoey's glutes are glorious, followed up by Cammy's rippling rump. But Quinn and Sage? Sage's ass looks ready to sag, and Quinn looks like she's got nothing going on back there at times, even Sally would give her a run for her money in that department.

I love Sage and Quinn's characters, but Sage is one weird looking, gangly, chicken legged bitch. And Quinn could convincingly be post op trans.

... Sorry, I don't know where that came from!

 

[ChipLecsap]

Jill didn't get fuck over its just part of who she is both the good and bad. I find Jill more likeable off her path but she not fully to blame for that she doesn't know how to act in a relationship not bad for a LAMMF

You can pinpoint accurately can see when her character became a total different person then who she previously was.


from this point on, she became a mentally undeveloped person, in a 21 years old of body. it's like that movie with Jennifer Garner, 13 Going on 30, when a 13 years of girl, wake up the next day, as a grown adult woman, except her brain is still a 13 years old girl. That is Jill since episode 6. but yeah truth to be told, she was very consistent on this behaviour, until episode 9 and the "off Jill path ".

 

[BorgiaBou]

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This week I wrote dialogue and posed static renders.
I've estimated that I need to pose ~1000 renders for the scenes I have currently written. I have plenty of scenes left to write on top of that. But, based on the episode 9 render count, I believe the writing is over 50% done at this point.
1449 static renders have been posed, of which 100 are waiting to render. Static renders should be somewhere around 29-36% done.
I will likely work on writing and static renders in the upcoming weeks.
I have only posed a handful of SFW animations these last few weeks, so there is no news in that area. At the moment, I have 60 animations waiting to render. Animations are still hovering around 50% completion.


Poll news

The special render poll ended today and the winner is Zoey. She will receive a special render set dedicated to her in episode 10 alongside Sage.
Thank you for voting! That's it for the special render polls for episode 10.
This weekend, a cosmetic poll for Josy will start. Sign up as a +$10 patron to participate.

Have a nice weekend

Dr PinkCake

One update per year, one update per year...

 

[Takkatakka]

We found the Maya fan

Oh, yeah, we did.

All of the girls have some kind of issue, that is why they are interesting. Ironically one of the biggest fan favorites here also has probably the most issues: Quinn.

And the second point is just objectively true, if you want a decent game finished inside the next 2 to 3 years, also exhibit A:

One update per year, one update per year...

 

[Turki 10]

Poor Jill. She's already on her way to cuckqueen because of Bianca.

Oh, one more thing I want to advise you. You are most likely writing from your phone, you can adjust the size in the image upload settings. Because they get very huge.

Thanks first for the advice. Secondly, I think this would be bad. I think this could really destroy Jill, so I would prefer to avoid it.

 

[Darkwen]

You can pinpoint accurately can see when her character became a total different person then who she previously was.
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from this point on, she became a mentally undeveloped person, in a 21 years old of body. it's like that movie with Jennifer Garner, 13 Going on 30, when a 13 years of girl, wake up the next day, as a grown adult woman, except her brain is still a 13 years old girl. That is Jill since episode 6. but yeah truth to be told, she was very consistent on this behaviour, until episode 9 and the "off Jill path ".

While at this point Jill takes a hard turn I don't think she knows how to handle an adult relationship thats becoming sexual. Jill try to break free of this in 8 and 9 ( on Bella path) when she stands up for herself because she had enough of Tybalt and when she confronts Bella

 

[Darkwen]

This weekend, a cosmetic poll for Josy will start.

better not fuck this up

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Thanks first for the advice. Secondly, I think this would be bad. I think this could really destroy Jill, so I would prefer to avoid it.
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You're welcome.
I love to see world burns, so I'll try the Bianca's fruit.

I don't know about this. Zoey's glutes are glorious, followed up by Cammy's rippling rump. But Quinn and Sage? Sage's ass looks ready to sag, and Quinn looks like she's got nothing going on back there at times, even Sally would give her a run for her money in that department.

I love Sage and Quinn's characters, but Sage is one weird looking, gangly, chicken legged bitch. And Quinn could convincingly be post op trans.

... Sorry, I don't know where that came from!

Oh, it looks you, like me, notice bad renders, and they come across. Especially in animations. Periodically, her ass looks too big and bloated, periodically normal.

Spoiler: DAT ASS

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I didn't notice anything terrible with Quinn. The only ugly asses in the game is Ashley, and you know... Madame.

 

[der123fer]

And Quinn could convincingly be post op trans.

 

[Darkdevil66]

You're welcome.
I love to see world burns, so I'll try the Bianca's fruit.

Oh, it looks you, like me, notice bad renders, and they come across. Especially in animations. Periodically, her ass looks too big and bloated, periodically normal.

Spoiler: DAT ASS

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I didn't notice anything terrible with Quinn. The only ugly asses in the game is Ashley, and you know... Madame.

Dude, he's an Aragog fan He actually finds the Spider Abomination attractive. You know the Lolo Ferrari look alike bimbo with balloon boobs, cartoonish curves and more flashy colors than fucking a wall tagging :

No wonder why, he finds a girl with a normal body like Sarah unattractive.

 

[ChipLecsap]

I said it wasn't out of character for her. Every time things get hot and heavy between her and the mc she kinda struggles to stay focused. So for her to not say anything about the condom and even him spraying her internals isn't all that surprising. Of course she later worries, and sensibly gets tested. It's not bad writing just because she didn't do something scientifically logical by your standards.

Also, what examples are there of characterisations being thrown out the windows for a scene to work? I'm sure there are some, but I'm curious since you make it sounds endemic to the story.

I said, the term of out of character, regardless if it's out or in.
as for some example let see. Hmm, everything about Jill as I explained, MC himself, with the Sage rebound Guy, talk , which doesn't work in any kind of context. Lily, who give free blowjob to a non Dik affinity character, but later on she prefer the dik affinity. You have to have Dik affinity to kiss her for her hell week task for example.
Quinn and the whole hard drug storyline was retconned, for the benefits of vinny.
Josy, who is flip flopping between Dik and chick, depending of the scene.
Zoey who is a total different person in episode 9, but somehow in her own episode we didn't really see this character growth. of course she is more liked now, She was way better in ep 9.

these are just a few, but I admit, the whole game is not living rent free in my head like it used to be. The point I made, is DPC willing to, disregard previously estabilished things, just for a sake of a plot twist or to give us curve ball, like the Affinity system, that kicks in when you not expecting, and ignor, everything you did before.

 

[DanMotta]

I don't know about this. Zoey's glutes are glorious, followed up by Cammy's rippling rump. But Quinn and Sage? Sage's ass looks ready to sag, and Quinn looks like she's got nothing going on back there at times, even Sally would give her a run for her money in that department.

I love Sage and Quinn's characters, but Sage is one weird looking, gangly, chicken legged bitch. And Quinn could convincingly be post op trans.

... Sorry, I don't know where that came from!

I think Quinn looks good over all. I like small tits and small ass, not everything needs to be big. Like Bella, I think she is ugly as fuck. Those huge milky cow tits do nothing for me lol.

But one thing I don't like about Quinn is something between her shoulders and head. DPC either made her shoulders too narrow or her head too big. I couldn't put my finger on it yet.
But overall she is a cute. If Quinn was a trans, she would be 100% perfect. As a fan of lyssa in FL, I'd love Quinn even more lol.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

Yes, she is definitely interested.
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Damn she's hot, why isn't she a side girl yet?

I wonder if that's a "Nora". A character you think will appear only once and will appear sometime in the future. It looks like too much effort went into one character for one silly scene. But on the other side DPC looks like he can afford to waste time and resources is silly scenes like this that have no future repercusions...

 

[AchedCroissant]

Zoey who is a total different person in episode 9

This is normal because many people change over time.

but somehow in her own episode we didn't really see this character growth.

She spent 8 months in San Diego, we saw little of her life there

But practically at the end of the episode she was already totally different from the girl we met at the beginning

 

[Takkatakka]

But practically at the end of the episode she was already totally different from the girl we met at the beginning

It's almost like that was the point of the whole exercise.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Dude, he's an Aragog fan He actually finds the Spider Abomination attractive. You know the Lolo Ferrari look alike bimbo with balloon boobs, cartoonish curves and more flashy colors than fucking a wall tagging :

No wonder why, he finds a girl with a normal body like Sarah unattractive.

Interestingly, in the almost nine months that I've been here, I've noticed that no one discusses Sandy, as if she doesn't exist.
It's ironic that if anyone looks like a trance, it's her.

I wonder if that's a "Nora". A character you think will appear only once and will appear sometime in the future. It looks like too much effort went into one character for one silly scene. But on the other side DPC looks like he can afford to waste time and resources is silly scenes like this that have no future repercusions...

Nora seems redundant to me. Like "Oh look MC, you fucked your next teacher who will teach you science, get ready for problems."
Why is that when we have a much more serious and dramatic line with Bella? There are so many MILFs in the game, I'd rather prefer that STD nurse or one of the dorm girls.