VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Geralt From Rivia]

100% Agree, Jill take a complete 180 turn in episode 6, and became a total different person, and as you pointed out it is funny how, when you are not on her path, or break up with her, she is actually act like her old self from episode 1-5


I think that scene has no other propurse than being cringe. and nothing more.
The thing is, DPC could have done it way more organic, and mature, if for example, in episode 8, Jill ask for a condom, and from that in episode 9, could have lead to a more mature conversation.
But episode 9, was just an another retcon. You basically had a second first time sex with Jill, but the build up, for it was, the new cringe era.
He might not admti it, but I deep down belive, he actually mocking the Jill fandom by making it the path this way. and probably the discord / patreon jill's simp brigade love it, so he can get away with it, becasue they are as dump as Jill who as Geralt pointed out, can't even see that her own best friend try and will fuck her boyfriend .

I'd like to believe this one, otherwise it's simply just garbage writing

This is definitely a mockery of Jill's siymps from his Patreon. They will eat a bowl of shit and drink water from the toilet if DPC offers them such a challenge.
Of course, DPC has a plan for character development and further plot, but it seems that he will not deny himself the opportunity to troll part of the fan base by changing the script for this.

But in this STD, there was a very hilarious moment: when MC tells Derek how he showed his cock to the nurse, when it was not necessary to do so. I agree with Derek, this is the best story.
The nurse liked this look.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

This is definitely a mockery of Jill's siymps from his Patreon. They will eat a bowl of shit and drink water from the toilet if DPC offers them such a challenge.
Of course, DPC has a plan for character development and further plot, but it seems that he will not deny himself the opportunity to troll part of the fan base by changing the script for this.

But in this STD, there was a very hilarious moment: when MC tells Derek how he showed his cock to the nurse, when it was not necessary to do so. I agree with Derek, this is the best story.
The nurse liked this look.

And the nurse was... Interesting

 

[ffive]

She is beautiful (these are subjective tastes), a pleasant face, looks very realistic, not one part of the body does not look hypertrophied.

You're certainly right about it being subjective, beautiful is definitely not a word i'd ever use. I think it might be due to how the textures used for her model don't seem to match the rest of the cast very well. In many renders she winds up looking awfully airbrushed and more noticeably artificial. But perhaps that's what people perceive as pleasant and beautiful.

Becky is an arrogant and toxic bitch who asserts herself at the expense of others and engages in bullying.
You will tell me: wait, but Sarah was doing the same thing! She treated Maya badly!

No, i will tell you: that's exactly how Sarah acted with Mel, when they spent their entire time with MC bickering which of them deserves his cock more and whose ass looks better. Her most pressing concern was to make it all about herself and to make her excessively high opinion of herself known.

I didn't think much of Sarah before Ep.9 but afterwards? The less i see of her, the better.

 

[Neyragrat tsaL]

I don't know the crowd from Patreon that much, but I'm pretty sure the poll will end up like this:

1. Zoey

Poll news

The special render poll ended today and the winner is Zoey.

Called it

 

[KАRАMBA]

No, i will tell you: that's exactly how Sarah acted with Mel, when they spent their entire time with MC bickering which of them deserves his cock more and whose ass looks better. Her most pressing concern was to make it all about herself and to make her excessively high opinion of herself known.

I didn't think much of Sarah before Ep.9 but afterwards? The less i see of her, the better.

For Sarah and Mel, it's just a friendly way of communicating. This only emphasizes their closeness. Close friends in communication with each other can often afford what an outsider may find rude and inappropriate.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

And the nurse was... Interesting

Yes, she is definitely interested.


Damn she's hot, why isn't she a side girl yet?

 

[Takkatakka]

A straight forward character that a lot of people like and again a lot of people like bad girls and there's nothing you can do about it.

We just don't really know much about her outside of being a hedonist. She seems to be pretty happy with herself more or less and for a character in a game/book/movie etc. that makes her just kinda boring, because generally issues are what make characters in fiction interesting.

Damn she's hot, why isn't she a side girl yet?

The game really need less and not more side girls. Every additional "path" or option means that either the development takes more time or every girl that is already in the game will get less screen time.

 

[shazba]

100% Agree, Jill take a complete 180 turn in episode 6, and became a total different person, and as you pointed out it is funny how, when you are not on her path, or break up with her, she is actually act like her old self from episode 1-5


I think that scene has no other propurse than being cringe. and nothing more.
The thing is, DPC could have done it way more organic, and mature, if for example, in episode 8, Jill ask for a condom, and from that in episode 9, could have lead to a more mature conversation.
But episode 9, was just an another retcon. You basically had a second first time sex with Jill, but the build up, for it was, the new cringe era.
He might not admti it, but I deep down belive, he actually mocking the Jill fandom by making it the path this way. and probably the discord / patreon jill's simp brigade love it, so he can get away with it, becasue they are as dump as Jill who as Geralt pointed out, can't even see that her own best friend try and will fuck her boyfriend .

I'd like to believe this one, otherwise it's simply just garbage writing

I don't have a problem accepting that Jill acted differently when she is out of her element. Getting into a relationship and knowing it is leading to sex really put Jill on edge, so it kinda makes sense that she went back to normal if this did not eventuate.

When they fucked in episode 8, Jill was caught off guard at the idea the mc wasn't gonna use a condom. She wasn't expecting it and she was scared to say something. Silly behaviour but not out of character for Jill when she's so self conscious.

Later she asks that they get tested, the fact that they've already fucked isn't grounds for saying it's too late, all the more reason in retrospect to get checked out, now that she's had time to think about it.

In the context of a game, where the mc could be having unprotected sex with girls left right and centre, the same girls who are quite likely to fucking lots of other dudes too, in all likelihood the mc would be riddled all sorts of nasties, but we know he won't be because he has a magic cock. But Jill is like the serious girl in a comedy, real life rules apply to her whereas the rest of the girls live in a fuckfest fantasy world.

You're certainly right about it being subjective, beautiful is definitely not a word i'd ever use. I think it might be due to how the textures used for her model don't seem to match the rest of the cast very well. In many renders she winds up looking awfully airbrushed and more noticeably artificial. But perhaps that's what people perceive as pleasant and beautiful.


No, i will tell you: that's exactly how Sarah acted with Mel, when they spent their entire time with MC bickering which of them deserves his cock more and whose ass looks better. Her most pressing concern was to make it all about herself and to make her excessively high opinion of herself known.

I didn't think much of Sarah before Ep.9 but afterwards? The less i see of her, the better.

It's funny, but it's the other way for me. Sarah annoyed me from the beginning. She was a fairly plain looking girl (both in face and body features) and yet she has this cocky, "I'm so hot" attitude. But I really enjoy her friendly rivalry with Mel.

For Sarah and Mel, it's just a friendly way of communicating. This only emphasizes their closeness. Close friends in communication with each other can often afford what an outsider may find rude and inappropriate.

Yeah I love the Mel and Sarah dynamic.

 

[felicemastronzo]

In contrast, i struggle to understand where Sarah's apparent popularity comes from. She's been pretty average in terms of looks and personality, had minimal presence, and in Ch.9 she acts like a petty bitch constantly trying to one-up her supposed friend. I'd place her on the same level as Becky.

Aesthetically she is one of the most realistic girls, in face and physique. Otherwise she is a 100% bitch, she can be liked

 

[Takkatakka]

What the game actually lacks is one time fucks on the others branch. Every side girl has their own mini-branch and stick around the story. Fuckface on massive DIK status and on others branch would have one night stands with girls he picks up at McAllens for example and then never sees again, they're just not there for some reason.

Because most of those are kinda developing into actual characters, like Lily and Nicole for example. I personally would find pure ons just...pointless. They would add exactly what to the story? More sex scenes in a game full of them? Then rather focus on more scenes with actual characters.

 

[Jumbi]

But episode 9, was just an another retcon. You basically had a second first time sex with Jill, but the build up, for it was, the new cringe era.
He might not admti it, but I deep down belive, he actually mocking the Jill fandom by making it the path this way. and probably the discord / patreon jill's simp brigade love it, so he can get away with it, becasue they are as dump as Jill who as Geralt pointed out, can't even see that her own best friend try and will fuck her boyfriend .

I'd like to believe this one, otherwise it's simply just garbage writing

I cannot quite understand because any author would want to purposedly shit on their own creation. That makes little sense.

She is beautiful (these are subjective tastes), a pleasant face, looks very realistic, not one part of the body does not look hypertrophied. A straight forward character that a lot of people like and again a lot of people like bad girls and there's nothing you can do about it.
I will add on my own that I find straightforwardness a good character trait and you know what to expect from such people, and it’s easier to talk to them.
Becky is an arrogant and toxic bitch who asserts herself at the expense of others and engages in bullying.
You will tell me: wait, but Sarah was doing the same thing! She treated Maya badly!
I will answer that this is not true. Sarah and Maya disagree about life and Sarah rather finds Maya's ideas absurd. In Episode 6 we can see Sarah's opinion on gender research.
She later apologizes to Maya and admits that it was too much.

Sarah and Becky have a good relationship that goes back in time as hinted in the game. I do not like Sarah much. I do not find her especially sexy nor do I like her personality much. And her ass is as dull as they come. But yes, I also prefer her to Becky.

 

[ChipLecsap]

I don't have a problem accepting that Jill acted differently when she is out of her element. Getting into a relationship and knowing it is leading to sex really put Jill on edge, so it kinda makes sense that she went back to normal if this did not eventuate.

When they fucked in episode 8, Jill was caught off guard at the idea the mc wasn't gonna use a condom. She wasn't expecting it and she was scared to say something. Silly behaviour but not out of character for Jill when she's so self conscious.

Later she asks that they get tested, the fact that they've already fucked isn't grounds for saying it's too late, all the more reason in retrospect to get checked out, now that she's had time to think about it.

In the context of a game, where the mc could be having unprotected sex with girls left right and centre, the same girls who are quite likely to fucking lots of other dudes too, in all likelihood the mc would be riddled all sorts of nasties, but we know he won't be because he has a magic cock. But Jill is like the serious girl in a comedy, real life rules apply to her whereas the rest of the girls live in a fuckfest fantasy world.

She also lets cum inside of her , so yeah it could have been to late, if she end up having Aids for example.
so yeah, it's either cringe for the soul reason to be cringe , or bad writing. May be both ,a Bad cringe writing,
You use the term of " out of character " but this is no longer relevant to dpc writing, He proved time after time, that what is matter for him is the actual scene to work, and discard any previous character behaviour or personality, for a joke, or a scene to write.

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

In contrast, i struggle to understand where Sarah's apparent popularity comes from.

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

You're certainly right about it being subjective, beautiful is definitely not a word i'd ever use. I think it might be due to how the textures used for her model don't seem to match the rest of the cast very well. In many renders she winds up looking awfully airbrushed and more noticeably artificial. But perhaps that's what people perceive as pleasant and beautiful.

People can have different tastes, what one likes, not necessarily likes another. I like this type of look in real life (Sarah, Josy, Riona) and judging by the thread, I'm not the only one. Petite, but not flat or fat.

No, i will tell you: that's exactly how Sarah acted with Mel, when they spent their entire time with MC bickering which of them deserves his cock more and whose ass looks better. Her most pressing concern was to make it all about herself and to make her excessively high opinion of herself known.

I didn't think much of Sarah before Ep.9 but afterwards? The less i see of her, the better.

But why? It's just a friendly competition, they both behave this way and I did not notice anything toxic in this behavior. On the contrary, their competition adds to the comedic effect and made me smile. It's funny.

We just don't really know much about her outside of being a hedonist. She seems to be pretty happy with herself more or less and for a character in a game/book/movie etc. that makes her just kinda boring, because generally issues are what make characters in fiction interesting.

There is truth in this, she is not the most interesting character and I only noticed her as a person in Ep 6 when she criticized feminists. Immediately the thought went: "Damn, this little devil is right." But there are characters that are much more interesting, but it all depends on the DPC, if he wanted to reveal Sarah, he would do it and come up with a full-fledged story for her. Many SGs have them.

The game really need less and not more side girls. Every additional "path" or option means that either the development takes more time or every girl that is already in the game will get less screen time.

But I want to bang hot asian nurse!

 

[Turki 10]

Yes, she is definitely interested.
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Damn she's hot, why isn't she a side girl yet?

Imagine if this happening, it would have happened only because of Jill's insistence on getting tested
Jill:

 

[NebulousShooter]

because generally issues are what make characters in fiction interesting.

We found the Maya fan

The game really need less and not more side girls.

Oh, yeah, we did.

 

[Darkwen]

100% Agree, Jill take a complete 180 turn in episode 6, and became a total different person, and as you pointed out it is funny how, when you are not on her path, or break up with her, she is actually act like her old self from episode 1-5

Jill didn't get fuck over its just part of who she is both the good and bad. I find Jill more likeable off her path but she not fully to blame for that she doesn't know how to act in a relationship not bad for a LAMMF

 

[shazba]

She also lets cum inside of her , so yeah it could have been to late, if she end up having Aids for example.
so yeah, it's either cringe for the soul reason to be cringe , or bad writing. May be both ,a Bad cringe writing,
You use the term of " out of character " but this is no longer relevant to dpc writing, He proved time after time, that what is matter for him is the actual scene to work, and discard any previous character behaviour or personality, for a joke, or a scene to write.

I said it wasn't out of character for her. Every time things get hot and heavy between her and the mc she kinda struggles to stay focused. So for her to not say anything about the condom and even him spraying her internals isn't all that surprising. Of course she later worries, and sensibly gets tested. It's not bad writing just because she didn't do something scientifically logical by your standards.

Also, what examples are there of characterisations being thrown out the windows for a scene to work? I'm sure there are some, but I'm curious since you make it sounds endemic to the story.

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

For a fucking price though, that greedy bitch!

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Imagine if this happening, it would have happened only because of Jill's insistence on getting tested
Jill:
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Poor Jill. She's already on her way to cuckqueen because of Bianca.

Oh, one more thing I want to advise you. You are most likely writing from your phone, you can adjust the size in the image upload settings. Because they get very huge.

Sarah and Becky have a good relationship that goes back in time as hinted in the game. I do not like Sarah much. I do not find her especially sexy nor do I like her personality much. And her ass is as dull as they come. But yes, I also prefer her to Becky.

She is a bad girl, cynical, straightforward, hedonistic. I understand that not everyone likes it.
As for the asses, it's clear that Camila, Quinn, Zoey and Sage have the best.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I think it's her DTF attitude. She gives the idea that you can have her anytime and anywhere you want. In a porn game that is likely something the players want to see. You don't have to solve any riddles or navigate a walkthrough to get to fucktown with her.

For which girl in BaDIK would this not apply?